Title: Chapter 4

Not sure why but for some reason I like this story and I usually don't like mobster stories...it's been a while since you updated...maybe  your muse will return and you'll get back to it as it was just getting interesting...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 21 2016 03:08 am

Title: Chapter 4

I really like this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Please...................Please...................Please......................Please................Please....

UPDATE

Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 02 2014 05:57 am

Title: Chapter 1

What do we have do to get an update? I have chocolate and we can pass the collection plate. Sade, I hope life is treating you well and I'm  begging for an update. This is an awesome story that captures my imagination. I wish I was Natasha.

Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2014 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 4

When are you going to update.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2014 11:57 pm

Title: Chapter 4

You have got to come back and finish this. What a cliffhanger. 

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 04 2014 01:27 pm

Title: Chapter 4

oh la la la

Reviewer: simplydijah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2014 02:51 pm

Title: Chapter 2

That was quick.  He just met her 2 hours ago, right?

Reviewer: Troysmom0409 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2013 06:15 am

Title: Chapter 1

Really great start.  I would like a better description of you hH.  I know I saw the pictures but still....good start.  Kudos

Reviewer: Troysmom0409 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 31 2013 06:11 am

Title: Chapter 4

Soo good waiting for more

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2013 06:36 am

Title: Chapter 4

WOW!!!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2013 12:09 pm

Title: Chapter 4

soooooooo good please write more. i miss this story.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 21 2013 01:55 am

Title: Chapter 4

Yes that man is one sexy bastard. I'm glad that you update just wish the chapter was little bit longer. Now I hope she doesn't give up the cookies just yet let him work for them. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 20 2013 02:23 am

Title: Chapter 3

Wonderful

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 05:14 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Lol, "Sexy bastard" is very right. Great update, I wish there was more. I can't wait for the next post. Nice to have your stories back :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 03:31 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Great writing

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 03:02 pm

Title: Chapter 4

great update,  welcome back

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 02:06 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I like this, but I think he's moving too fast.  She just got there and she's there for his son.  He's already taken over her life, and now he's going to take over her body.  Even though she's attracted to him, I feel that she should make him work for it a little.  He doesn't seem like the type of man who has ever had to jump through hoops for a woman.  If he gets her too quickly and then tires of her, she'll be hurt but stuck there taking care of his son while he's off looking for another conquest.   How is she any different than any other woman he's slept with.  I'm just saying.  They don't even know each other yet.  There should be more there than just sexual attraction at least for his son's sake because if he gets attached to her, and then the father tires of the good doctor,  then what?  Great update!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 12:25 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Sexy bastard indeed. Update soon.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 08:55 am

Title: Chapter 4

so you'll feel me long after I'm gone now that is sexy

Reviewer: kiavicmcp Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 07:19 am

Title: Chapter 4

Angelo played Nastasha like a stratavarious violin and stoked her like cat and she was purring!!!  This was hot!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2013 07:06 am

Title: Chapter 3

No you didn't!!!! Please update soon. I love this story so much.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2013 06:06 am

Title: Chapter 3

Please update. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

Reviewer: Tee Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2013 05:07 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Shiree McCarver....love her stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

Reviewer: Nessa Bale Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17 2013 08:04 am

Title: Chapter 1

Please continue



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 10 2013 03:42 am

Title: Chapter 3

Wow! need more!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, Ive moved to Holland to go to University and to be closer to my boyfriend, life was pretty hectic but its slowing and i have begun writing again. I cant wait to begin posting again. I hope you continue to read and review. Sorry for the long wait in response.

Reviewer: Serenity Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2013 09:46 pm



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