Reviews For The Breaking Point
Title: Chapter 5

SIMONE, SIMONE, SIMONE, CHARLIE HAS FEELINGS FOR AND YOU ARE FEELING YOU SOME CHARLIE.  STOP THE MADNESS SIMONE!

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2016 04:57 pm

Title: Chapter 5

hurry man and kiss the girl

Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2010 08:35 pm

Title: Chapter 5

These two...argh...frustrating. I can't wait for them to get together.  Thanks for a great update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2010 07:15 pm

Title: Cast Pics

You have the foundation for a great story here. Why are you dragging it out? You have give the depth, to each person in the story and we all now know who they are. Please move on with the story. You a have been given a wonderful gift of writing. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 15 2010 07:53 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Simone should be ashamed of herself and I am glad that she did apologize.  Why is she so afraid of a relationship developing between her and Charlie?  They both have feeling for each other.  Thank you for the update, I love this story.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 15 2010 07:26 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Cute story. More please...

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 11 2010 04:27 am

Title: Chapter 4

Hmmm, interesting...looks like they have the hots for each other. Yay!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2010 09:02 am

Title: Chapter 4

Why can't Simone and Charlie be honest with each other?  I mean they are friends right and friends can tell each other anything.  I am pulling for them.  Thanks for the update, you rock!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 03:40 pm

Title: Cast Pics

When does Charlie plan on telling Simone he has a job? I hope he doesn't wait until she starts complaining about him going partying instead of finding work.. I'm sure that will lead to a major fall out then some major making up.. ;-)

Reviewer: Reneek Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 01:21 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Thanks for a great update.  Hopefully soo they will realize that they are both attracted to each other.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 12:41 pm

Title: Chapter 3

It would be cool if they became more than friends.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2010 12:30 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great update.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 27 2010 09:00 am

Title: Chapter 3

Really nice update . I like Simone and Charlie. Hopefully she can lead him in the right direction.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2010 08:56 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Great story!! I can't wait for the next chapter.. Please update soon :)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2010 06:01 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Excellent update.  When is Charlie going to bust a move?

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2010 10:01 pm

Title: Chapter 3

imo if i were simone, my would be attraction would increase if a certain someone would help pay the rent...lol

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 24 2010 09:55 pm

Title: Cast Pics

That was a nice start.  I'm very interested into seeing how this plays out.  Thanks.

Reviewer: BesoBeso Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 21 2010 04:43 pm

Title: Chapter 2

SO which guy is Simone going to fall for, Charlie or Adam? She is not quite desperate enough to date Adam yet. I am not sure that I like Adam myself, but I don't entirely like Charlie right now.  He is using Simone and she's allowing it.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 20 2010 05:44 am

Title: Chapter 2

Interesting start.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2010 04:14 am

Title: Chapter 2

I like the start to the story.  Looking forward to reading more.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2010 02:54 am

Title: Cast Pics

Great cast...thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2010 02:46 am



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