Title: Chapter 13

Where is the rest of the story?? Can we purchase it? I'm invested now!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2020 02:14 pm

Title: Chapter 47

I hope things are well with you. I having a feeling you will not be returning to the chamber. Eventually this story will be available for purchased on Amazon. Please take care. Thank you Bain

Reviewer: blueangel Signed [Report This]
Date: March 13 2019 09:38 pm

Title: Intro

Is this available for purchase?  Loved it so far ... so disappointed to see it had been taken down, but would most definitely pay for it.  Please provide an update if possible to purchase.

 

 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 11:08 pm

Title: Chapter 16

Please tell me where to find this!!!! I am hooked and I need to know who gets the girl!!!! 

Begging and pleading,

EJ

Reviewer: ErisJade Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2016 05:55 am

Title: Chapter 13

Dax is so cute that I hate for him to get hurt, but DeLeon and Kendra are written to have great chemistry...good story...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 08:28 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Seems like Kendra is in love with Prince.  Hard to understand how they are so oblivious to their feelings...I don't get it so maybe as I keep reading I will...I do really like this story, still...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2015 07:52 pm

Title: Chapter 47

Where'd you go I need an ending with little chocolate gray eyed babies please 

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2014 12:47 am

Title: Chapter 47

Cant wait till you add more I love this story

Reviewer: Misunderstood Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2014 09:49 am

Title: Chapter 47

I am so in love with this story hey u should put it up on wattpad omg I love it 

Reviewer: Misunderstood Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 20 2014 09:57 am

Title: Chapter 23

I really like this story, but I have only one constructive criticism... some paragraphs where one character speaks, maybe stress that character that is to talk or who is about to do an action. It is somewhat confusing (maybe just me) Example: "Wanna do it again?" She giggled, then pushed him to the other side of the bed...

Who suggested that DeLeon or Kendra? Because you mentioned her giggling right after he spoke, it comes across that she giggle as she dsaid "Wanna do it again?" Instead it could be, DeLeon gave her a devious smile as he asked, "Wanna do it again?" Kendra's giggle was answer enough for him.

Cool story, don't want to put it down, but it's after midnight and gotta get some sleep for work.



Author's Response:

yes, i realized there was some confusion in my placement of responses vs. actions. i'm a growing writer and i started this story in 2010. since then i've made changes in how i write. this is a first draft. i write directly to the Chamber. so it's a continuous process. further along in the story, you will see that i've improved upon that.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2014 09:08 am

Title: Chapter 13

Team DeLeon here.

Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04 2014 11:23 am

Title: Chapter 47

I love these carzy people!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 07:29 pm

Title: Chapter 47

I have so enjoyed this story. From the first chapter to the last. Rare that I laugh out loud while reading but found I did so often wth this one. Fabulously done!

Thank you!

Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2014 06:01 am

Title: Chapter 47

So the suspense was killing me, and I did a bad thing. I read this story back to front if you will. I'm glad I did. Kendra and D. Omg! Smoking. The voice in this story...the setting. It's everything. Really good. 

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 06:17 am

Title: Chapter 47

Not ready for this story to end...but I know that it must.

Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 04:59 am

Title: Intro

Please don't let her die...

Reviewer: me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 01:10 am

Title: Chapter 47

swoon. love your characters so much - I'll be sad when it's over but it's been quite the journey! 

Reviewer: Little Tree Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 11:13 pm

Title: Chapter 47

Yay!  So happy for these two!  They've been through so much and I'm glad they are finally getting their happy ending, even Prince!

So glad things are looking up for you and that you've gotten your groove back:)  Welcome back!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 05:04 pm

Title: Chapter 47

I.T. you have made my Monday morning fantabulous!!  Kendra and De Leon are one of my favorite couples and I am so happy that she lived so they can continue to love.  Love thec conversation between Prince and De Leon it shed some more light into Kendrea. K and D both deserve love and happiness. So good!! Thank you I.T.!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 03:58 pm

Title: Chapter 47

So glad your back.  Love the update as usual.

Please enlighten me...what was wrong with Kendra?  I read and re-read the chapters but still don't understand what happened to Kendra and why she needed surgery.

Reviewer: othello Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 02:43 pm

Title: Chapter 8

These are some interesting characters you've cooked up for this story. I must say that I was wrong about Pa. I thought this story was headed in one direction, but I'm glad I was wrong. The Halperon's (however you spell it) ain't half bad. I'm going to call it quits with this chapter for tonight. Unfortunately, I have to go to my soul crushing job, otherwise, I'd stay up all night to finish this story. Good stuff. Yes. Very good stuff.

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 09:33 am

Title: Chapter 7

I can't tell since it's so early into the story, but I wonder who will end up with Kendra. Dax or DeLeon? Hmmm?

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 09:13 am

Title: Chapter 5

Pa is alright in my book. That Cat person must die a slow death. Your voice in this story is so genuine. OMG!

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 08:40 am

Title: Chapter 4

Not feeling Chase. Nope. Not at all. He should have bought Kendra a ticket. But that doesn't even matter because he's a tool.

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 08:17 am

Title: Chapter 3

Dax is smitten. Aww

Reviewer: azzure1020 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 25 2014 08:00 am



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