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Title: At First

OMG!! Tobias is a tortured soul!! He's unable to deal with his feelings for Serena but she's sure feeling him!!! Hope he can work it out before its too late!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2011 08:13 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

Asshole! That's the only word I have. 

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: January 20 2011 07:49 am
Title: At First

Great cast!!

Congratulations on taking the plunge!

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Date: January 20 2011 06:47 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

He is so going to regret this!  I hope she doesn't run to that asshole Ryan!  She will regret that!  Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Date: January 20 2011 06:32 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 1

Uh, why did you stop?! Just as they were about to get busy!  Ryan sounds like a real asshole!

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Date: January 20 2011 06:21 am
Title: At First

Let us Pray for Dear Bro. Tobias. The man had issues of double mindedness. Is it ,YES I want her or NO I don't. Pmgalyes you are so right he does need Jesus. Maybe if he confesses his feelings he would be straight. Frustration is making to be a real PIG!!!! How you gone treat that poor girl like that. She is trying to do the right think and you just go and jump on her, then you get her all HOT and bothered then you jump up and start talking through the sideof your face. SHUT THE H*** UP, DUMMY!!!! She gone find someone who will treat her with RESPECT.

AND SHE DESERVES IT!!!

NOW UPDATE!!!  PLEASE

 Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2011 04:41 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

I really like the tension that you keep throughout the story. I'd like to see how she grows from this last chapter, and I'm excited to see where this goes.

 Symph.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2011 03:49 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

oooh this is getting good! Dont keep us waiting more more more!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 20 2011 03:41 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

Damn! That was too hot! I LOVE these two, and their strong intense feeling towards eachother! I feel so sad for Tobias - I wonder what Serena will do now, if she figure out Tobias' true feelings or if she really thinks that he don't love her..hopefully she won't give up on him - they're meant to be! Can't wait for next chapter and your wrting skills are awesome!!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2011 12:46 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

I love all of your stories. Please update

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Date: January 20 2011 12:44 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

LOVED IT LOVEDIT!!! He was totally desperate for her but he still pushed her away. Is he crazy , he must be because evenually she will leave him if he keep on PUSHING!  LOVED IT!! HOT AND TASTEFULLY RAUNCHY :0)!!!HAHAHAHAHA YOU GO WITH YOUR FAST SELF!!!!
NOW UPDATE!!!!

 Reviewer: Cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2011 12:30 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

oh my damn that was damn, please, please keep it coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 19 2011 11:33 pm
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

Tobias needs Jesus!!!  That was so wrong to do that child that way, Tobias needs to man up and admit his feelings for Serena.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 19 2011 10:44 pm
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

i understand he is torn but damn he mean i hope she makes him beg for it when they do make love good story keep it up cant wait for the next chapter

 Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 19 2011 10:10 pm
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

agree with Anonymous review - thank you for the update!

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Date: January 19 2011 09:49 pm
Title: Skinny Love

She seems so in love with him and he's just oblivious!

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Date: January 19 2011 09:26 pm
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

I know what Tobias is trying to do but he is being foolish. I hope his little stunt works though and Serena leaves and doesn't look back. I hope she doesn't participate or be at the wedding. I want her to move on. Tobias needs to come correct and hurting Serena and pushing her away is not the answer. Even though I know he did not mean all the hurtful things he said to Serena, he still said them and even if Serena doesn't believe them, she should back off. The things he said were dispicable. He so much as called her a whore. He's got a lot of nerve. It's not her fault he has insecurities and is in love with her. So if course he takes the typical approach most cowardly and fearful men take -- he insults her beyond belief.

I know Serena is hurt but I hope she gathers strength from somewhere and fights back and by fighting back, I mean ignoring his presence and his existence as much as possible. Of course, he is going to probably still fling insults her way and call her childish but who cares. I want her to move on and tell him to do the same and grow up. I want her to tell Tobias, if all he was, was scared to be with her, he should have just said so instead of taking the easy way out and insulting her like she was nothing.

I loved the update. I cannot wait for more.

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Date: January 19 2011 08:44 pm
Title: Until We Bleed Part 2

I both love and loathe Tobias. He is clearly in love with the girl but totally deluded by what her father told him to do and how he feels about  himself but still...I want him to stop hurting Serena!

love this story and your proper raunchy was quite nice. 

 Reviewer: Onimosity Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 19 2011 07:26 pm
Title: Until We Bleed Part 1

Chica you need to hurry up and UPDATE this story!!!  It is good!!!

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Date: January 15 2011 03:34 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 1

So first you have fabulous taste in music. Re:Stacks is one of my favorite songs!

Oh, there is all this hidden drama with her parents and their effect on both Serena and Tobias it seems. I love this story, I really, really do. Please update soon. 

 Reviewer: Onimosity Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2011 01:18 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 1

This story ROCKS! "TEll me you want me" WOW from indifference to flat out desperation. INTENSE!! You ROCK IT GIRL!!! LOVING IT!

NOW YOU BETTER UP DATE, because some of us need our FIX!

 Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2011 07:46 am
Title: At First

Nice picture for the two main leads. Interesting choice with Daniel as Tobias. SWEET!!

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Date: January 07 2011 07:43 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 1

Damit - tell him!!! LOL That was such a tease...to stop there! Great chapter, and you really capture the tension between them and the way Tobias trying to oppress his feeling, so well! Please update soon!

 Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 06 2011 08:40 pm
Title: Until We Bleed Part 1

Oh oh, what a mess! Tobias has some decisions to make and needs to be honest with himself. He needs to stop playing with Serena's emotions. He knows he shouldn't marry Melissa.

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Date: January 06 2011 09:12 am
Title: Until We Bleed Part 1

Wow, just... wow. Better now than after the wedding. Will he continue with the charade of an engagement and go so far as marrying that woman? And will Serena be honest with him?

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 06 2011 03:50 am


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