I really like this story. I LOVE the erotic tales with dominant and possessive males. It's like such a rush. I hate Harris but kind of love his tunnel vision of Amele. You finally had her ditch umbilica cord boy David. Whew, u had him in there for a scary long time. Notice how I left out the timetable issue. I will just have to check my tracked stories and hopefully you will give us, your readers an early Xmas gift and complete this tale... lol. Thanks for an excellent read so far.Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/14 09:42 am
This story was really hot. It had me on the edge of my seat the whole time. I don't know why I read this story that have not been updated in 2 years. I just set my self up, becuase now i'm tempted to see what will happen next. This definetly being added to my favorites list.Reviewer: Wideyedreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/14 07:23 pm
This story is one of the best stories I've read on this website. Please update this as soon as you can! I'm begging you!!Reviewer: Me Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/24/14 12:34 pm
This is crazy he is ridiculous, she needs to tell her fiance david and stop lying no matter how oblivious he is to the situation she needs to be truthful or break up with him.
The Harris is crazy he built a sexual relationship with her on lust and obessions but has no respect for her and treats her like crap because he dosen't know how to even have a relationship with a woman because of his daddy issues of how growing up he saw his father treat his mother. It seemed like he never had a real relationship ever in his life. Everything has been sexual and one night stands.
She resents and loathes harris because he forced her into but she also feels like crap because she allowed herself to be in it. She feels guilty because she is or now was about to get married and she's lying to her fiance, she needs to set herself free and tell the truth and breakup with her finace or see if he wants to make it work.
She may have some tiny fledgling feelings for harris but the majority is hurt, resentment, low selfesteem and feels like a whore right now. Even though he has showed actions and tender moments he does love her he has never said it and he also at the same time thwarts it by is insaitable lust and obession for her. He needs to stop being selfish and act like a man in love rather in lust, and court her the traditional/old fashioned way without sex. He needs to show her he loves and start building a new relationship with her based on being honest with how he feels about telling her, Love and respect. Then giving her time to analazye her feelings and remember those times he showed his loving side and stop trying to force her and make her resent him even more. He needs to be patience and start from stratch courting her doing lil romantic things for her lil by lil love letters, gifts, and never give up.Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/11/12 10:43 am
what a stink bitch (amelle), how come the bad man has to get the girl, can u get amelle to kill herself, and david fall in love with a strong, loyal woman, she could have gone to david anytime to tell him, why does harrison get to fuck any woman and be the anti hero.Reviewer: dounome Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/11/12 07:12 am
damn this is good. not sure if he loves her or is in love with the idea of her. It's sooo good though.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/09/12 12:57 pm