Girrrrrrrrrllllllllll! You better get back here and finish this deliciously beautiful and poetically written story about Yuki & Sarah.
I'm ethnically & culturally mixed w/Asian and love the tone and atmosphere that you've created.
I love Onimousity's "Beast" & Soular's & Days; however, your story is the only one bookmarked on my android. OKAAAAAYYYYY!
You were almost - maybe several chapters - at the end.
All the best!
Reviewer: willieriley Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/13 01:41 am
Believe me, I know how life can get in the way of updating. However, I hope that you will find time to continue this story, soon.Reviewer: Missing You! Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/10/13 12:01 am
please UPDATE NOW it has been tooo long since I have read a new chapter. I wanna know what is going to happen next. Are they going to confess thier love for one another? I hope so now that Yuki is 'maning up'.Reviewer: tisha1234 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/24/12 01:17 pm
I think it's about time he grew a pair and fought for the woman he loves and wants since he has been given a second chance.
I wish the talk would have come a little sooner that would have been another great gift for Shoud's b-day.
I feel sorry for Takabe but this family is good for him and may they will help him flourish as well and come out of his shell. I can't understand how that poor child can go to school with a uniform he has clearly grown out of that really shows how much attention his parents show him.
I am glad for the decision to not allow Shoud to spend the night with Takabe not that he is a bad kid but they are 8 yr old with no parent supervision sure there are the servents but that is not the same. Takabe needs to be shown some love too.
I am happy to see that Kaoru is coming to her own it's about time for her to. She needs to be her own for awhile not someone's wife but her person. He true love is around the corner I am sure and if her parents give her grief I am happy that her and Sara have become friends.
Thank you for sharing please update again soon.
Happy writing!Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/16/12 07:38 am
Now how did I know that was going to happening.
All that time I kept chanting don't do it Sara...don't you do it girl...he a playa....something is off about him...then with Mr. Shinohara who hardly ever talks or says a word is out in front of his door and then whole a long drawn out convo with Kamir. Something just didn't seem right in the water.
Wouldn't it be something if Kauro got pregnant by Kamir that all it really was is that her body was allergic to Yuki's sperm are it just wasn't meant to be anyway I have heard that some women have been allergic to their partner's sperm or that her body can kill the sperm before it meets the egg because it's just not compatible. Hey! Don't judge me I'm just saying....LOL!
I'm glad that Sara and Yuki did not sleep together. and I hope Kaoru sings like a little mocking bird....since her and Yuki has gotten so "close".
Great update....I'm so excited
Happy writingsReviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/12 09:08 pm
Yuki is so freaking sexy in this chapter...I am so ready for him and Sarah to begin their romance!!!
I want a Shouda..so mature and loving...he is a prefect child..he needs a sister wink wink!!
I think he is so accepting of his dad because his wonderfully classy mom never stopped loving Yuki and that love is extremely evident in how she has raised her son!!
Shouda has all their best qualities..he will be a great big brother!!
They are going to be a wonderful family..soon I hope!!
I love Karou..I am glad she and Sarah are remaining friends..I do not blame Karou for reaching out to someone else...she knew Yuki did not love her and could not love her because his heart has always belonged to Sarah!!
Excellent excellent excellent!!
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/12 06:26 pm
I love this update and so missed this story. thank you.
Yuki is going to fight for his woman, mother of his child and future lover, and best friend. Great.
Shouda is a winner!Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/27/12 09:26 pm
Hmm...even though I know Yuki and Sara are endgame. I'm still not feeling Yuki. He's going to have to do some serious begging or something to get back in my good graces. Their issues still haven't been addressed. I'm just really not feeling them together. Something seems to be lacking...I don't know they aren't really showing me any chemistry right now. Hopefully, that will change with the upcoming chapters. I will say that I loooooooooove Darren and Percy. Keep them coming.Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/12 09:25 pm
So glad to see an update for this story. I love Yuki and Sara but they are moving entirely too slow. Although I must say it seems kind of weird for Kaoru to want to be friends with and so concerned about Sara considering she has a child with Yuki when she wanted to give him a child. How can she be so cool and not jealous and then she just goes off to sleep with Kamir, which seems totally out of character for her. Why didn't she talk to Yuki about how she was feeling and actually end her marriage before she went and slept with Kamir, whom she thought was in a relationship with her new BFF Sara? Now she is concerned about how Sara feels about it but at the time she slept with him she didn't care. I think she has a devious, manipulative and vindictive side that is just starting to resurface after being supressed for so long. Can't wait to see what happens next! Don't wait so long to update again.Reviewer: BossLady Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/12 05:21 pm
Thank you so much for this update, I truly love this story!!! I am patiently waiting for Yuki to tell Sara that he and Karou are divorcing. I hope that Sara gives Yuki a chance and doesn't shut him down because of the past. Sara please allow the man to earn your trust back because he did do you wrong in the past. Yuki a suffered because of his lack of backbone and so have you. I love this story!!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/12 02:11 pm
I wrote a really long review and it disappeared...aww well!!
I loved this chapter ...I love the parents plotting and what seems like kids are going to find their way back to each other.....Shouda gonna get his family after all I hope...and the right way too!! Love this story sweetie!
I asked Jacci if it could be retrieved and she said no. I was very sad. I wanted to read it. Well, thanks for leaving another one for me anyway.
Seems everyone is plotting at one time or another, except Sara. Hmmmmmm
Thanks for the comments as usual.
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Date: 05/05/12 07:55 pm
Thanks for a good update. The shopping spree was fun. I was LOL at the parents and their reactions to the gift for Shouda. No matter how much the husbands try to outfox their wives they will ultimately fauil. I am really surprised that Yuki's dad is so invested in his son being with Saraua. Looking forward to reading what happen nexts. Thanks
You are very welcome. I liked the shopping scene too. You kind of get a glimps of the past and what could have been all along...at least that was what I was going for. As to Kenji, I think he knows whats right and what Yuki wants and that is Sara. He knows that part he played in the past and doesn't want to make the same mistake. Though he isn't very vocal about it.
Thanks! :)Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/12 06:44 pm
I havent' read this update as of yet, but, I know it wil be great.
I liked the fact that the two mothers are going to make a plan...whether for the good or gooder (of course not a word) I am not sure.
I love Yuki father, he has a great deal of insight into things. He is funny as well.
Thanks! and Kenji is a trip. :)Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/12 05:11 pm
This was a great chapter. I loved all the family interractions. I like Kamir too, just not for Sara. I'm looking forward to seeing how you bring Yuki and Sara together.
Thanks. Writing family is fun I think. :)Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/27/12 12:19 pm