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Title: Chapter 9

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That was my reaction after reading the last sentence.

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I'm no teacher so I cannot say much about the writing I can only share my emotions after reading you story.

So have a good day/night hope to see an update soon  ^_^

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2012 04:52 am

Title: Chapter 9

OMG...why did he do that?  

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2012 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 9

Did Jack REALLY take them? I didn't think he was behind the photos. 

Thanks for updating. 

Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 07:20 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Whatttttttt!??!?!?!? Nooooo it CAN'T be him! Uh uh, please tell me its actually Bitsy or Ashley or someone framing him. Also when it comes to Lila's true love I'm team Jack and Lila allllll the way, Chase is sweet and all but he's a BABY and Jack is her thunder.

I understand that Chase is head over heels but he's a boy I hope that Lila is simply temporarily getting her platonic feelings of love for Chase mixed up. I love the Lila/Jack dynamic, I feel its two equals coming together, and I love to watch them overcome all the massive obstacles in their path to eachother. I love the way they fight and I love the way they make up. I hope that eventually Jack and Chase can mend their relationship, I hope it can still be done even if Lila chooses Jack and I can't wait till we finally find out who's been stalking Lila! I hope things are not as they appear at the end of this chapter! lol Thanks again for updating!

Reviewer: Mlisa Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 07:23 am

Title: Chapter 9

OMG dont leave us hanging like that!!! PLEASE update soon. This is almost sinful!! LOL

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 06:30 am

Title: Chapter 1

OmiGOD I havent read this new chapter yet but let me first take this moment to say thank you sooooooo much for updating this absolutely remarkable fic! Sooooo exciteddd to scurry off and read now!

Reviewer: Mlisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 06:18 am

Title: Chapter 9

WHAT!!! OMG, this is too much. I hope Jack is not the one who has been taking those pictures. It will break my heart a little. I like Jack and I had originally wanted him and Lila together because I just felt they fit more. But as the story has went on it seems that Lila and Chase may be destined for the simple fact that they seem not to function when they are pulled apart. Chase has such strong passion for someone his age and what he feels for Lila has gone way beyond a crush. Chase really is in love with Lila and this scares Lila to death because she just start noticing Chase as being a man. She loves Chase, but is terrified to let that love go to the next level and I cannot blame her. She has been looking out for and after Chase since he was 13 years old and while things were innocent on Lila's part, they were not on Chase's even though he was young. Chase has been in love with Lila for years, but just recently got the courage to explore those feelings. But Lila wants what is best for Chase. She wants him to get his education and start his career. She does not want him to mistake his feelings for something they are not when it comes to her. She thinks Chase loves her for being there for him and has charted it off as a simple crush. She does not think he knows the true feelings of being in love, but I must say after his performance in this chapter, I would have left the scene like Lila because doubts would definately be present in my mind.

She knows that Chase would give up everything to be with her and that is what she does not want. If Lila allowed Chase to make love to her, his brain would have turned to scrambled eggs. Sleeping with Lila would be too much for him right now. Frankly, it would be too much for Lila. Too much passion too soon could be a disaster. If I thought the passion between Lila and Jack was off the charts, Chase and Lila's has yet to be written. I feel for Jack because in the back of his mind he knows what his grandma said was true. Lila will always choose Chase whether she knows it or not. But he thinks that because of certain circumstances, like Chase's age and their history, Lila will most likely come to him and continue to be a counseling figure for Chase. But he knows Chase will not give Lila up, but Lila will give him up for the greater good, but not completely.

What a mess. I think that if we were to fast foward 6 years, Chase will be a force to behold and Lila's denial and pretending will not be able to stand in the way of Chase's aggression. As for Jack, his fate lies in his own hands and if he took all those pictures, I feel bad for him. Lila cares for Jack, I believe, but she is not in love with him as much as I wanted her to be. Oh well, Jack has to accept this as hard has it may be. If Lila and Chase are supposed to be together, they will be. Anyway, great update. I loved it!!!! Please update soon.

 

Reviewer: oHH Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 05:35 am

Title: Chapter 9

Wow, dramatic chapter...and I don't think that Jack too those photo's, someone is setting him up.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 04:19 am

Title: Chapter 9

I like Lila and Jack.  Their relationship is not only full of fire and passion but they also confide in each other.  They work well together.  In order to deal with his guilt from his parents' death, he through himself into working and avoiding but it seems like he understands that now and desires to change and I like that about him.  I don't think he took the pictures.  How could he have? He was in them.  Whoever sent them to Lila sent them to him also. 

I do not like Lila and Chase's relationship.  I have never seen a story of an adult teacher or a mentor who got involved with their teenage student and thought Oh that's so romantic or Oh true love.  Not!

Chase lost his parents and his older brother and she became the constant support system in his life so he attached feeelings of being in love to that and because she encourage it he never learned appropriate behavior.  Does he have any friends his age?  Any hobbies, sports, anything other than Lila?  He needs to get a life and Lila needs therapy to forgive herself for her sisters' death.  I think her holding on so tightly to Chase has a lot to do with what she couln't do for her sister.

Anyway it will be interesting to see where you go next.

Reviewer: Lovestoread Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 03:34 am

Title: Chapter 1

I don't think it's Jake about the pictures. Chase's keys were stolen. Either another student or teacher is setting her up 

Reviewer: Bigsix Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 01:43 am

Title: Chapter 9

OH DAMN!
you're amazing, absolutely amazing!
I didn't see this coming at all!
Wow!
the tug of war :)
I daresay that the rope just snapped huh?
Great great great chapter!
Like all the others..huh?

Reviewer: Jamilla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 12:31 am

Title: Chapter 9

I am so glad that I found this story! Now, that I'm all caught up, I can review.

In the first few chapters, since Chase was about to turn 18, I wanted Jake to stop hating, and let his little bro have a little fun. Then, when things turned hot with Jake, I wanted Chase to take his little ass to Harvard, and let the grown folks handle their business. BUT NOW, that Chase has stepped up like a real man (erection and all), I'm rooting for him again, especially with the whole picture thing.

I love this roller coaster, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

 

Reviewer: Leoslove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2012 12:20 am

Title: Chapter 9

I don't really know what to think about the whole picture thing. I hope that Jack wouldn't be that crazy to take those pictures (or have them taken) and then post them on her door. I just don't think that he'd endanger her credibility or job like that. I'm still rooting for him and would rather her leave them both alone than for her to choose Chase. That's a weird relationship.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 11:40 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I have missed this story so much so that thank you for this wonderful update.  Jack is in trouble!!!!  Why would he do that, he scared Lily to death she thought that she was being stalked.  Jack you are jealous of her relationship with your brother and you've known for years that Chase has a crush on her.  I was pulliing for your Jack, but you have messed up big time.  I can't wait to read what happens next.  Excellent!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 10:49 pm

Title: Chapter 1

i have been waiting on an update and was glad when i saw that you had posted one......but was disappointed because the chapter was just creepy! I don't get her being confused about having romantic feelings for this kid and their whole relationship is just weird! Lila is a grown woman and to have Chase pushing himself on her and she only sqrims to get away instead explaining to him that they could never be is not the actions of an adult women with feelings for someone else!

And if Jack took these photos it just makes this even more creepy and not romantic at all!

Still i can't wait for a new update, to get some questions answers!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 08:56 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Lela is getting old. She needs to choose before she makes things worst, like sleep with Chase. She needs time to herself so she can figure out what she actually wants out of life independent from these brothers. I'm alway rooting for Chase cuz I'm young myself. I'll be fine with whoever she chooses, as long as the one she doesn't choose finds love too.

Reviewer: Genevieve Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 07:52 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I'm feeling really schizophrenic about this story.  I have no idea what direction it is going, no idea who is right or who is wrong.  It just seems a muddle.  Hopefully all will be made clear.

Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 07:25 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Omg! This chapter is just heart wrenching. The three of them keeping going round and round. Chase just needs to let go and find someone his own age. It just won't work with him and Lila. Your next chapter should be really interesting!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 07:23 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Powerful writing. I have missed this story greatly.  GLad you have us this great update to read. I hope all is well with you and that we get an update soon.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 04:40 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Good update . Love this story .

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 04:30 pm

Title: Chapter 9

First -  Voices,  thank you so very much for this update (loved it), and cant wait for the next chapter :) Also, please dont leave us hangin too long with Stereo...

Next -  Just a few points : If Jack really is an obsessive stalker like that, how in the world does he do his job if hes following Lila and Chase around? And, shouldnt he have known where Lila was headed if he was supposedly watching her every move, not surprised that she booked a flight to Cambridge? So what, he has hidden cameras in his and Lila's separate apartments that tapes them when they are together? But what about the pics from when they are on outings, its impossible for him to take pics of both of them and have her completely unaware while shes right there -__- Unless I am missing something, logically at least, it CANT be him, but I guess we shall find out.

Last - In my opinion, Chase is still sexier than Jack. I think its his boyish charm topped with the random bouts of extereme dominance/passion 

Reviewer: apathetic_smileyface Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 03:20 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I hope Lila doesn't jump to conclusions.  I don't feel that Jack really took all those pictures and pasted them on her door at school threatening her job.

There's so much more to all this than meets the eye.

I think Chase finally realizes that though he loves Lila, a sexual relationship with her is totally inappropriate.  He knows it would ruin her life and future.

I really want the two brothers to work it out.  It would be something if Grandma was behind those pictures and not Ashley. 

Right now I don't know what to think.

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 02:57 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 02:39 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Not really sure how I feel about this chapter. It was a great update and very interesting. So we have Lila running from everything that scares her to hanging out with Chase. I am not sure if she loves him the way he wants her too but I think she cares for him very deeply. I can say the same for Chase as well, if he truly loved her he would never force her to tell him how she feels. Jack, is a man of mystery do I believe he took the pictures I am not sure but I think if he had keeping them under his pillow isn't the brightest of ideas. And his personality doesn't scream obsessive only because he seems like the guy that keeps everything in him he can't loose control or he will loose his mind. I think Lily better not jump to conclusions we know where that got her the first time. I think there is more to this pictures that meets the eye. If Jack is the one then that is creepy. But I dont see him being the one that did it. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 02:31 pm

Title: Chapter 9

oh my, what a stuffed up 3some, pls let it all get better, and jack isn't that photographer lol

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2012 01:13 pm



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