The chapters are becoming to short and hard to understand where the story is going is this a fantasy?
Just started reading this today...sorry for being late to the party...but I like your writing style and I'm intrigued by "Jasmine" and eager to learn her backstory...on to the next chapter...be back later with another review...
Thank you! Can't wait to see what you think of the rest of the story...
Thank you for continuing to enjoy! Please look forward to future chapters.
'Mr. Fix this'...love it!! I like how she was just standing there watching..then she gets caught LOL I'd die if that was me :P Well, it seems as though I'm already addicted to your story. Awesome job. Please update soon. ^.^
You betta get to stepping on this story, I need more of this honey child girl please! lol
Thank you, Ms. Nia! I'm working on the next chap, I promise. Gotta set up the main meeting just right. ;) Pls stay tuned!
An intriguing beginning. Eagerly awaiting more!
Thanks, Ms. Alice! Hope you're enjoying it so far.
This is a very nice start. Interested in reading more!
Thank you very much for the encouragement!
;) coming right up!
Just going to say I FLOVE the Choi Brothers! They are sooooo sexy!
Aren't they though? Personally wouldn't mind getting caught between them myself. ;)
this is an interesting start. very alluring, well-placed characters, making a strong introduction. genuinely excited to see more.
Gosh, thank you! Coming from you, that means a great deal. Pls continue to enjoy.
Mr. Choi is FIONE!!
Gorgeous characters, South Asian and East Asian love connection very intriguing. I'm hooked!!!
Very intriguing! I'm excited for your next update. Great casting too!
Thank you! Aren't they a good-looking bunch? Love unique pairings- Korean and Indian.
good start so far! cnt wait for an update.
I like this...Mr Choi is that hot/mysterious/sexy triple threat. More please...this is a very good start!
Thank you for the encouragement =). Hope you continue to enjoy.
YOu are off to great start, and I can't wait to read more.
My first review! Thank you. <3
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