Just started reading this today...sorry for being late to the party...but I like your writing style and I'm intrigued by "Jasmine" and eager to learn her backstory...on to the next chapter...be back later with another review...
Thank you! Can't wait to see what you think of the rest of the story...Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/12 02:17 pm
'Mr. Fix this'...love it!! I like how she was just standing there watching..then she gets caught LOL I'd die if that was me :P Well, it seems as though I'm already addicted to your story. Awesome job. Please update soon. ^.^Reviewer: SkyQueen24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/16/11 01:49 pm
You betta get to stepping on this story, I need more of this honey child girl please! lol
Thank you, Ms. Nia! I'm working on the next chap, I promise. Gotta set up the main meeting just right. ;) Pls stay tuned!Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/27/11 12:13 am
this is an interesting start. very alluring, well-placed characters, making a strong introduction. genuinely excited to see more.
Gosh, thank you! Coming from you, that means a great deal. Pls continue to enjoy.Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 08:05 pm
good start so far! cnt wait for an update.
Thank you!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/10/11 05:47 pm