Reviews For Of Steel and Silt
Title: Lock Haven

Please continue with their story! I love it!

Reviewer: farawaychild Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2016 02:07 am

Title: Her

Please update!!

Reviewer: farawaychild Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2016 02:05 am

Title: Her

Please tell me you will revisit these two? I would like to know more of their story. 

Reviewer: Libri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2015 03:19 am

Title: Lock Haven

From my reading I think Damon is trying to give Tara the boot. She needs to see what she is desiring is right in front of her, Joahua😃

I think you need to develop this story.

Hopefully you will continue this and update soon!

Reviewer: Opened eyes Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 10 2014 01:56 am

Title: Lock Haven

Interesting start!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the reading and rating, Baha_malo!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 14 2014 12:44 am

Title: Lock Haven

Tara, we were given spidey senses for a reason. Use them.

"When I'm with a woman, I don't worry about who came before me. All that matters is that she's in my head as much as I'm in her body."

That right there... Can't imagine why she just didn't drag him in her room and not let him leave until it was time to leave for work. DAMN.

Now, I gotta go back and read Her.



Author's Response:

BellaChica, Tara's trying to be a good girl. But it's a high compliment that you've been compelled to go back to read Her again. Thanks!

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2014 04:02 pm

Title: Lock Haven

Love it!!! Can't wait for more of their story. Thank you for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Shadow. Well, I guess I better start putting another story of theirs together!

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2014 03:18 am

Title: Lock Haven

Ditto pmgayles! Love me some him.



Author's Response:

Thanks, Drea! I'm glad you find him hard to resist as I do!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2014 12:48 am

Title: Lock Haven

Hot!!  Did she say his name while she was dreaming or having an alcohol induced vision.  Whew, there is most definitely something there.  Nice to see a little backstory about them.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, lajack1. There will be more backstory to come!

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 12 2014 10:10 pm

Title: Lock Haven

Awesome!! Going to read Her again.



Author's Response:

Khamalani, I am flattered that you're inspired to re-read Her! Thank you!

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2014 09:51 pm

Title: Her

Is this the sequel to the recent post? I'm so in awe and grateful to hear the male perspective. This needs more. Thank u for the awesome orgasam with words



Author's Response:

Hi Cju, yes, it's the sequel. I'm writing their story out of sequence (as it happens in my head-sorry!). The third story will most likely be from his perspective again, when they first meet. Thank you for the high compliments and for the 3Rs!

Reviewer: Cju Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2014 09:49 pm

Title: Lock Haven

This was good. I think that Joshua thinks Damon isn't right for Tara because he knows 

how she really is from being bandmates. I do like Joshua's statement at the end of the

chapter he's right as long as you're with someone that's all that matters. I guess Damon

either has insecurities or he feels emasculated having a girlfriend who's confident in what

she does or wants sexually. Based on Tara's daydream of Joshua I don't think she's that 

immune to him. lol.



Author's Response:

Absolutely, Marchpisces92! But we gotta let Tara come to reality in her own time.

Reviewer: marchpisces92 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12 2014 09:43 pm

Title: Lock Haven

I love me some Joshua!



Author's Response:

He's kinda special, ain't he?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2014 09:19 pm

Title: Her

I would really appreciate it if u did expand this story 



Author's Response:

Hi Felicia, I recently added 'Lock Haven' and more on Tara and Joshua are to come. Thanks for reading, rating, and reviewing!

Reviewer: felicia Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 27 2014 11:30 pm

Title: Her

Good God!  That is some real good story writing...Got me looking for an "O" right now!!



Author's Response:

Many thanks! I hope you look for more stories about Tara and Joshua.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 13 2014 02:35 am

Title: Her

Amazing story!  Looking forward to reading more. 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, reviewing, and rating, urtrippin2! I'm hoping to get you another in the next week or two.

Reviewer: urtrippin2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2014 01:10 am

Title: Her

Does anyone have a cigarette....Oh wait, I don't smoke



Author's Response:

High praise, VeMo. Thank you!

Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 03:08 am

Title: Her

Very good 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, reviewing, and rating, Bredreaway!

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 30 2014 10:23 am

Title: Her

When is chapter two coming?



Author's Response:

Within the next couple of weeks. Thank you for rating!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 30 2014 06:20 am

Title: Her

Wow.....



Author's Response:

Thank you, flikchick!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2014 12:41 am

Title: Her

I absolutely loved everything about this story. Please continue.



Author's Response:

Thank you, LuKohana! I am working on it!

Reviewer: LuKohana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 10:12 pm

Title: Her

Oh. Wow. That. Was. Everything. 



Author's Response:

Many thanks, bookbutterfly!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 06:18 pm

Title: Her

I think expanding Tara and Joshua would be awesome!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Expansion will come very soon, kimyso. Thanks for reading, rating, and reviewing!

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 12:35 pm

Title: Her

Really enjoyed this.

Please continue this.



Author's Response:

Dear Lady Siren, I will continue! Thanks for reading, rating, and reviewing!

Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 12:17 pm

Title: Her

This was great!! Thanks for sharing Joshua and Tara's story!



Author's Response:

Many thanks, Annienathanson!

Reviewer: Annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 29 2014 06:30 am

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