Title: Chapter 30

Yay... I'm sooo glad that everything worked out. Now I did not see her being pregnant at the end even though I know they were having sex unprotected. I'm happy all the same! Great story. 



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Again thank you for reading...I am overjoyed.

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Date: September 01 2016 11:16 am

Title: Chapter 29

OMG... That chick is that crazy over her 'status' that she tried to kill Jason?! I'm glad that his dad protected him like a father should though. Thank God that his surgery was successful and that he's going to be alright. Trust me Jason, she knows that now.

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Date: September 01 2016 11:01 am

Title: Chapter 28

Damn..... Daddy Westmore doesn't play any games. But I'm overjoyed. That family gets exactly what they deserve and more. Hehe

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Date: September 01 2016 10:16 am

Title: Chapter 27

I must say, I'm proud of daddy Westmore for doing that. I hope he is ready for the task ahead because Christopher will not be a small feat. He is going to take a lot of work. 

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Date: September 01 2016 09:53 am

Title: Chapter 26

That's right Mama Bear Get your family right and protect it from those bitches. They done messed up now! I feel bad for Chris and Jason's relationship. I hope they are able to fix it. I feel like some of his anger is mis-directed. 

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Date: September 01 2016 09:37 am

Title: Chapter 25

His dad is truly fucked up for that. It was not the time nor the place to have a discussion like that. I understand his intentions but that shit could have waited. If anything, you're looking into the wrong damn girl. You need to check that bitch and her mom that Christopher is about to marry. 

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Date: September 01 2016 09:22 am

Title: Chapter 24

Damn... I must say, Erin's mom is cutthroat but someone seriously needs to cut her ass all the way down. I hope Jason and his father are the ones to do it. And extremely soon. 

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Date: September 01 2016 09:03 am

Title: Chapter 23

Are you fucking serious? Because your damn daughter can't keep her damn legs closed you are going to attempt to destroy a man from a more powerful and wealthier family than yours just so that you can have a piece of that wealth? Do you really think that is going to work chick? I can't wait for Jason to get both of y'all asses. You're just as fucked up as your whoring daughter. 

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Date: September 01 2016 08:30 am

Title: Chapter 22

This chick is for the damn birds. She better not come after Devyn if she knows what's good for her. 

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Date: September 01 2016 08:15 am

Title: Chapter 21

That's right. I'm glad that Devyn didn't beat that girl's ass for saying those things at the party but she more than deserves it. And he said the L word!!! Now don't think we didn't notice that you didn't say anything back Devyn, stop playing and tell the man that you love him too. We all know you do. 

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Date: September 01 2016 07:55 am

Title: Chapter 20

Wait... So Jason and Devyn are going to the party. Christopher and Erin are going to the party... This is going to be good as all hell. 

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Date: September 01 2016 07:33 am

Title: Chapter 19

Girl let it go. He just told you that you will never be anything more to him than friends. Even if the relationship doesn't pan out like the others, he has never made a move on you. Just accept that and move on. Be thankful for the friendship. 

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Date: September 01 2016 06:38 am

Title: Chapter 18

Yeah... He wants her long term. I think I hear wedding bells!! 

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Date: September 01 2016 06:22 am

Title: Chapter 17

Yes he did!!!!! Girl they got down honey!! Multiple times. Hehe

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Date: September 01 2016 05:55 am

Title: Chapter 16

Yay!!!!! She said it. Finally. Nice house by the way. 

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Date: September 01 2016 05:37 am

Title: Chapter 15

That was awesome. It looks like she had pure fun. Truly enjoyed herself. That's a good sign. And she kissed him!!!! Look at you! 

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Date: September 01 2016 05:17 am

Title: Chapter 14

She just can't get enough of the black penis!! Shame. Now it's going to ruin everything she and her family had hoped for. Hehe. I'm glad that Devyn finally told Jason about the affair. She shouldn't feel guilty, it's not like she hooked them up or anything. She didn't even know the damn girl. And now they are going on a date!!! I'm excited for her. I wonder what he could possibly have planned? 

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Date: September 01 2016 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 13

Yes she does. I hope that she is able to tell at least one of the brothers what's going on with ole girl. I don't know if she will tell Christopher directly but at least tell Jason so he can have it verfied and then he can tell his brother with the evidence that he has. Or she can tell Chris with the help of Jason. I think that route will be best. And she better do it soon. It's getting the best of her and Jason. Not good. 



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Thank you for reading and taking the time to leave all of your wonderful reviews

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2016 12:07 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Awww man... Just when they were getting somewhere. If only she would sit still long enough to talk to the damn man she would have learned that Erin is not his fiance but his brother's. 

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Date: August 31 2016 11:36 am

Title: Chapter 11

Really Devyn?? How can you leave him like that? After he looked out for you when you had a hangover. Not cool at all. Really low actually. That man poured out his heart to you and you just dismissed him. Who's the bully now? Sidenote: He told her that he thought she was beautiful!!!!!! 

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Date: August 31 2016 11:19 am

Title: Chapter 10

LOl. The family is already starting to accept her! She's off to a great start!!! Haha

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Date: August 31 2016 11:06 am

Title: Chapter 9

I think he needs to hunt her down and make her face it as well. It's time to stop playing damn games and deal with it. 

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Date: August 31 2016 10:29 am

Title: Chapter 8

LOl. Hehe. You just met the fiance girl!!!! She better stop being a punk and just tell the damn man already. 

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Date: August 31 2016 10:12 am

Title: Chapter 7

Ohh.. So what was said about her father by some rich people that ruined her life as a child? She does need to let that go though. You can't blame the masses for what a select group of people did. It's just like calling all people of one race ignorant because of the actions of a select group of them. 

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Date: August 31 2016 09:58 am

Title: Chapter 6

Interesting... He saw the damn picture. LOl. At least now he knows that she isn't just invading his thoughts. It's the opposite too. She needs to just tell him so that he can leave her alone like she claims she wants. But I think deep down she doesn't want him to go. Lol. 

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Date: August 31 2016 09:43 am



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