Thank you!
Reviewer: diarylover Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2018 12:43 pm
Okay, went to Amazon to purchase The One, but like always I read the reviews. I was very disappointed. The kindle price is nearly $10 (given it is over 500 pages) and a few of the reviews state the same issue I had already noted on Valentchamber. I want to purchase the ebook, but I was hoping a published version would have revised and edited the constant and repeated flashbacks, apparently purchased readers said it didn't. Even Mallory Malone and Sienna Minx's kindle versions with their numerous successes and publishings are at least about $5 or $7. Why pay an exorbitant price for a book that is reputed for repeating pages. If this story is revised, i would happily purchase it and recommend it.
Author's Response:
Fisrt off, thanks for reading the chapters.
About the reviews you read, I can only say each person is free to have their opinions, but the chapters are not repeated, the flashback are essentials because they point to each person interpretation of one event and how they act/react according to what they feel to the event. This is why each character have their own voice.
it is not for everyone, but it is what is is, and as a writer I don't change my style of writing or storytelling to suits comments.
And yes, the price reflects the work. a 800 pages book cannot be the same price of a 150 pages novel.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: May 10 2017 08:34 am
Why do I think this man will never give up. And what this woman got going on in her privilege mind. James watch out!! Great update honey!
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[Report This]Date: May 05 2017 05:40 pm