Reviews For Illusions
Title: Illusions: The Beginning

I enjoyed this story a lot because there are some many women that find themselves in  this situation but the ending isn't always pretty. I'm really glad they could work out their differences and they could actually learn from an outsider. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :D

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 10 2013 09:14 pm

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

then hell yaaay - bring it! :D i'm curious as hell to see how George takes the news but also how life changes for Tyler and Emma - thank you, AM! i'll be looking forward to the post ;)



Author's Response:

I'll post it as soon as I finish writing it. Yay!
Thank you for pushing me. 

Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2012 01:10 pm

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

Author's Response:

Sorry to disappoint you like that. Would you like to read an alternative ending?

 

aah, you're too kind! :D personally i wouldn't mind more Tyler, lol, but it's your story and in the end your gut-feeling reunited George and Emma so there's no need for an alternative ending especially since it wasn't something you envisioned in the first place, you know - lord, i hope i make sense, lool! - but thank you for considering it!! :D



Author's Response:

Actually I did envision an alternative ending before end and I wanted to write it and post it. 
The only thing that I need is someone to push me to write it down! So, my offer is still valid. 
I made them reunite because I felt that it was probably the easier thing to do, and because I wanted the all to be happy.  :D

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2012 03:25 pm

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

that was a sweet - short - end. i'm uberhappy that Taylor found love even if it wasn't with Emma (darn it!) but at least Emma & George found a way back to each other and from the looks of things, they are very happy and on equal grounds this time around 

well done and thanks for their story! off to the read Phobia with delight - for sure! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! I decided last minute that maybe Emma should give George another shot and I'm glad that it worked out for them. However, unfortunately, real life is not always about getting your happy ending. I just didn't like the idea of George being with anyone else other than Emma. And I knew it was going to be painful for him to watch the 'one' with someone else. Nevertheless, everything is wonderful, and George is no more a jerk. YAY.
Thank you for reading Phobia as well. :D

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 27 2012 09:06 pm

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

sooo not liking George after that flashback...but dammit, i held out on hope but oh well at least Emma & Taylor got to kiss and that's enough for me - off to the read the last chaps :)



Author's Response:

Sorry to disappoint you like that. Would you like to read an alternative ending? 

:D

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2012 09:01 pm

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

Thank you, it was perfect...



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you liked it. And you should not thank me. I'm thanking you for taking the time to read my story and review it. :D

Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2012 09:00 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

Really loved this ending, especially, the new baby! Well done, Chica.



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks. :D

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 26 2012 08:49 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

I got my HEA, and Taylor found live as well! Fabulous!!!



Author's Response:

I couldn't leave Taylor suffering, now, could I? And yes, HEA. I did not want to disappoint you.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2012 06:17 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

I love these characters! George I am so proud of you, Emma is proud of too.



Author's Response:

So glad that George changed. That was all she needed.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2012 06:13 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

Great story from beginning to end ! I love the ending . I'm glad things worked out for Emma and George and their children . Can't wait to read your new story .



Author's Response:

Thanks. I really appreciate your reviews, and I'm glad that you liked the story from the beginning to the end. :D

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2012 04:57 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

Thank you...Please put Emma & George back together, The kids need this...Lol seriously I enjoyed this story and watching Emma & George's growth.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you very much. :D

Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 10:19 pm

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

It was only until this chapter that I was truly struck by the incredible selfishness of George. I hope for Emma's sake he's being truthful with her and not trying to manipulate her. Emma really needs to proceed with caution when it comes to George considering his past behaviour. Having said that, I've always hoped for a reconciliation between them, but refrained from stating it since it's her choice. I hope she makes the best decision for her and her kids. George is a big boy and will just have to deal.



Author's Response:

Do not worry. Emma is going to be incredibly cautious about a possible reconciliation between them. You'll see in the next chapter. :D

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 11:16 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

Wow, I don't know what to say. I feel let down, while Emma and George both grew individually Emma never made a choice.  She let Taylor know how she felt and I am so glad that he realized that Emma's feelings and love for George is great.  I am thrilled that her not loving Taylor as he loved her didn't end their friendship.  I was hoping that she would give George a chance.  I am really glad that George grew because had truly pissed me off.

I do love these characters especially Darcy and Emmiliene so I do hope to see them in another sequel perhaps?



Author's Response:

I would have been devastated if Taylor hated her, but I think he always knew that Emma would never be completely his. 

George has been a jerk of massive proportion. Hopefully, in the future, he will stop pressurising Emma for stuff.

I have no clue whether there is going to be a sequel. At the moment I prefer ruling out this option. However, I might write a one shoot or more about how they deal with what life throws at them in the future.

Thank you for reading and reviewing my stories. :D

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 05:05 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

Good story . I'm glad Emma finally stood up to George .I hate to see it end .



Author's Response:

Me too, but what can we do? :)

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 24 2012 05:05 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

aww no taylor =P oh well thanks for the update! i agree with George, by apologizing and realizing his pushy waays i think he and Emma will be able to  move forward and maybe become the best friends like they once were :)

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

Let's see what the future has in store for Emma and George. Merry Xsmas and Happy New Year to you too!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 22 2012 09:57 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

George seems to be going thru the motions. Emma is absolutely correct. George needs to back up his words with actions that shows he's growing and changing. He seems to want a quick fix and there isn't one.



Author's Response:

He always wants the quick fix because it is easy. For once, he'll understand that he has to be patient in life. :D

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 21 2012 12:02 pm

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

Good update . The doctor was spot on with George, the one time Emma stands up to him and all of a sudden he's not in love with her. Emma should make him wait , torture him a little even.



Author's Response:

Don't worry. He'll wait for a long time.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2012 05:29 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

George is having a hars but it's his iwn fauly as he's dumber than a box of rocks! Emi is a sweetheart, I love he relates to both her and Darcy. George you hurt and broke her heart so why would she trust you with her heart? George figure out why you're stupid ans correct it. Please don't ruin my HEA!



Author's Response:

I'll try not too. :D

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2012 04:39 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

Didn't like it. Please go back to George and Emma...This Taylor guy is a distraction she really doesn't need. 



Author's Response:

Sorry to upset you with my writing. That wasn't my intention.

Are you entirely sure that she does not need a distraction? Maybe she needs something else in her life, maybe George is not the right man for her anymore.

I think Emma is confused and sees Taylor as another way for her to go and move on with her life. She might be wrong. Maybe she just needs to solve her problems with George and get back with him.

Reviewer: Diane5566 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 15 2012 04:59 pm

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

i like this story A LOT because it's REAL. it involves the many complicated emotions couples go through during a divorce then later try to find a common ground - now i like taylor. handsdown. i have seen you introduced him, lol!! but since George & Emma have history and lots of emotions, i haven't dared to hope sooo THANK YOU for this update - reading about Emma having steamy dreams about Taylor made my day, lool!! =)



Author's Response:

I dare say that you like Taylor, then? I like him too. He is really lovely. I thought about writing as him as well and then I thought I didn't need to feel the feelings of a third person. Led me to bad thoughts about one of the main character ages ago when I was writing another story. Let's just say I couldn't write it anymore because I hated the she in the question with a passion.

I'm happy that I achieved my dream. Never been divorced, nor married (too young for that shit, I'm just 19), but I'm glad I can relate to my characters. That's the reason why I write! Because I want it to be real. 

Anyway this is going to be a happy ending however it finishes. Emma learnt something and she will be stronger, which is all that matters. And the same goes for George. He will become a better person. And Taylor...he will be happy, with or without Emma.

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 07:26 pm

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

At first I really liked this story but first you make her lose the baby then you'll most likely end up with her having sex with that taylor guy...sorry but this isn't doing it for me any longer...



Author's Response:

It wasn't in my mind to even make Emma have sex with Taylor. It would only complicate things if they have random sex. I can assure you that if they are not a couple, it won't happen.

I'm sorry that you feel that way, but I appreciate your opinion. 

I made her lose the baby because Emma was in no condition to have another child. She was mentally and phyisically fragile, and although she loved the baby it would have been so complicated for George and Emma and maybe they would have gotten back together, but the problems would have still been there, unsolved, leading them to a fake recounciliation. 

Reviewer: Desy91 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 07:18 pm

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

Sorry but I really really hated this last chapter...



Author's Response:

Thank you for your honesty.

George hates it too. :D

Reviewer: Suzanne5 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 07:11 pm

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

I for one would love for Emma and Taylor to be together. George is extremely selfish and is still not listening to Emma's feelings. He went on the date to pressure Emma to be with him. He lost an awesome person because he didn't know what he wanted. Give someone else a chance to be happy with her. Pls don't let Taylor suffer because George and Emma can't get their *beep* together. 



Author's Response:

I guess you are part of a small minority, Jaye. I remember asking one of my closest friend what she thinks Emma should do and she said: 'discard George and give Taylor a chance, or she just could be single to be an example to women that they can overcome bad situations and etc without needing a man.

I agree. George, as you said, did not know what he wanted, and he did wrong when he tried to pressure Emma.

Inevitably, someone is going to suffer, and that is the reason why I can't decide what is going to happen next.

I guess I need to get my beep together too.

Thank you for your review. It is deeply appreciated. I apologise for not replying earlier.

Reviewer: Jaye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 07:36 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

Great update . Darcy was just too cute with his man talk with his father . As much as I love George and Emma together. Maybe it's time for Emma to have a little fun of her own with Taylor. ( ducks for cover from people throwing rocks) Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Aww thanks for your encouraging words.

Darcy is just amazing. I love that little man. Soon you'll see Emilienne too. 

Is Emma capable of having fun with Taylor without falling for him and complicate the situation even more? Personally, I don't want to put myself through the drama, but maybe Emma does! Lol.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 06:17 am

Title: Illusions: The Beginning

George you have got some competition for Emma's heart and the way that you broke Emma I'm afraid that you don't stand a chance.  I really want George to have a chance even if he doesn't know his head from a hole in the wall.  Thanks for the update, it was wonderful as usual!!



Author's Response:

I always love your reviews. They tend to put a smile on my face. :D

Wow. I've never heard that expresssion, the not knowing the different between one's head and a whole in the wall. I guess it means that he is clueless and incredibly stupid? I hope I don't misinterpret it.

I would love Emma to give a chance to George too, you know? It would be great for Emma to tell George: I love you, let's get back together!
I don't know if it will happen, though. I don't have to do what I want, I have to write what Emma would do, not me. Aww, sad.

Taylor seems like the perfect guy, but is he really the perfect guy for Emma? Maybe yes, or maybe no.

We will see. Not in the next chapter, but in the one after that. George doesn't like Taylor. I wonder why?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2012 05:24 am

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