I need more, please? Lol and bring back Brandy and Maks
Reviewer: NJ Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 05/07/13 07:37 pm
Wow, what a turn of events. Leo wanted answers. Now I have some questions. Where were they to let their daughter end up in an environment like that? How has she managed to still be alive? I know I would have snapped her little neck. She had to be on crack getting involved with those crazies. Alana crack kills. PUT THE PIPE DOWN.
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/13/13 08:04 pm
I cannot believe that man put his son up to impregnanting that poor girl all for money....he belong in jail...
Reviewer: nightseer Signed
[Report This]Date: 04/03/13 09:49 am
JUICE! Just make sure the hero and heroine are clean in the end!
Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed [Report This]Date: 04/02/13 08:13 pm
Great update. I will say I don't like the turn of events; I was hoping they were recording or something... I'm looking forward to how they get out of it.
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 04/02/13 05:53 pm
Wow, that was intense. Wonderful update. Looking forward to the next few chapters in this story arc.
Reviewer: Bballangel726 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/30/13 02:42 pm
great update!
Author's Response:
Thank you! =)
Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/29/13 05:02 pm
Wow! really unexpected results...I love the way you write your stories, please continue
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!! =)
I'm finally starting to get my writing groove back, which means I can now also get back to FYD. Update's coming soon... 'ish'. LOL!
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 03/28/13 10:16 pm
I am so glad that they found out the truth as a family and maybe now Alana will not be a stupid. Please let that child have an abortion!!
Author's Response:
Whether she keeps it, aborts it, or gives it up for adoption, she WILL be forced to grow up. No matter what she chooses, she will become jaded, scarred, and completely aware of just how not ready she was/is to have sex. Let's just say I see a lot of Taylor Swift and early Alanis Morrisette in her future... LOL!!!
Thanks for reviewing! =)
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/28/13 08:33 pm
Please let the DiCaprios get out of this because this is so wrong but any parent in there situation could be justified in doing what they did!!!
Author's Response:
Someone will HAVE to pay, in fact more than one -- now who those people are exactly, I cannot say. ;-)
Thanks for reviewing. =)
Reviewer: BossLady Signed [Report This]Date: 03/28/13 07:43 pm
Wow. That was intense. Please keep this family together and not send Leo to jail.
Author's Response:
I can make no promises... without spoiling it. LOL!
As always, thanks for taking the time to review. =)
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: 03/28/13 07:43 pm
Leo doesn't play when it comes to his wife and kids and I don't blame him... Leo and Dani are about to SET IT OFF!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey, Keikei! =)
Things are definitely going to get crazy... You know how they do. LOL! Thanks for reviewing. =)
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/18/13 10:30 pm
Good Lord Leo! Yeshhhhhh! LOL
Seriously though, loving the way he steps up, admits, his failures, and does something about it. This family is an excellent example of being resourceful and determined.
Majorly disgusted by how wanton and hoeish Jessie's mother is/was/will be forever? Whatever, that whole family sounds white trash and racist. Really? Stubbing out your cigarette in the left over pizza? Gross beyond measure. What a great set of in-laws Alana has chosen for herself.
Danielle is def going to kicking ass and taking names when she steps into that spot. Lawd have mercy! LOL
Author's Response:
LOL!!! Loose women keep trying, but Leo's heart is with one woman, and one woman only.
Reviewer: LittleRedRidingHood Signed [Report This]Date: 03/18/13 03:21 pm
Thank you so much for coming back. I was just thinking about this story the other day. I love the update and look forward to the drama that is going to come. I love that Leo loves his family.
Author's Response:
I'm glad that I finally had a little free time to put something together. Thanks for hanging in there. =)
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: 03/18/13 12:03 pm
YEAH!!!! Thank you for the update. Does that also mean that FAcing your Destiny will have an update!!!??? Please.
Author's Response:
When things settle down a bit I definitely will. Thank you for reading! =)
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/18/13 11:10 am
Welcome back! The calm before the storm. I'm looking forward to this.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It took a long time for my mojo and I to reconnect, but I'm slowly getting there. =)
Reviewer: Bballangel726 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/18/13 07:46 am
please update soon...This chapter was just getting really good but ended in the middle. However, I still love the characters and the story
Author's Response:
Hey, Bredreaway! =) There is so much coming up that it wouldn't have made sense to end it at any other point. I promise that I will TRY to get the next chapter up some time today; it's completed, just needs some editing. Thanks for reviewing! =)
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 03/17/13 11:06 pm
Alana is 13 and pregnant what a shame but to have a father like Leo is an awakening for her. Lets just see what happens next.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: 12/10/12 10:49 am
Leo....whew Leo. Jesse umm you might not get the acting shot. But get shot.
Author's Response:
LOL! Jesse will definitely think long and hard before he whips it out again... That is if he has anything left to whip out...
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/04/12 05:26 pm
Wow! Looking forward to the drama. I am glad that you did not drag it out and now they know of the pregnancy. Love Leo he is a Dad and he loves her. Cannot wait until you update.
Author's Response:
Girl, there is so much coming up with all three stories that I really don't have time to waste. Plus, I used to HATE when my soaps dragged out storylines (eventually, I would stop caring all together).
One of the things that I love about Leo is, although Alana may not be his biological daughter, he couldn't love her any more if she were. She will always be his little girl.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: 12/04/12 05:14 pm
Yeesh, that was intense...looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I haven't been feeling the best, but I'll try to have something up soon. =)
Reviewer: Bballangel726 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/04/12 02:50 pm
It's about to be on like a pot of neckbones! Leo is on fire about his baby, Jessie is in for a rude awakening. I want Daneo to shut Alana down, no going out with friends just school and home. After they school that punk ass Jessie Alana needs to go to the doctor to get an exam. They let that child have too much freedom for a thirteen year old, The gk orse is already out the barn, but her existence needs to change. Shit it down!
Author's Response:
LOL! Yes it is!
Things are about to change for everyone, and it will not be pretty.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 12/04/12 02:30 pm
Ohhh boy, Leo is not playing and I don't even feel sorry for Jessie either
Author's Response:
Leo is about to wreck shop, and Jessie won't be his only target...
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/04/12 02:09 pm
Shit is getting ready to get real!!! Leo and Danielle are gonna go in on that boy.. I almost feel sorry for him..
Great update!
Author's Response:
Yes, it is! Alana's actions will cause more damage than any of them could have ever imagined.
Thanks for the review! =)
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/04/12 01:52 pm
Sorry I don't always leave a review, this is one of my favorite stories, I'm still hanging in!
Author's Response:
Hey, girl! Good to see your font. Thanks for reading and reviewing. =)
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 12/03/12 12:15 am