Why why why ? The wait is tooooooooooooooooooooo long
desperate
Reviewer: Bénédicte Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 10:49 pm
Please update. This story is so goood. I want to know what happens with Mari and Bear in the next chapter.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 20 2015 01:04 pm
Nice story, you could do a sequel, next part of their story!
Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2014 04:25 pm
Loved this story and Love your writing.
Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]Date: March 01 2014 09:45 am
Aw please is that it, you don't end like that, what is wrong
with you... Heaving on him and saying I'm pregnant... Give me more
Updates please... Thank u. :-)
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 11:50 am
Amazing short story!! I need more!!!
Reviewer: MissTruth Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2013 08:08 am
Wow....!!!!
Reviewer: MissTruth Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2013 07:49 am
Wonderful
Reviewer: MissTruth Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2013 07:30 am
Very interesting beginning. I like!
Reviewer: MissTruth Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2013 06:10 am
OMG, please update. I hope all is well with you. I love this story so much. I want to see more of Bear and Mari, lol!
Reviewer: WOW! Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 25 2013 04:16 am
When do we get the next update to this story. I'm loving it, and I can't wait for more. Update soon please b/c I need my Bear/Mari fix.
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: November 18 2012 11:07 pm
Loved this story. Glad to see there's a sequel.
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: November 18 2012 10:09 pm
Beautifully done!
Would love to see a story develop betweent these two!
Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2012 01:22 am
I'm in love with this story cant wait till its complete
Reviewer: Tiffany York Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 19 2012 12:28 am
Oh man! Where is the rest? This is too good too not finish!
Reviewer: MeganRose Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2012 07:51 am
Nice!!!! I enjoyed this little shortie.
Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 12:09 pm
More, please, lol!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 15 2012 03:31 am
Can't belive that girl bit him..TWICE!
Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 03 2012 04:38 am
What why did you stop there, oh gees (hitting my forehead)
Reviewer: the girl next door Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 04:56 pm
So glad that U R Back! This was a great update, can't wait 2 C what Bear's reaction is going 2 B about the baby!
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 04:32 pm
Scribe! How dare you stop there! Im on the edge of my seat. LOL
Excellent job as always!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 03:40 pm
Yet again you amaze me with the words you write, this was one of my favorite chapters so far. I mean reall Shaw who was the prick knew the truth about their relationship and the relationship she has with Bear. I loved the conversation between Grady and Monty about Mari. I am not to fond of the up chuck but she told him about her pregnancy without dancing around it or even avoiding it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 02:38 pm