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Title: Too Good To Be True

Excellent story, I enjoyed all of it.

 

Thank you for sharing.

 

Alison

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/14/13 11:30 am
Title: Too Good To Be True

This is a very good story. I'm glad I found it  It seems Derek and Chloe's story will be just as entertaining, since he seems to be holding on to the last player's card.  I don't  why men purchase those things.

 Reviewer: VeMo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/19/13 09:51 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

conservative does not mean racist and sexist. Im conservative and im neither.

 Reviewer: lonieg Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/13 02:55 am
Title: Thank God for Dogs

I really liked the story.  I laughed so hard when her brother stared at him trying to intimidate and he shot them when he said you tell me your  brother likes men.  Too funny.

 Reviewer: VeMo Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/31/12 07:46 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

Wonderful! Very well done! Can't wait for the sequel!

 Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/13/12 03:38 pm
Title: Thank God for Dogs

awesome story ..

 Reviewer: Ashanti. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/22/12 02:43 am
Title: Too Good To Be True

What up with chole and derek? why would he get upset for getting married?  Good story girl enjoy it and did david asked jackie to marry him? Thank for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you wwe!  More of David and Jackie will be featured in the next story in the "chi-town shenanigans" series.  This is the story of Chloe and Derek.  I keep getting sidetracked with other projects.  But, haven't forgotten my friends in Chicago.

Thanks for reviewing!

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/14/12 08:34 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

I loving the new David he showing her that he realy love hers and glad that grannie didn't cut him yet lol. Wonder what Jackie is going to say to him? Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/14/12 08:04 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

Wow he change about dam time lol it good thing it seems he growing up and working on fixing david. thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/14/12 07:42 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

Well I hope David is wearing a cup because he going into the lion cage. I'm glad he quit and told that jackass where he can take his comments where the sun don't shine. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/14/12 07:35 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

Ok when he started crying at that pic with his mom broke my heart. His aunt is right she not your mother and it not his fault that she left once he let that go he able to give his heart to jackie all the way. thank for the update

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/14/12 07:05 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

It sad what David went thu with his mother and his ex but he can't treated women badly because of their mistakes. Jackie is a good woman who no matter what would had stay with him because she love him but no he goes and mess up. Hopeful his aunt can help him out. Thank for the update

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/14/12 06:55 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

So she spend the night at his place that big step for him and he seems to like having her there. But like most men this fool keep something from her. I hope they can work things out. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/14/12 06:45 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

OOO bring on the magic David and something tells me he know alot of good good tricks. Now as for his boss he a jackass and doesn't know what he talking about and hope david or someone put that prick in his place. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/14/12 06:31 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

Boy now that was funny when grannie point that knife at big david scared the crap out of him lol.Nice to see side of david that being nice and leaving her sweet small gifts. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/12 03:41 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

Good she turn him down agian if she didn't she knew she will be in trouble.  It good thing she liten to her grannie and her friends. Hopeful david comes around. thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/12 03:35 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

I think she will but before she does she need to let him know it be with her and her only and have something real or she need to walked away and go be happy with someone who wanted it all.Thank for the update

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/12 03:30 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

oh no that jerk richard heard them wonder what he going to do next? I don't like him and david you have no right to be mad at her because she wants more. She good girl and us good girl wanted more then hot lay so either step up your game or let her go.Thank for the update

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/12 03:17 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

wow well guess jackie won't be going on lunch date with that sexy doctor. I don't think she able to walked after what david did lol. thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/12 03:05 pm
Title: Too Good To Be True

 I like that Jackie teasing David  but like granni says wehn you play with fire you get burnt. Thank for the update

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/12 08:46 am
Title: Too Good To Be True

We about to see bad girl Jackie David better watch out she coming for you. I like how she played it cool her friends right let him chase you. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/12 08:34 am
Title: Too Good To Be True

Wow that was hot hot hot hot looks like David know how to work it in the bed room ok. Need a smoke after reading this chapter. Thank for the update

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/12 08:26 am
Title: Too Good To Be True

It was fun  to see Jackie make David sweat it out lol.  Looks like David wanted little chocolate with his cake. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/12 08:14 am
Title: Too Good To Be True

Wow david ex is real witch has some guts to come to his office asking for money like she some victim in this and she open her legs like a 7-11. Natasha is right not good her cousin falling for him but maybe she the girl to show him the light. Thank for the update

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/12 07:55 am
Title: Too Good To Be True

So it looks like David starting to like Jackie just a little well maybe he need this good girl in his life. His dad it sad they don't have a close bond. Thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/11/12 11:17 pm
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