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Title: Chapter 6

Please continue this story!! It's so intriguing!!!

 Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 11 2015 04:41 am
Title: Meet the Cast

Loving the story but can you please repost the pictures of the main characters. Can't see them on the cast pics 

 Reviewer: spyan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2015 01:06 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Ethan don't marry that ho Anna, all she really eants is your money.  Janet is who you need in your life, het love wouldn't be circumspect. Anna is a gold-digger eho is yrying to tske care of het famiky by using you.  Run, fon't walk away from Anna!  How dod Janet end up in that hotel where Ethan was?  I don't like Ethan's father,  can't stand Anna or her parents. Lisa is a bitch! Fallon is a cutie!!: Wake up Ethan! Dump Anna!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2015 11:36 am
Title: Chapter 5

This story is so intriguing , I hope you are able to finish it someday.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 26 2014 10:06 am
Title: Chapter 5

 

This is so wrong not finishing this story...could u please update!!!:-)

 Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08 2013 08:51 am
Title: Chapter 5

I hope that you decide to finish this story because the fact that you ended it with this cliffhanger is driving me crazy. I want to know how her Dad reacts to seeing her there. Does he come to her rescue? Does she see Ethan again. Really want to know how this story turns out.

 Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2013 08:49 am
Title: Chapter 5

WTH is going on? How is it she can't escape? Whats up with Lisa betraying her friend like that?

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 09:31 am
Title: Chapter 5

WTF!? PLEASE! Do not tell me that is her real father? No wonder he will getting a divorce! He is frequenting hookers!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2012 09:40 pm
Title: Chapter 4 - Janet

Omg! This is the start to a life being a whore! I know she wishes she had listened to her friend Shontelle and her momma,and stayed away from Jamal! Hindsight is 20/20!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 30 2012 08:55 pm
Title: Chapter 3

WTF? I am so freakin lost! Who is Steven?Ethan's brother?Other than that the story is fine!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 30 2012 08:24 pm
Title: Chapter 5

OMG, that's why her parents are filing for divorce. I hope he has the sense he was born with and gets his daughter out of this. I doubt it. Ethan and his dad have to be going to the same party, and I hope he saves her.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2012 05:38 am
Title: Chapter 4 - Janet

I would beat Lisa's a@@ right now. She is nobodys friend. Does she not realize what she is bout to do is be apart of some man/men raping her supposed friend.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 26 2012 05:25 am
Title: Chapter 5

Ok...excuse me while I have an out of body experience here! I want to beat the ever-lovin' sh*t out of Lisa right now!! This dude knocks the snot out of Janet and just takes her!! Like she has no say in the matter because he's promised her out to a client who happens to be his own brother. He's just gonna make her his prostitute after she keeps telling him no. And Lisa is gonna hold her there against her will? What's in this for her? I cant even believe that!

I hope her father has some conscience about what's happened to her daughter and helps her. Ugh!!

Ethan needs to grow a pair and Anna is just sickening. She criticizes Janet, but she isn't in any better of a position. She and her parents are trying to use Ethan to get out of poverty themselves, so what is she talking about? Thats what all this desperation is all about. All they could talk about was getting a new house out of the deal and putting their other daughter through school. Like all of that should be on Ethan some how.

Good stuff!

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 10:18 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Wow what a cliff hanger!!! Really liking this...

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 09:51 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like!!!

 Reviewer: cocoablue Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 09:27 am
Title: Meet the Cast

Love the cast but i cant see janet's picc. can i have the website you found her pic on so i can have the full cast in my head?? sorry for the inconvienence :( 



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Reviewer: kedtou Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 08:52 am
Title: Chapter 5

I am so disgusted that her father is Lisa john for the evening.  My only hope is that she runs into Ethan and she asks for his help.  Because her ahole of father is not going to help.  That sperm donor is nothing but a punk b*tch!!  He momma is evil incarnate.  How can you throw your child out?  She made a mistake a stupid mistake but a mistake none-the-less.  I can't wait for Karma to pay them visit.  That ho Lisa needs to be shot point right between the eyes!!  Magic Mike just needs to be run over by a mac truck!!  Please!!

Don't make us wait as long for the next update!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 06:03 am
Title: Chapter 5

Oh my, so Ethan dad just shows up.  To bad Ethan is still trying to get his dads respect.  Why is Ethan still with the bubble head idiot?  As for Janet I felt bad that she was caught trying to leave and then to see her father was Lisa's date.  Just scandalous.  I hope that you will update soon.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2012 12:54 am
Title: Chapter 4 - Janet

 

Wow with friends like Lisa you don't need enemies. How is that helping Janet, but getting her involved with a pimp and keeping her enslaved against her will. Wooooow this story is strange, but intriging......I can stand to read a lot more. Keep it up! Will the next installment be from Ethan's point of view?

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2011 03:24 pm
Title: Chapter 4 - Janet

I just lost my review for this chapter because this damn thing logged me out while I was reading.

I'm too pissed right now to re-write it. I'll be back later.

I love this story and look forward to reading more.

 

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2011 12:51 pm
Title: Meet the Cast

Beautiful cast.

Where is Fallon??

 Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2011 12:12 pm
Title: Chapter 4 - Janet

Poor Janet, she is in a mess.  She should have taken Ethan's offer.  Damn what a traitor Lisa is.  To bad Janet thought that she could trust her. Janet had a history of making bad choices.  No wonder she is in the predicament that she is in. To bad she trusted Jamal and now Lisa. Thanks for a great update

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2011 11:00 am
Title: Chapter 4 - Janet

Can I choke that bitch?

 Reviewer: FrenchieJonesy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2011 08:02 am
Title: Chapter 4 - Janet

oh no...poor Janet.  She needs to get out of their before Lisa and Malcolm try to keep her in their lifestyle against her will.  She needs to escape as soon as possible...

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2011 08:21 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I can't wait to find out more about Ethan's past.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2011 09:10 am


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