Reviews For Eyes For Only You
Title: Chapter 20 Consequences Of Bad Choice

UGH Justin don't do this to me now!! You know you aren't gonna be able to stay away from Jalena!!! You have all the same friends and same classes!! You're only kidding yourself if u think you can totally leave her alone!! Grow some balls and dump Stacey...you know you're never going to think of her the same way now that you have gotten a taste of Jalena. School is gonna be interesting.

 

Great update...can't wait to see what you write next!! 10 stars!



Author's Response:

Hi Megan,

 Thank you so much for reviewing.... Oh and love the rating thanks for that. :)

Tough times are ahead for these two Justin has some Manning up to do and Jalena needs to focus.. I am really happy you are enjoying my story and hope you enjoy my next chapter... 

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 29 2011 12:57 am

Title: Chapter 1 Feeling You

please do not let jalena get with sam.  let her stay by herself and ward off all guys.  don't let her give in to punkish justin. ii would rather see her concentrate on school and dance.  

what's up with jalena's sister and justin's brother?  i hope they make a real love connection. 



Author's Response:

lol! Well if I do that it would defeat the purpose of writing a romance story. :)

Yes! something is going on with Jer and Bree what I dont know yet but there story is forming in my mind. ;)

Thank you for reviewing. 

Reviewer: Harrie Holiday Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 25 2011 03:05 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Feeling You

LOL. I was laughing the whole way through. The part about his hair looking like he got slapped...omg SO TRUE. I never thought of it like that but now I can't wait to use it. 



Author's Response:

It's so true they seriously looked like they've been slapped in the face.. lol

thank you for leaving a comment. Happy to have made you laugh. :) 

Reviewer: Flame Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 08:14 am

Title: Chapter 19 Can't Be Friends

LOve It!!! J&J angst cant wait!! Is Sam and Stacey creepin on the DL, and out to setup Jalena...I dont know, I just have that feeling. 

Although I love J&J story ive always been a person who love the supporting cast, they alway seem to have the best lines and in Krista&Niko case the best chemistry. Hope they get their own story.

Awesometastic writing!!!!! keep the updates poppin



Author's Response:

Thank you TasteTheRainbow! Oh yeah there is a lot of DL going on with this group of cast... ;) I might put up a short for Niko and Krista I feel their story is kind of already being told through this one. But I promise you will hear more from them. I'm so happy you are enjoying this and wow thanks for the rating I'm trying to get up there with the big dogs in the rating. :) 

Reviewer: TasteTheRainbow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 24 2011 12:42 am

Title: Chapter 1 Feeling You

I'm really enjoying your story...Justin is so slow and he's being stupid....I think all through his relationship with Stacey, she's been cheating on him with SAM....She wants her cake and eat it too...Even a blind person can she that Stacey is a hoe..PLEASE UPDATE SOON...Jalena needs to stay away from Sam..he seems he's up to no good w/her...He seems the type that doesn't take no for a answer...



Author's Response:

LOL thank you Vicky getting on the update for you!

Reviewer: vicky Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 23 2011 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 1 Feeling You

Oh please update soon! I just love your story, I keep checking back everyday to read your story from the beginning. Hoping for an update soon!

 

Is Jalena a Senior too? Just wondering :D



Author's Response:

I have a little bit of a writers block I'm currently 10 pages in on chapter 20 but kind of stuck then I get a review and its like awe! Megan I tell you reviews like this push me to write I was sitting here having a Criminal Minds marathon. I'm hoping to update soon It feels me with joy to know you read my story like that. I will because of you get back to work on this story.... Thank you for your wonderful comments

meme

btw: Yes, Jalena is a senior as well all the characters that go the school are except of course Anthony's brother. :) 

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 21 2011 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 19 Can't Be Friends

Jelena needs to stay away from Justing big time. He is the type of man that you can manipulate very easy. Look at how he lets Stacey manipulate him with her guilt trip. Justin is soo fucking stupid. He needs to man up and stop being such a pussy. Its such a turn off. Justin is weak. He doesn't have the guts to break up with his girlfriend because he is afraid of her. He rather stay with her because he doesn't want to "hurt" her feelings. He is not the type of man who fights for what he wants. Who would want to be with a mane like him??? Ugh, I really hope that Jelena will get  REAL man. WHo is not easy to trap and to manipulate.



Author's Response:

Wow! 

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 16 2011 05:42 am

Title: Chapter 1 Feeling You

I finally slowed my butt down some to start reading this and I must say I LIKE IT!!!...and i tend to steer away from stories that are based in a highschool setting because of my own horror stories of high school soap opera, but I decided to check it out and I'm glad I did!!! Now I'm off to read the rest of this tale...FLAME ON!!



Author's Response:

Hey there Elizablu my team Clive Owen friend..lol Well thank you so much for slowing down to check me out. You know I before I started to write this story I sat and tried to imagine one and from different age groups and for some reason the highschool age seemed to just click with me seemed like the easiest to start with too.

I hope you enjoy the rest of my first time wonder...lol and thank you so much for reviewing and rating... I got to get back to your story to catch up. 

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2011 12:49 am

Title: Chapter 19 Can't Be Friends

Yep Justin, you just f!cked up big times. Jalena needs to stay away from him until he gets himself untangled from that she-wolf.



Author's Response:

ha ha Justin is in some deep sh*t so well just have to see how he redeems himself..

Thank you so much for rating and reviewing.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 06:49 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Feeling You

I am so glad I saw this story, I've been away for awhile and just started catching up again on my reading and writing, this is an ultra cute story. I love the main character's sense of humor! 

The slap in the face hair style had me cracking up, haven't heard a hair style described quite like that one before, but you're right, white boys hair do look like that lately. LOL 

Just love the way Justin is just so mesmerized by Jalena. She's already got him hooked, now that that's what I'm talking about! 

Looking forward to reading and reviewing the rest of the chapters!



Author's Response:

Well thank you for taking the time to check my story out I'm glad you like it. I hope I continue to hear from you  on the rest of chapters... yes girl the slap in the face is the only way to descripe that hair style..lol Thanks again and have a good one.

Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 10:00 am

Title: Chapter 1 Feeling You

Great update can't wait for the next chapter. oh yeah and please more bree and jeremy action.



Author's Response:

yeah you liked the Jer and Bree scene, awesome thank you so much for reviewing... :)

Reviewer: jmary_84 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 06:27 am

Title: Chapter 19 Can't Be Friends

Damn dont do this. I want to kick Justins but. I need more right now I hope u update real soon.



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm sorry. Dont worry he will be on the floor.. I will try to work as fast as a stay home mom can work.. lol! 

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 06:25 am

Title: Chapter 19 Can't Be Friends

WOW another amazing chapter I'm so in love with story. Thank you for the update can't wait to find out what how Justin will get Lena to forgive him. But please put the poor dude out of his misery and let him end it with Stacey.  

 

 

And to answer your questions yes I was born in 1975 and meko is short for Tameko, thank for you writing this incredible story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I think he will have to suffer just a lil bit longer but not to long I promise.. 

wow we were born the same year awesome and thats my nick name too. :) 

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 05:32 am

Title: Chapter 19 Can't Be Friends

Thank you for this wonderful chapter. JUSTIN what were you thinking? He better have knee pads on. Jalena knows her worth.
Daniel is amazing. Thank you for introducing him to us. I love his voice. Please update sooner rather than later.

Author's Response:

Awe your so welcome thank you for reading and reviewing I'm glad your enjoying my story... Yes this fool will be put to the floor... ;)

YES! Daniel is AMAZING! first time I listen to him I was like butter. ;) when he sang say it I seriously melted to the floor I couldn't even listen to the whole thing I got to hot and bothered.. so thats what Justin's voice does to Jalena's... See next chapter 

Reviewer: anj1874 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 04:41 am

Title: Chapter 19 Can't Be Friends

Justin, I want to slap. When is going to break up with that ho?  You are not in love with Stacey if you were you wouldn't be attracted to Jalena.  Not to mention neither your family nor your friends like that ho!!  Dump her cliggy, stupid ass!!!  Jalena ignore Justin, he is not worth your time.  Don't give Sam any attention either as he is not into you for the right reasons.  He wants to use you to get back Justin for the ho.  I love this story!!



Author's Response:

LOL! I love your reviews you sound like Krista go get um girl! I could just picture cussing the computer out! lol thank you so much for reviewing again I love hearing form you! I see I got make Just pay don't worry he will... see you next chapter.. :)

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 03:56 am

Title: Chapter 19 Can't Be Friends

Oooooooh. Justin is in soooooo much trouble. Krista and Becca are gonna kill you. Bump that, I'm gonna kill you. You have got to choose and stop playing this game. No one is gonna win. Matter of fact, everyone is losing right now. Not to mention, Stacey gets to where a smug stupid smile on her face. *Sigh* I'm not happy right now.

On a happier note, I totally knew it was Bree who Jeremy was talking about. I think they are very cute together and now that Bree's happy she's gonna have to talk to her little sister. Cuz now Jalena is gonna think love is all bad and Bree knows it can be good. Well, I don't know if her and Jeremy are in love but they should be. LOL.

Anyway, good chapter. Hold up, Caleb is really trying to get Becca. I like him chasing her and she's running away from him. But he sure had his hands around her waist. Um hm. UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL! yeah Caleb and Becca very interesting I myself am unsure of how thats going to play out..lol I just letting them tell me... So you caught that huh Bree & Jeremy? I'm so wanting to write about them... will see... Justin poor guy has some serious making up to do.... hold on tight it going to be a bumby ride... ;) Thank you so much for reviewing I really enjoy hearing what people think... see you next chapter.

Reviewer: NaeNae1495 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 03:31 am

Title: Chapter 1 Feeling You

plzzzzzzzzzzz make a story or chapter centreing on niko and krista's relationship pretty plzz i love all their scenes



Author's Response:

LOL! I've got two couples in mind for a story but it depends on how this ends... I'm so happy that I have a Niko and Krista Fan. :) They are cute arent they?

Reviewer: tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 02:47 am

Title: Chapter 19 Can't Be Friends

Dang Justin almost made me cry!! He better figure out what he wants or is gonna lose Jalena forever...he can't keep playing with her. Man up and go after what you want! It's obviously not Stacy, Justin! He needs to understand Stacy is using her father's misfortunes as an excuse to keep Justin interested. PATHETIC! 

Once again. I am loving your story! Please continue! I really like how you do point-of-views for Justin and Jalena. I like to read both sides of the story! :D



Author's Response:

Well thank you Megan. I'm lovin your loving it still. I seem to have gotten everyone riled up on this chapter love the show of emotion... this was my first drama scene... I'm loving the feed back thank you so much for reviewing... there was a lot of switching in this chapter of povs I'm glad you enjoyed it and it didnt throw you off. See you next chapter.. :)

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 02:33 am

Title: Chapter 19 Can't Be Friends

Wow justin is a jackass and i'm being nice. How can he hurt her like that? He better figuer something out and fix it fast other wise he going to lose the best thing that happen in his life.  Stacey I can't stand her. good update and thank for the update.



Author's Response:

wwefanforlife I thank you again for reviewing... Yep you said Justin is being a jackass poor thing got himself caught up hmm lets see if he can redeem himself...;)  I'd like to thank you also for the raiting as well... trying to get up to five start crew...lol I'm just a half a star away... See you next chapter. :)

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2011 02:17 am

Title: Chapter 1 Feeling You

Could you please update soon? I am anxious to read what happens next!



Author's Response:

Hi Jessica I am I promis it will be posted up this Friday I'm dead serious I'm just finishing up on the editing and it was such a long chapter I needed to break it up.... look out for it Friday... I hope you enjoy!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 11 2011 10:06 pm

Title: Chapter 18: Party

I am absolutely loving your story! Please continue!! 



Author's Response:

Hi Megan, thank you so much. I'm so happy you love it... look for my update on Friday!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 10 2011 11:34 am

Title: Chapter 1 Feeling You

Ok I just finish reading this awesome story.The connection Lena and Justin have is freakin good I can't wait for the next chapter Justin really need to leave Stacy alone and why she want him and Sam to friends they hate each other.



Author's Response:

Hi meko1975 I hope you dont mind me asking this personal question but were you born in 1975 because I was and your pen name is very similar to mine... my real name...

Anyways thanks for the awesome review I'm so happy you love my story and are feeling Lena and J's connection I was hoping to make it real to readers. look out for an update this Friday! :)

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 03 2011 03:39 am

Title: Chapter 18: Party

i love love love this story!!!!!



Author's Response:

Whoo hoo yeah! I love love love that you love it!

Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2011 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 18: Party

You scared me for a minute. All I saw was Justin POV and "That fat ass Becca...", I was like WTF?! I thought they were all friends, but I finshed reading and saw that is was Demon. I seriously almost had a heart attack. Anyway, I bet their dance was off the hook. I can't wait for the party, I know that's when everything's gonna come to head. Becca knows she wants some Caleb, she shouldn't be hogging Anthony too. She should give him to me! LOL. Anyway, Jeremy found that person? Is it Jalena's sister?? UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Oh yeah I whish I could decsribe the dance routine I could actually see how the dance goes in my head.  As for Becca and Caleb or Anthony hmmm we will just have to see. ;) Chapter 19 partytime I swear!

Reviewer: NaeNae1495 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2011 12:32 am

Title: Chapter 18: Party

When is Justin going to kick that ho Stacie to the curb?  She is so beneath you and your whole family doesn't like her.  If you family and friends don't like your mate there is something wrong with them.  I love this story!!!



Author's Response:

I know right? LOL! Thank you pmgayles for reviewing.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26 2011 04:57 am



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