To bad Janet's family is falling apart. Her parents are getting a divorce, her younger brother is off to college. I hope that she will allow Ethan to help her eventually. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: December 13 2011 09:09 am
I can't believe that her friend Lisa is trying to get her to be a prostitute. I wonder what Ethan's pass is. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 08:48 am
Short and interesting start to the story.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 08:47 am
Great cast. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 08:46 am
WTFreak? You are right but I guess back story is always needed in order for the story to flow better.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 03:18 am
All this tells me about Anna is that money is her main goal with Ethan. No matter what he did she wouldn't be denied....hmmm.
Janet should have listened to him. That running off was just foolish; given she was just thinking about going to that slimball to sell her body for money! Geez!
Good stuff!
Author's Response:
Hehe, I love how quickly everyone is picking up on how Anna is nothing but a user. LOVE it lol
But yeah...Janet is foolish and proud and she has her reasons for not listening to Ethan. If it were me though, I don't think I would be able to refuse him lol
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 03:11 am
TEN!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 03:06 am
First, I have to say that I love the actor that you have casted as Ethan. He is a tasty morsel!!! I don't like Anna, first of all you love a man that doesn't love you. Ethan is scared to love, so what he wants is someone to ease his lonilness and to be a mother to Fallon. Ethan you are hurting Fallon by marrying a woman that you do not love. What lesson are you trying to teach her about love, marriage and relationships? Wake the hell up Ethan!! I love. love, love this story!!!
Author's Response:
Haha. I'm glad you don't like Anna! I don't like her myself, but yeah....hopefully she'll see that Ethan doesn't love her before her little heart gets broken.
And Matt Bomer IS tasty. hehe
Thanks for reading! <3
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 06:30 pm
Awesome chapter! Can't wait to find out about Ethan's past!
Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 08:21 am
I don't understand how her parents just kick her out and not wonder how she is doing, the parents seem to be selfish. Janet's brother probably can't do too much since he is still living under their parents' roof, they probably threaten him to not bother with trying to find her. Now she realizes the world doesn't revolve around her when it's too late. Hopefully Ethan will offer her a job or something. I'm not liking Anna, she seems more worried about having Ethan as a husband for her social status. She straight lied when he asked her about it. Ethan doesn't even love her so why is he going through the madness when he is going to be more miserable after they get married. Getting married definitely ain't going to change his past, he need to think about that since he has a daughter to raise.
Author's Response:
Janet's parents ARE very selfish. I didn't want to make Janet's family stereotypical but they're rich and snobby and they're really proud. The reason why they threw Janet out will be explained more later on, but...you would think they would try to help her even after she made the "big mistake" but...nope.
As for Ethan + Anna, I really don't know why Ethan is still with Anna either. I don't like her. He doesn't love her per se but Ethan doesn't really feel he deserves love because of his past. The only reason why he's marrying Anna is because he wants a good mother for his daughter...and even though Anna is shallow, she would make a great mother for his daughter. Or at least that's what he thinks.
We'll see what happens next!
Reviewer: Ttee72 Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 07:12 am
My big problem here is how is it that her brother is kinda cting like everything is everything, ya know? His sister is out on the streets who knows where and he doesn't seem to be particularly bothered by it. I would be going crazy; and I would be on my parents ass all the time about it. But he's going to school so whatever huh? That bothered me.
This is going to be interesting to see how you resolve this situation with her family.
Author's Response:
Yeah, you're right. Gerald should have been bothered by the fact that his sister is on the streets, but...well you'll see. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 07:01 am
Keep it coming!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 05:21 am
Need info on Ethan's past!
Author's Response:
Ethan's past will be explained as the story goes on! Don't want to give everything away all at once. ;)
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 05:04 am
I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. Now with the cast pictures up, I couldn't help laughing who you pick to be Malcolm the magic man, that was low man. So where is the pic for Fallon? She sound cute. From what I just read this story is going to be intense, so can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yeah I couldn't resist picking Brad Pitt to play Malcolm. He's the guy you love to hate and hate to love...sorta lol
I was trying to find a pic of Fallon, but I don't know who could her. Hopefully I'll find a pic for her soon.
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: skriver Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 04:54 am
I love the cast!! Denzel, I love him!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 04:31 am
Ethan and Janet are perfect for each other, please don't let Ethan marry Anna!!! Why does Ethan think that he doesn't deserve love and happiness? Fallon is such a cutie!!!
Author's Response:
I know! Ethan and Janet ARE perfect for each other. Hopefully they realize this before Ethan makes a big mistake and marries Anna. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 03:42 am
There's a bit of melancholy that I feel when reading about Janet. It makes wish for a better life for her. I hope she finds someone that will be her support system. Even though she has family, it just seems asif she's all alone in the world and that just makes me sad. You've drawn me into the story, Chica.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
I'm glad I drew you in. Hopefully the next chapter doesn't disappoint! :)
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: December 12 2011 03:08 am
Ok, the pimp deserved that smack down! Now for this Ethan character, hummmm....very interesting! I wonder what he means by his skeletons? hummmmmm, and who was being offered to him for a price and why? I am going to like this story.....Please keep it coming and keep it interesting...and keep the plot twisting! I think I will add you to my tracking list!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2011 03:12 am
I'm glad someone got her out of that situation.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2011 01:00 am
Oh my goodness this is getting good. I am glad that someone stood up for her. I hope someone drop kicks Malcol. Please update more chapters
Reviewer: foxyprime Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2011 07:40 am
I love this!!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2011 07:29 am
please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 08 2011 06:30 am
YES, it is definitely still interesting!!! This update was good, can't wait to find out more about the her Ethan is referring to!!
Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 08 2011 06:13 am
This story is interesting. Please update son!!!
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: December 05 2011 02:37 pm