Title: Intro

I can't wait to read more!!!  More please!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 06:42 am

Title: Intro

Welcome to the chamber!! Great way to start off because the ending left me wanting more, keep the updates coming!!!

Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 05 2011 03:15 am

Title: Intro

Ooooh looks like this could be a favouriteof mine! More pretty please :) Lovely start

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2011 11:25 pm

Title: Intro

Welcome!!

Great start!!

Things are never so hopeless. Let's see what experiences and lessons lead Janet and Ethan to fnally realize this.

Happy writing!! And post as often as you can.

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2011 10:52 pm

Title: Intro

Interesting......I would like to have had a little about the male lead in this story, but for now....I think the female lead has an interesting story to tell. Keep it up! I believe you got something worth writing about!

KittyOh48

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2011 10:51 pm

Title: Intro

very interesting - cant wait for more!

Reviewer: katie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2011 10:41 pm

Title: Intro

I would like to know what your planning for it next.

 

Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 04 2011 10:23 pm

Title: Intro

I am liking this so far. Please continue.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2011 10:17 pm

Title: Intro

Wow.  Interesting start.  I hope that she won't have to lower herself to selling her body on the street.  I look forward to more hopefully soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

I'm working on the next installment of the story now, so we'll see what happens next. :)

Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: December 04 2011 08:13 pm



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