I didn't realize that there were more chapters. What a treat. I almost missed that damn smackdown. But something tells me that Yuki's mother let that go in one ear and out the other. She is so used to getting her way that she won't take Sara seriously. I felt like knocking hell of her myself.

As to pairings, I really am intrigued by Kamir. Yuki, not so much. However, I have to see more of Kamir to see if he might be good for Sara. I have a deep fondness for Kaoru and hope she's not hurt by this. I know I don't want to see Sara in an affair with Yuki. It would harken back to him having his cake... He's not someone that I think highly up right now.

This is definitely a wild ride. Kamir is a nice guy. I wince as I say that because that is usually the death toll to a relationship. But it seemed as if Yuki really wanted to try with his wife.

Wherever you go with this, I Love it.

Gosh I don't know I really love them both Kamir/Sara or Yuki/Sara, but whoever you choose...

Kamir/Sara is the couple i want to see with Yuki being a tad jealous. Yuki should stay with his wife possibly even learn to "love"her. Sara may still be in love with Yuki but Kamir could definitely make her realize it is time to move on.

Great update!!

Glad to see that both Yukr and Kaoru are starting to grow a pair. I think that Sara's kindness is opening Kaoru's eyes. She is finally becoming a woman Yuki will respect and honor.

Sara should explore things with Kamir. She may believe that she's still in love with Yuki; but I'm not quite up to forgiving his cowardice over eight years ago. I'd stay away from him just to avoid that retched shrew mother of his.

Great update!!

I think it should be Kamir/Sara...yuki had his chance and he did her wrong....she needs some she can trust..and Yuki needs to make his marriage work.. and Yuki's mother needs a attitude check...

Glad Sara called Yuki's mom on her high handedness. Poor Shouda!!!

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Yeah. Thank you! :)

There's really not a lot I can say about this story that would do it justice. Its so beautifuly written. I love it. Please update frequently!!!

Sara is the stuff..she told that cow off with such dignity and strength..wow I was proud of her and she brought that old hussy down.

I almost cried for little Shouda , he had to be scared and hungry..Yuki mom is ridiculous..how on earth do you have nerve enough to just pick up someone's child ypu jusyt met..I dont care if he is related to you..heck his dad is just getting to know him hissself..who do u think you are..but Sara let her know...I loved!!

I love Karou..I dont care what happens between Yuki and Sara..though I am all about staying married..I don;t want Karou to be hurt. Sara will be just fine no matter what..and if Yuki keeps growing some balls he might be alright too!

I like granpa as well..he did the right thing standing up for his grandson and Sara!!

You are writing the heck out of this story sweetie..so unique and excellently written..I grasp of other cultures is excellengt and vivdly portrayed through every word and nuiance..excellent!!

Love, love, love this story. I think Sara should have something fresh and new and Shouda likes Kamir, so why not.

Looks like Yuki and his wife may have a fresh start.

Thanks for updating! 

i think that i would actually like to see yuki with karou. he's way to indecisive for me and what he did to sara is a big breach to gap. i think they should work on their friendship but move on. but hey that's just my opinion. oh and i'm looking forward to the chapter where karou goes off on yuki's mom. i'd pay money to see that one.

My first choice is Kamir/Sara second choice is Sara/Yuki, Kamir/Kaoru