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Title: Chapter 1:It all came crashing down

All I can say is I'm heart broken... Seriously I felt all the emotions she went through. I feel sorry for them both but more her... how could he di that to her? and the ex what was up with that, from the smirk she had on her face she probably slipped him something to get him to sleep with her. I eagerly await more this was a really good chapter. :)

 Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2011 08:49 am
Title: Chapter 1:It all came crashing down

This smells like a set-up. He knew Eve was coming, so either he's dumb as a stump or that skank orchestrated this. I'm going with the latter.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 06:15 pm
Title: Chapter 1:It all came crashing down

So...there has to be a good explanation why he would be in bed with another woman when he knew his wife was coming.

 Reviewer: qualidee3 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 03:15 am
Title: Chapter 1:It all came crashing down

Nice start.

 Reviewer: Monique Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2011 12:12 am
Title: Chapter 1:It all came crashing down

I am so glad that you decided to write this story again.  It still pissing me off that she caught in bed with his ex-ho, I mean ex-girlfriend, but it isn't what it looks like.  Negro please!!!!  I really hope that he takes himself to get tested, to see if that ex-ho did drug him.  How did the ho find him and get into the hotel room with him?  The ho obviously had help, but shame on you A.J.!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 10:18 pm
Title: Chapter 1:It all came crashing down

Great, interesting start!

Something about that Jillian isn't right . . . seems like a stalker & schemer to me.

For some crazy reason, I think AJ's innocent.  Can't wait to read more.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 10:18 pm
Title: Chapter 1:It all came crashing down

Loved it! Cant wait to see what happens next, more please!!

 Reviewer: ann Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 09:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1:It all came crashing down

"I would never cheat on you. I know I wouldn't do this to you. This has to be a mistake."

Bytch, please.

 Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 08:11 pm
Title: Chapter 1:It all came crashing down

What a begining.  Eve excitment turn to shock, cheating husband. I need to read more.  Update soon.

 Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 22 2011 02:34 pm


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