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Title: Chapter 14. In the name of the game

Superb! Finish pleaseeeee

 Reviewer: luv_romance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/16/13 12:33 pm
Title: Chapter 14. In the name of the game

That was OUTSTANDING! I'm on an emotional rollercoaster.

You managed to make me hate, love; pity, hate; find him admirable yet loathesome But mostly, though, I hate him!

Waiting with baited breath for the next chapter!

Well done you!!

 Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/20/13 06:00 am
Title: Chapter 14. In the name of the game

Damn everything all at once, it's so exciting.

 Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/17/12 10:39 am
Title: Chapter 14. In the name of the game

Woooooow!! Ethan is truly a monster! 



Author's Response:

Hmm, aren't we all?

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/15/12 09:27 pm
Title: Chapter 14. In the name of the game

This story is amazing I really like it but the price of the book is really expensive. Ill be sorry to see this go. 



Author's Response:

I am sorry too, but this is a very large book, and $10 is not what I would qualify expensive ...

 Reviewer: Coco Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/15/12 06:35 pm
Title: Chapter 14. In the name of the game

I really don't like Ethan, I am still trying to figure why she married that fool.  Good sex does not make a good marriage especially if the sex is the only thing that you have in the relationship.  I can't wait to get to part where she finally gets away from that ahole!!!



Author's Response:

I encourage you to re-read chapter 8. Maybe you missed it.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/15/12 05:07 pm
Title: Chapter 14. In the name of the game

Amazing! Please, i'm begging for more! This might be my new fave story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment. You can buy the book.

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/15/12 03:30 pm
Title: Chapter 13. Tell me sweet little lies

Love the background on these characters!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/12 07:09 am
Title: 1.The Cast

So, I don't have wait for updates, I can purchase this story in full?  



Author's Response:

yes, you can get it on kindle, or if you wait for a week, you'll be able to buy the paperback

 Reviewer: Grace Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/12 03:16 am
Title: 1.The Cast

this is goooooood! keep the updates coming!



Author's Response:

thanks, but you can always get the book...

 Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/08/12 07:07 pm
Title: Chapter 13. Tell me sweet little lies

I really don't like Belinda, that man loved that little girl and she lied to him from the very beginning.  What a lying ho!!!  Belinda and Ethan would be perfect for each other.



Author's Response:

you are funny! I truly never thought of this!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/08/12 07:02 pm
Title: Chapter 12. Flight or fight

Wow, powerful chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/05/12 10:11 pm
Title: Chapter 12. Flight or fight

Ethan is an abusive asswipe kill him please!!!



Author's Response:

you're going to be disappointed...

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/05/12 02:20 pm
Title: Chapter 12. Flight or fight

This is so good.  I am going to have to buy a copy.



Author's Response:

Thank you , and please do!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/05/12 05:21 am
Title: Chapter 12. Flight or fight

I just bought my copy of this book and I can't wait to read it. Thank you, thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/05/12 04:25 am
Title: Chapter 12. Flight or fight

So what is the title so I can purchase on Kindle



Author's Response:

It is the same ? The One.

check on my contact form and there is a link.

Thanks

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/04/12 11:17 pm
Title: Chapter 11. Who the hell are you? Part II

I was so happy to read this update.  I had to go back and review a few chapters and I'm hooked all over again.  Please update soon!



Author's Response:

It's coming.

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/12 12:12 pm
Title: 1.The Cast

Welcome back!  The PI has found her i can't wait 2 c what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks.

 Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/03/12 05:25 pm
Title: Chapter 11. Who the hell are you? Part II

Thanx for this update, I have so missed this story.



Author's Response:

You're welcome. Now you can finally get the book and have it all on kindle!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/12 02:42 pm
Title: Chapter 11. Who the hell are you? Part II

I hate cliffhangers. Please update soon.

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/12 02:37 am
Title: Chapter 7. Doesn't she know...?

I'm laughing because the player got played.

Is Ethan Vi's ex?

Is Luca her son?

Author's Response:

he did, in more ways than one!

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/12 02:23 am
Title: Chapter 5.You changed everything for me part I

I completely forgot about this story. I have to catch up on the rest of the chapters. This ia a very good read. I am so excited. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much !  you might want to get the book and do it in go...

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/03/12 02:14 am
Title: 1.The Cast

looking forward 2 an update!



Author's Response:

It is on! Thanks

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/26/12 08:21 pm
Title: 1.The Cast

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

I just have! Thanks

 Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/12 09:15 am
Title: Chapter 10. Who the hell are you? Part I.

Great story and I can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

I just have updated! Thanks

 Reviewer: SoccergirlBianca Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/12/12 10:53 pm


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