yes yes thanks for the update have not read it yet but thanks for update :) :) :)
Reviewer: faye Anonymous
[Report This]Date: August 07 2012 12:40 pm
what is wrong with this woman, as much as i love this story, i cant stand lela at the moment. i hate it when two guys are constantly fighting over a woman be it a movie,tv or book, and the woman doesnt just make up her damn mind! knowing fine well its people's emotions shes playing with! this situation is mainly leila's fault, flip floping from one brother to the other while fully aware of both their feelings towards her. its very selfish on her part. as for the photos, i dont think its jack. it doesnt make sense that he would do that. if its not ashley then its the grandma. grandma doesnt want or like the fact that both brother's fragile relationship is in tatters due to this fight over leila. i tink she wants them away from leila and this whole drama!
Reviewer: dela Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 11:27 am
Jack took the photos?!?! Why would he do something like that?! This was an excellent update but I need more answers please!!
Date: August 07 2012 09:35 am
All I can say wow! I blame Lila for the position she's in. As a counselor she should have know she was using transference with Chase to replace her sister. She should put a stop to him spending time at her house.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 08:41 am
Hmm....this chapter is all over the place but in a good way. First, Jack's pain was palpable. I truly felt for him and wished he find another woman to love fiercely because it was inevitable that Chase is going to win over Lila. But Chase, I was actually realizing that it he might be it and accepting it until he pulled that obsessive move. Lila seemed frightened not turned on at all...or was it a mix of fear and arousal? Knowing Lila it was probably the latter. He wanted her so much that he was holding her hostage in his arms not letting go AND crying? Wow. His obsession was almost hard to read. Jack ...and Jack's Granny telling him to let her go and him not listening....of course he wasn't. But the pics? Did he really have someone take them or set up hidden cameras? SICK. If true he's WORSE than Chase. I was truly thrown reading that last sentence and Lila's realizaton. I mean she leaves Chase and goes to Jack (well calls him and goes to his home) which makes it seem that she chose Jack over Chase and finds the pics? Surely, someone is setting Jack up. If he did it though, it's just makes one wonder WHAT IS IT about THIS woman that makes these two men brothers at that go MAD CRAZY over her? I'm still thinking someone set him up...but I can be so sure with this story. I would really like if it another guy was introduced right now into this story, lol as she doesn't need to be either of them (not until some major issues are worked out) but I know it's focused on these three and I can't wait to see how this one ends.
Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 08:30 am
Jack took the photos?? That's spooky!! I was thinking someoneelse was messing with them all, especially Lila. Trying to scare her away. Hope the truth comes out soon. If it really is Jack, that would be a really messed up situation. Talk about twisted love!! No one wins in this mess except the one causing all the confusion!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 08:27 am
OMG!!!!! this freaking story is AMAZINGG!!!! freaking EPIC....i cant handle the anxiety of waiting for another chapter, goooooddd lord this story is good! I am totally a devoted fan to you now. Take your time and make the next chapter just as delicious por favor
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 07:49 am
omgggg! I never would've imagined the person to be Jack! That's crazyyyy.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2012 07:39 am
This story is juicier than a burger!! OMFG!! There must be more!!!
Reviewer: urtrippin2 Signed [Report This]Date: August 06 2012 09:44 pm
This story is absolutely incredible, I love Lila and the dynamic between the two brothers, I love the way Jack is trying so hard to open up to Lila and I love Lila's struggle with trying not to hurt Chase. Loving it, bummed there are so few chapters, I really really really hope you update soon!
Reviewer: Mlisa Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 05 2012 06:44 pm
i really dnt like jack...i he wants to win lilas love he should work for it... after treating her like shit for so many years for his own selish reasons he should have the decency to take thisngs a bit slow and he is too much o a control reak.....I hate that lila is being weak...
Reviewer: shani Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 05 2012 06:33 pm
Seriously.......can you finish this story?! Its not fair to those of us who phrase your writing!
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Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 28 2012 09:40 pm
WHY START SOMETHING U CAN NOT FINSH LIKE THIS STORY
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 12 2012 04:43 am
LOOKING EVER DAY FOR THIS STORY UPDATE I NEED I WANT HAVE TO HAVE MORE SOOOOON
Reviewer: FAYE Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 01 2012 01:21 am
thanks, girl. I'm up at almost 1 AM feigning like a cat in heat because of your story! lmao. I love your writing style and the dynamic between the three of them. I think you have a real talent and your storytelling is amazing. You add in so many details that it's almost like I can feel myself there, in Lila's shoes. Anyway, I hope you update soon because I absolutely love this story and it has so much more potential like what's going to happen with Lila and Jack? Will he let her go? Will Chase ever move on? What will happen at Harvard? etc.
Reviewer: teaukeri Signed [Report This]Date: June 09 2012 09:52 am
Okay, I am in serious withdrawal over this here story you fabricated Voices. Are you pausing for realtime effect or is the muse slumbering? Dirty minds would like to know this! I hope I am not asking too much but could you like "tease" us once in a while? Leave a little spoiler, or preview, snippets of some convo? i know i's not "done" but I mean why not? If you got it ,flaunt it right?
Lilacks and Lace...
I've been wathching alot of YT lately. Many clip topics touching upon the teacher(coach) etc/student "affairs" where these females seem to be going for morally broke every state you turn! Lila is NOT trying to be anywhere near that. I think Chase knows this very well, respects it even. I get why Chase is not an option in Lila's mind. Yet I can't help but feel like when Lila is with Chase she is in her primary relationship. They fight like it,talk like it and act like it.
Jack can give Lila an adult/equal/normal/No one objects but you little brother-kinda thing!
Chase...Well he can give You... EVERYONE objects! Especially your big brother-kinda thing!
Guess I'm trying to figure out why I'm not feeling her and Jack are IT!They have chemistry and their own connection but...The same way Lila says to Chase she doesn't love him "that way" She doesn't seem capable of feeling for Jack the way he feels for her either. What gives?
What are you gonna do about Harvard Lila? Either way she can't say the Almeida brothers didn't influence her choice to stay or go.
Time is not on Jacks side and I feel for him 'cuz i don't think Chase is gonna abide by any rules Lila sets up.
Please send a Proof of Life for your loyal readers! Boston is a long way away...
Reviewer: BabyPasha Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11 2012 10:56 pm
This story is so amazing, thank you! - looking forward to the next update!
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2012 06:40 pm
Lila going to Harvard! So will Chase and Lila run into each other there?... Hmmmmm
Reviewer: bonitaRI Signed [Report This]Date: May 07 2012 01:41 am
Need an update, please this is awesome!
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: April 25 2012 08:23 pm
Great story!!! Update?
Reviewer: SoccergirlBianca Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2012 05:19 am
WOW... Chase should finally know now that Ashley was behind all the pictures that Lila had recieved... and me personally i think that Lila should have knocked Ashley out
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2012 04:11 pm
Please update!!!!!! I'm on the edge lol
Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2012 04:57 am
Great chapter! Who's behind the pictures?
Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed
[Report This]Date: April 09 2012 05:29 am
Damn good chapter! You don't know who to rout for; Jack or Chase. I wish she could be with both of them.
Reviewer: flgurleygrl Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2012 05:05 am
I'm so ready for the to be back together even though they just broke up. I LOVE this story!!! its sooo INTENSE I mean im literally feeling every emotion under the sun right now... and you just stop there?? I'm dying over here!!! please update soon. I cant stand it. I CANT!!! PS: I'M SO READY FOR CHASE'S LOVE STORY!!! THEY'RE WILL BE ONE RIGHT? LIKE A SEQUEL? THERE MUST!! BECAUSE THAT KID NEEDS A GREAT LOVE STORY WITH SOME AMAZING GIRL THAT WILL LOVE HIM AS HE IS AND ALL THE BAGGAGE HE CARRIES ALONG!!!HE needs to finally no what it feels like to be SOMEBODYS #1!! I hope that he and Jack can build this amazing bond and brotherhood as well because the Love IS there.. thats plain to see... Just as Jack tells Lila he Loves her so easily.He NEEDS TO TELL CHASE AS WELL. CHASE NEEDS TO BE TOLD SOON. Thats his brother!! This story is utterly amazing.. You are going to be very successful at whatever occupation you choose. You want to write for TV? then I know without a doubt that you will. I wouldn't be surprised if you become famous! I THINK YOUR THAT GOOD!! I DONT COMMENT ON HERE A LOTBUT I DID WITH YOU BECAUSE I HAVE NEVER READ ANY STORY ANYWHERE THAT HAS MADE ME FEEL THIS EMOTIONAL!! EVER!! I think its important that you are told you are doing a very GOOD JOB!! I NEED A UPDATE OR 5 SOON!! LIKE YESTERDAY!!CHASE NEEDS A STORY TOO UNLESS I DIDNT MAKE THAT CLEAR BEFORE!!
Reviewer: Sunny Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 07 2012 07:28 am