Reviews For Deception
Title: Chapter 12

i know you are probably never going to finish this story but it would be so fantastic if you did

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/15/13 02:02 pm

Title: Chapter 2

LOVE IT!!! I'm hooked.  You've got me again.

Reviewer: vaberella Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/11 04:12 pm

Title: Chapter 12

This story reminds me of an updated version of "Pride and Prejudice" and since that is one of my favorite stories; I love this story.  Mr. Darcy/Alessi didn't have an overbearing father and Elizabeth/Sofie wasn't always smitten with Darcy/Alessi; they certainly didn't get it on.  LOL

Update soon please.

Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/11 03:28 pm

Title: Chapter 12

yay, been missing your stories - thanks for the short but sweet update!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/10/11 04:39 am

Title: Chapter 12

They both are still very attracted to each other, however Alessi still doesn't trust her yet.  Sofi is still so stupid, she needs to woman up and admit her mistakes and apologize for running away.  She should Alessi about her fear that made her run.  I am loving this story and I can't wait to read about your plan for Sofie and Alessi.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/11 03:27 pm

Title: Chapter 12

If Alessi doesn't watch it, he'll be making another baby with Sofie. ;)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 11:21 am

Title: Chapter 12

Oh oh, Alessi has it bad for Sofie!! His dad is a tyrant and a snob!!! Wonder what his dad is gonna do when he finds out that Sofie is the mother of his grandson???

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/05/11 12:27 am

Title: Chapter 1 - The Cast

Love it, can't wait 4more

Reviewer: whitney Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 11:07 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Excellent

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 08:25 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Thanks for a great update.  I couldn't believe that Alessi's father told him that he had to marry Natalie.  Just crazy.  The way that Alessi treats Sofie is crazy.  She needs to tell him to keep his hands to himself.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 08:07 pm

Title: Chapter 12

i'm thinking the only way to get around alessi's father is for the old man to croak. he's such an evil person and this natalia don't seem no better.

Reviewer: grumpirah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 12

wow these two  can't get enough of each other lol. i know he hurt because she keep a secret from him but it show he willl never stop loving her. now i don't like the father trying to pimp out his son to make a deal that so wrong on so many ways. i wonder what going to happen next? thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 06:44 pm

Title: Chapter 12

this one was good. Dad needs to come to the 21st century, no more arranged marriges.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 05:39 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Alessi is playing a danergous game..if his dad finds out about teh baby...there is no telling what he might do...and if he finds about his sons lust for poor broke Sophie there is no telling what he might do to her...but it is obvious that Alessi has it bad for Ms. Sophie ..I just hope they don't get caught before they make go at this relationship!!!!

Great job sweetie..I need more!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/04/11 05:20 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Please update...

Reviewer: Priscilla67 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 07:21 pm

Title: Chapter 11

It seems that although Alessi is obsessed with Sofie he is going to treat her like an ass.  Can Alessi's family not see that Rocco is his son?  Is it because the child has a darker skin tone?  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 11:09 am

Title: Chapter 10

What happened to the meeting that they were supposed to have at the restaurant?  Now she is at his family home with the baby...wow.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 11:02 am

Title: Chapter 11

Awesome story line!!  I can understand Alessi's anger.

Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/01/11 09:16 am

Title: Chapter 11

This story is supreb, please update soon.

Reviewer: Ann Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/31/11 07:50 pm

Title: Chapter 11

wow so dad knows that alessi is the father. i can't belive what his dad said to him. this your grandchild and least you can say make sure you get to know your son not say leave her alone and foucs on business. i know he hurt that she didnt' tell him about their son but he need to know that  she is a good person and wanted him to get to know his child. thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 07:42 am

Title: Chapter 11

yay, been missing your stories - i'm glad things have slowed down and are flowing better. thank you for updating, this story rocks!

Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 04:20 am

Title: Chapter 11

I wish Sophie wasn't so 'in love' with Alessi.  I don't even see how she's convinced herself that she is when she barely even know him. I just hope she doesn't let him run over her.

Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/29/11 01:41 am

Title: Chapter 11

Well interesting theory of Sophie...get to know the family so they will not take her baby..strange...I do not like her dad..he was mean and nasty for no reason!!

AAlessi love her still..I think he is going to grow to love his son and his dad will eventually find and it will be over!!

great job sweetie!!

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/28/11 10:09 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Wow, loved the update but how is it that his dad and stepmom don't recognise their grandson when Alessi was able to recognise his son from the get go with those eyes??? Very interesting.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/28/11 10:06 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Sitting on the edge of my chair , wanting MORE !!! Super good Story and Update . Great job.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/28/11 08:32 pm



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