Wow what a story, I trully enjoyed it! I stayed up late to finish the whole thing. Thanks so much. It was different but very romantic and this is the type of stories I enjoy reading!!
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[Report This]Date: August 02 2011 09:49 am
*Smile* I enjoyed the first chapter can't wait to read the rest of the story.
Christian hmmm but has so much hate in your heart.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 02 2011 03:55 am
Hi Brenda,
I read this story over at fictionpress and it was great. Just wanted to let you know.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: August 02 2011 01:05 am
Will there be a sequel? I would like to know about max's recovery?? And the twins' health.
Author's Response:
The sequel is coming up....
Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 11:32 pm
this story was fantastic! I couldnt concentrate at work today because I kept thinking about how much I loved this story and couldnt wait to read more of it. Please post the sequel soon - this was amazing!
Author's Response:
I will be posting the sequel soon. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 10:57 pm
Great start!!!
Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 03:08 pm
This story is sooo gooood!! I could not stop reading it until the final chapter. I never see a story that get update with so many chapters in one day on this board before. I'm glad you shared this story here, it was a nice Sunday evening treat! I glad that Aura and Jeremy got married early, Eric and Nadine got married and the babies survived! Your story has alot of messages in it and truth about this prejudice and hateful world we live in. I agree completey with your message in this story!! Thanks! More please
Author's Response:
Thank you for your kind words. I wrote this last year so it was easy to post. I have the sequel and will start posting it soon. Now if you want something after the sequel, then it'll take longer because I havent picked this one back up. I've got a couple of stories going. Thanks again.
Reviewer: none Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 07:40 am
this is a fantastic story with a wonderful message. Thanks for sharing your talent with us and I can't wait to read more. Great job!
Reviewer: katie Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 06:32 am
I love this story, please update again soon. Because I hav ea feeling the when Eric's brother Matt meets Max he is going to like her alot.
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 04:06 am
Any help you need Brenda, let me know. I had a difficult time getting the hang out of posting stories and now its a piece of cake. I usually just paste through word and that works great. Shoot me an email if you need assistance.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 03:49 am
love it!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 02:10 am
Lol i'm laughing because the look on their faces when he brought a black girl to meet the family lol remind me of a time when my best friend brought me to her house to meet her mother and father they want to die when they seen me lol. I can't wait to see what happen next like the story. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 01:53 am
So excited to see you here! Welcome to The Chamber girl!
Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 01:38 am
No! Don't stop there! Great story.
Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed [Report This]Date: August 01 2011 01:32 am
Hi Brenda :) I'm also a writer on fictionpress and so glad you decided to bring this story over here, and to the reviewers who thought you plaigarized (except for the one who apologized) just ignore them apparently they didn't your name read and see that this is your story
Reviewer: JLeshay Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 11:21 pm
This is a great story and I love the christian angle. Aura's respect for her body, which is the temple of God, is inspiring. I am a 38 year old virgin and proud of it! Please update soon. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Reviewer: brenda Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 10:36 pm
OH! I'm sooo sorry, Stupid me...I didn't read your name, and I thought you had jocked the story, I really do apologize :(
You're a really great author btw :)
Author's Response:
No problem. I'm glad you were on the lookout. I'd be upset if someone did jack my story. thanks Again!
Reviewer: Pinkconverselover Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 10:22 pm
Please update soon...This a really interesting and good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Hopefully I can add a few more chapters befoe the day's end. (If I can figure out the pix thing>) LOL
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 08:11 pm
Wonderful beginning. I can't wait to see how this goes. If you need any scriptures to help this man out. Let me know. LOL
Author's Response:
OH he knows the scriptures...hes just not applying them! LOL. Thanks for the review. More to come if I can get the pix to upload!
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 07:43 pm
Great start to the story. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 07:31 pm
Supreb, please update soon.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 06:51 pm
This is going to be good!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:53 pm
Welcome Brenda!! When I saw you posting here, I was so excited!!!!! Love your stories and looking forward to reading them again. Will you also be posting Stereotypically Yours here as well. Love that story. So glad you're here as I find this site much much user friendly. Welcome to the Chamber and hope you like it here!!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks! I'm struggling here. this is my first time trying to post and it's been a challenge. I didn't realize it had to be a txt document. I got past that...now I'm trying to get the pix on the story. I like that about the chamber. I hope I'm doing this correctly, but I'm lost. This is actually a finished story, but as I said, I'm struggling here. LOL. Any pointers will be appreciated!
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:48 pm
Learn how to read. This is the SAME AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How rude!! What a way to welcome her to this site. You reviewers should be ashamed of yourself. Brenda, delete them all as well as mine!
Reviewer: This is the SAME AUTHOR.. Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:45 pm
You know if you two reveiwers took the time to read the name of the author, you would know that they are the same person. How uninformed can you be? Brenda please delete these two reviewers along with mine. Brenda you are writing a story and I am sure you do not want the ending given away from the other site, so just delete mine and theirs.
You rock Brenda, I cannot wait to read this again!
Reviewer: This is the SAME AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2011 05:41 pm