I did not think this story could get any better boy was i wrong fantastic job!
When will you update this story? Finish this please ---- and make it fast 😄
PENNY 88. I am a big fan. You got some serious skill. How you captures the readers attention in every chapter is amazing. I love the structure, the plot and the characters. They feel real to me. I'm glad they are working the way back to each other.
I hope I see another update for this story and I am not a hero SOON. I LOVE UR STORIES. On a scale from one to ten I would rate this story A HUGE 20. U rock. Keep writing, dont let anything deter u. U GOT dis SON!!!!!
Patiently waiting for an update.
Serene need to stop her mess..
This was an emotional chapter. I'm glad Kerry put her foot down and James listen to her. He shouldn't be running to Serene's rescue. I like that Kerry and James are inching closer and closer to each other. I hope she doesn't terminate the pregnancy.
Okay, I don't like that, as an author, you had Selene lie about getting raped. You can could do so much better than that. It made me upset for a second because when a woman is raped, most people don't believe her anyway, so using this as a plot device (that actually didn't drive the plot) was completely unnecessary. Why couldn't she had said she fell down and was too embarrassed to go into the hospital because of how it happened?
Anyway, the rest of the chapter was really interesting. Hope Kerry can work things out with Ashley (which she probably won't if we're realistic)
I actually need to address this right off the bat because it is a serious issue and I don't want anybody thinking (especially my fellow readers) that I use rape just as an unncessary plot device or I take it very lightly. Genevieve if this is a trigger for you, I apologize so much. I'm getting to the part where I need for Serene to show her true colours and that means doing anything and everything. SHe knows that James won't just come up because she hurt herself and is embarrassed. she knows that not only is he a doctor but he's compassionate, if she says it's rape, there is no way he would refuse that. So knowing that, when he still doesn't show, that puts her completely over the edge. I need my readers to see how down and dirty she could get just to get him back. Of course no logical, sane woman would cry wolf about rape just to get attention, but I don't wante Serene to be a logical sane woman at this point. Not sure if you understand. I don't usually try to explain things to my reader because I like you to draw your own conclusions rather right or wrong, but this topic is too touchy for me to leave the review untouched. Once again, I meant no offence honestly.
I know nothing but I want to know everything!!!
Great chapter but the friend scene for me at least was pretty confusing. Too many new names all at once. I was just wondering if there was going to be any Serene conflict since James and Kerry are doing so well. Can't wait for more.
Lets start with Serene first. That old hag just better be glad that James ever thought of her as a truthful person. I am glad that he didn't leave home and have Kerry just cry herself to sleep. And good for Kerry to give James the okay to go not knowing what he would do. This really might be their real start. But I hate that she if finding out the hard way to person she was during her trouble time with James. Was it that she couldn't carry a child that started her down that road of was it something else? Just an AWESOME chapter and so worth the wait.
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