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Title: Chapter 3

What is up with Dominick?  Will he be competition for Akiyo.  I am trying to figure out who Akiyo doesn't want to remember.  Akiyo, your father can't respect you as a man unless you cut the strings and stand on your own two feet.  Silly rebellions won't work.

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 19 2014 03:10 am
Title: Chapter 2

This story is very interesting. I hope you are able to come back to finish it some day.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2014 09:52 am
Title: Chapter 2

keep writing! as a person who as been involved in interracial relationships and have bi-racial children, I too sometimes feel like I have some racist issue issues, but they more tied to things that i have experienced!

 Reviewer: sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 01 2011 01:38 am
Title: Chapter 2

Wow, Daizan comes off as a tough cookie. Hopefully she mellows as time goes by. Akiyo has surely met his match.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2011 04:44 am
Title: Chapter 2

omg love this story, post more soon!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 22 2011 11:23 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Daze is very angry, and that anger is going to get her into trouble.  Me likey!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22 2011 06:43 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Supreb

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 22 2011 06:30 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I am enjoying what I'm reading so far.  Your characters are engaging, for sure!

 

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 Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2011 11:58 pm
Title: Chapter 1

This is really good! An interesting and compelling first chapter. I am already very much intrigued by all of these characters (All the Ds!) and am anxious to read more.

Thank you so much for sharing this.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I really get nervous about the fanfiction I write and writing my own stuff is making my anxiety act up, but its about time I tried. I really appreciate your input as such a accomplished writer.

 Reviewer: Onimosity Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 17 2011 11:49 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Can't wait to read more.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2011 09:37 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like, please update soon.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2011 05:05 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Loved the chapter!

 Reviewer: DiamondLady28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2011 04:03 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I really like this story.  Please continue

 Reviewer: Rmahni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 17 2011 12:35 pm
Title: Chapter 1

great

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 17 2011 08:23 am


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