Please finish this awesome story.
I wish you would update and finish this. Its so AMAZINGLY GOOD!
Aw that's so sweet! I hope she says yes and I'm glad her father is making things right with her mother after all of these years. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thank you for the update... Please.. Please update again soon!
I can't wait until they see each other again... it will be soo good I hope! And I do hope the parents are able to make a love connection too.
Author's Response: Yeah, Lydia's parents are really too adorable. Thank you so much for reading!
Author's Response: I appreciate you sticking with me!
First of all ..they are sexy as heck!!! I still want to have Lydia's man for myself for a couple of hours!! Shiro is so sexy...he loves her with his body and his words!! Lydia is sweet and kinda innocent with Shiro..she lets herself be vulnerable around him only..I love that about them!!
I love that Lydia's dad is going to finally ask her mom to marrry him..that was very sweet!!
Lydia's talk with her dad very mature and frank as was Shiro's conversation with her dad..I like Otis a lot!!
I cannot wait for the proposal...I cannot wait for them to finally get hitched..lol!
I love love love this story sweetie..great job!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! Yeah, the men in this story are some of the favorite of mine, definitely. I appreciate you reading!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Author's Response: LOL well, yeah. Like he said--he's waited long enough. Thank you for reading!
Author's Response: Hi, there! I apologize for the delay. I have original writing I'm working on as well as preparing for other things. However, there will be an update today! Thanks for your patience!
PERFECT, SO PERFECT. I JUST CAN'T RIGHT NOW *dies*
Can't wait till the next update :D Love them so much. Well Done once again :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I appreciate it!
Shiro alway speaks formally when he's speaking English :). He only gets lax when speaking Japanese or Portuguese, especially since he's spent the last few years speaking little other than Japanese.
Thanks for reading!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading! I appreciate it!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Kenshin is kind of adorable, I admit! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! At least someone won't be surprised! lol
Lawd Lawd those two are hawt as firecrackers and I love it!!!
Beyond their sexiness however is a deep abiding respect for each other. I love how Shiro was very up front with her father and saying he would not force Lydia to do anything shee did not want to nor would he stand in her way. How he would not say I love you at this time because it might be seeen as unfair presure to stay instead of going and how he explained to her ..they could still be husband and wife while she pursued her dream...that was very nice!!
I love how Lydia wantd her dream but also wanted her man...and but was not willing to give her man up for that dream..she told him what she wanted and did not leave any doubts!!
I loved it..I loved this story...these to are one of my favorite couples and that darn Shiro puts the sexy in alpha man....I love him!!
Excellent writing sweetie...you make these two so real..we cannot help but love them!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it and these two really are fun to write. :)
Bana, I have no idea how I missed this gem of a story before now. It's beautifully written with well-developed characters and wonderful dialogue. And it certainly doesn't hurt that the chemistry between Shiro and Lydia is hot enough to melt my computer. (My laptop fan quite literally kicked into overdrive at the precise moment that Shiro carried Lydia upstairs, LOL!) I have no doubt that they will make things work whether or not Lydia ultimately decides to take the coaching position in Greenville.
A truly fantastic read. I'm already looking forward to the next update. :)
P.S. The opening note to the first chapter suggests that this story is part of a series and related to another story called "Coming Home." I couldn't find it here at The Chamber, but would love to read other stories in the series. Would it be possible to provide a link? Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for your comments! Yes, this story is part of a universe that's grown all on its own--I'll send you the links to where you can read some previous stories (although I'm going to take down COMING HOME soon. That's not required reading to know what's going on in this story).
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! It's not too late, Otis! Only time it's too late is if she's married or dead!
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!
You know, this is a really good story. Complex characters, rich dialoge. I dont know why it isnt more popular. I very much enjoyed reading it. Please keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! People have various taste--that's the beauty of a site like this! Everyone has a reader for his/her story. :) I appreciate you taking out the time to read mine!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading! It's truly appreciated!
Author's Response: Only the best for his woman ;). Thank you for reading!
These people are so sweet and welcoming to Lydia. It is so nice to see how they interact with each other. You writing is so GOOD! So full of life and humor.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for your kind words! I truly appreciate them and for you taking the time out to read. :)
Author's Response: :) Thank you so much for reading! I heard genuine feelings always enhances that particular experience...;)
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