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Title: Chapter 7

Great update! I don't know who I like Rosco with more, Shaun or Finn! Can't wait for more!!!

 Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 03 2012 05:27 am
Title: Chapter 3

I really love this story...Its different from any other story on this site...Your writing skills are great!!! I really hope you finish it because its a great story

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Date: December 20 2011 05:01 am
Title: Chapter 5

Aw I Shaun and Rachel need to talk, it seems to be somuch that needs to be said between them.

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Date: December 19 2011 03:55 pm
Title: Chapter 5

ahhh..he's a sweetie

 Reviewer: readywonder Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 19 2011 10:00 am
Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter! Love how Shaun came to Rosco's rescue, more please!!!

 Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 19 2011 03:08 am
Title: Chapter 4

Poor Shaun, he has to realize that not everyone would like Rosco as much as he does because of the hate for blacks that is pervasive during that time.  He may be aware that she is trying to pass, but is he not aware that by him being careless he could ruin this for her and the Hunts.  Where they were was not the place to have that conversation.  Please update soon.

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 10 2011 05:48 am
Title: Chapter 4

 Woow! Can't believe Shaun and Rosco have a past! Can't wait to see what you come up with next!!!

 Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 09 2011 07:24 pm
Title: Chapter 4

OH no.  Will Shaun keep quite?  Can't wait for more...

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2011 12:17 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Interesting concept.  Can't wait for more.

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Date: December 09 2011 11:53 am
Title: Chapter 4

I actually really like your story! Finn is quite the character, hard to understand at times. I like Rosco AKA Rachel. She seems like a smart chick. Can't wait for the rest of the story!

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Date: December 09 2011 05:08 am
Title: Chapter 3

I like this story. I am glad that they are not treating her different. Please more chapters

 Reviewer: foxyprime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2011 07:52 am
Title: Chapter 3

Great update! Can't wait to see how/if the relationship develops between Shaun and Rachel.

 Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 08 2011 06:26 am
Title: Chapter 2

I look forward to seeing what direction this story goes. Like what I've read so far!

 Reviewer: ammalicious Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 25 2011 04:35 am
Title: Chapter 1

I must say I was quite apprehensive about reading this story, the reason for this is that I don't know or understand the psychology of such behaviour. I figure it has to be all sort of reasoning and circumstances to trigger that cause and effect.  But I did watch a movie awhile back called 'Imitation of Life' I think where such a storyline happen, the ending was very sad indeed.  I also read an interracial book called 'A twist of Fate' by Beverly Clark, where a similar storyline take place, but not with main characters but with the man's mother.  She was of black parentage, but look white and married white and was afraid to have children in case their skins was dark...You guys need to read the book, it's a good read.  But even knowing these happened I am still at lost as to why.  So hopefully reading this story will enlightening me some more. So please continue writing.

 Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 02:49 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like, please update soon.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 03:35 am
Title: Cast

I say with all encouragement to go for it and work your story out.  Its a delicately held intraracial subject that rarely gets an airing these days and should be explored. 

I also love the fact that you used the late great River Phoenix for your visual love interest cue. He was hot!

 

I look forward to seeing how you weave this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I've been dying to use him in a story for sometime now, I just couldn't figure out what his image would fit with. I love his work, and I think he works best in periods before the 2000s. I'm taking it way back here, and I am dotting all my I's and crossing my Ts with this one.

 Reviewer: Pinklemonade Signed [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 03:12 am
Title: Cast

I cant wait great story idea.



Author's Response:

Thanks

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 01:03 am
Title: Cast

Where the first chapter, looking forward to this story.



Author's Response:

It's up now =)

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 24 2011 12:31 am


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