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Title: Feelin' Love

maybe i was to caught up in the love making but van was suppose to tell john she loved him when he was inside her i protest lol



Author's Response:

VAn is so bad and forgetful! LOL. Dont worry, there is a strategy here. Other than that I"m glad the chapter got you caught up! Nice.

 Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 10 2011 02:00 pm


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