This story is soo interesting.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2014 03:35 am
really really really missing this story - or your writing style in general (hope that come out right, lol) i don't want to put pressure on you but i wanted to you to know that i hope you are doing better and that i look forward to the day you return because i believe you will!! take care, ioneha!!Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02 2013 05:22 pm
awww man, i can't believe my review didn't appear but anyhow - i've looonged for this update and you sure as hell didn't disappoint!! =D
things got already heated up seconds after Nadia arrived - i'm so glad Aiko was honest and answered Nadia directly when she asked about her father, a quality i hope stays with him throughout the story. looking so so soooo forward to the next update, i know i'm going to looove this story!!
thank you, Ioneha!!
Thanks for the review! I've been meaning to update soon. I miss pondering about Aiko.Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 06:08 pm
I'm a fan of your other work and I was really pleased to see an update of this story - it's really a twist to have the long-lost father be a crime lord. Nadia doesn't seem to be handling it very well. I do have a question that kinda been bugging me since the beginning. I am curious as to why you chose 'Aiko' as your male main character's name. I've never seen it used as a guy's name before. Is it an ironic nickname?
Thank you so so much! I'm trying to update this story faster than I started off. The idea actually came from a daydream I had so it's a little easier to write it out.
As for Aiko,I was wondering when someone would say something about him. For some reason,I needed Aiko to have a quirk and since I couldn't stain his militant-like attitude,I decided to make American girls a weakness (:P) and give him a girly name.
But now that you say it,it IS rather ironic.Reviewer: EvilAngelfish Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2012 05:46 am
Wow now things are starting to heat up, literally. I can tell that this will not be a typical story. All that action would scar a person for life. The life of the Yakuza is never a cakewalk.
Thank you for the review! I intend to make this story one to be remembered. I am fasinated by the Yakuza and all their tradition and ethics. I'll try to apply that to the story.Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2012 03:07 am
I absolutely love stories with Asian male and chocolate honey! More please!!
AM/BW are my favorite grouping because I'm in love with Asian culture. Mixing a black woman in the situation just makes it more interesting.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30 2012 02:47 am
Yay an update! Nadia is an interesting character. I'm looking forward to seeing her interactions with her father. Also, Aiko is awesome! I keep picturing him as Shun Oguri lol. I'm excited to see how their love story unfurls. OH, and i'm curious about Nadia's role as Fourth daughter/princess....will she be facing hate and obstacles from her own family as well as the oustide threats? Don't take so long to update! I'm also hoping for an update of Autmn @ 2am some time soon!
First,I deeply apologize for taking so long. I hate it as much as you do and I'll work on updating Autumn. I actually imagined Aiko as Shota Matsuda but Shun Oguri is AMAZING!! XD
I already have an idea on how the third chapter will start so I plan on typing tonight. I took far too long to update but I deeply,truly appreciate your patience.
Thank you so much for the review! :)Reviewer: Dani Cali Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2012 08:11 pm
This first chapter, while interesting, is full of spelling errors and it makes it difficult to appreciate the impact of the story. I kept having to correct the sentences as I read.
This may sound ridiculous to say but...I am quite aware. :(
When I can actually get around to it,I will correct the mistakes on all my stories but as I've recently demonstrated I am slow/lazy.
Poor excuse but it's the truth. I apologize and thank you for the review. :)Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29 2012 06:22 pm
I'm happy to see an update of this story! Don't take so long for the next update!
Honestly,if I could mail you a plane ticket just to fly to Texas and slap me I would do it. I hate myself for taking so long. I'll do better. I promise. :(
Thank you for the review!Reviewer: EvaJaye Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2012 05:28 pm
Ooo interestion to see what her father does for a living although I have an idea. Glad she was able to get to safety and that Aiko was able to convince her to stay to atleast meet her father. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Their relationship will definitely be put to the test. Thank you for the review.:)Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2012 04:22 pm
Nadia is quite the the fighter. I wonder how her first meeting with dad will go? Also will Aiko give into to temptation with Nadia? And who is Aiko trying to poison?
Oh! It's weird how excited your questions make me! I have so many ideas! So,so many! Thank you! Thank you so much for the review! :)Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2012 11:31 am
Glad you didn't abandoned the story I also like autumn@ 2am.
I shall never abadoned my babies. I'm just a terrible "mother". Thank you so much for the review! :)Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 29 2012 07:55 am
I really love this story so far!!! Please continue it!!!
Trying to update faster. So not putting my priorites in check. -_-' I'm an awful waffle.Reviewer: Faith Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 10 2012 07:55 pm
Talk about drama finding out that your father was another man on the day of your mother's funeral. I just hope it all works out for the best
Thank you for the review. At this point,I'm not to sure how its going to work out.Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2012 10:46 pm
Okay, another story you have me hooked on. I tried not to read it but... can't wait for an update!!!
Well I thank you a billion times for reading it anyway. :)
I'll try to update faster than usual.Reviewer: Drea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 04:25 am
again Ioneha, you deliever what is going to be a GREAT story WITHOUT A DOUBT!! look forward to the unravel of OIB! thank you!
Wah! Thank you so so much! I'll try my hardest to make this a fine piece of literature. Thank you! XDReviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 09:59 am
What a way to find out who your real father is, how could her mother lie to like that!! Why did she cheat on husband? Great start!!!
Many questions and answers will be revealed! *holds up hands to the heavens*
Thank you so much for reading.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: March 18 2012 07:11 am
I am intrique, please update soon. I like how the story is flowing.
Thank you! :)Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 11:20 pm