Amazing chapter! I hope Devyn soon realizes how right they are for eachother!Reviewer: Heleana503 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/08/13 10:47 pm
I knew that crazy ass woman would do something like that. Well, hopefully, she'll spend the rest of her days being someone's bitch.
Thank you for two wonderful updates.Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/08/13 07:40 pm
WOW..definitley worth the wait. I am almost ashamed to say, I want more very, very soon, lol!Reviewer: oHH Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/08/13 05:11 pm
Dad is bad ass I'm loving it. Took the mans company and going to sell it little by little LOL. I cant' wait to that slut finds out no more of the good life for he he he. I'm glad that Chris and Jason talked and able to get back to being brothers Thanks for the update.Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/13 03:49 pm
She does now Jason, William proved his love for his children and then some. Madeline is cray cray but so not so crazy that she didn't know what she did was wrong. Please let William pull through! So good and action packed!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/08/13 03:38 pm
Can't say why I never read this story. But now that I have, I'm in love. Erin and Maddy are about to get their asses handed to them and it couldn't happen to two more deserving people. Can.not.wait.
I like that Devyn is trying to handle her issues before going back to Jason. I hope that Jason is receptive. And what of Christopher. What will he do to Erin? I hope he finds someone who will love him for himself.
Maddy is one crazy mofo. Carries a .32; she might pull it out at the luncheon when they meet with Jacqueline and start to blasting. lol
The question is Maddy more deadly than Jacqueline? My money's on Jackie. It's always the quiet ones you have to watch out for.
The showdowns are about to happen. I'm so there with popcorn at the ready.Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/09/13 05:01 am
Excellent update, I understand why he looked into her background. At the time he didn't know her and was trying to find out what was going on. Devyn at core has to understand that. Why he didn't tell her well at what point does he when he was trying to get her to even date him. I feel sorry for Jason :-(Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/13 05:52 am
I'm glad that Jason and his father made up and going to try to build on it. Poor Christopher he so lost so many lies secrets kept from him. I hope he able to forgive his family. Now Devyn I hope she heals from the damge done by her father and find her way toJason. Thanks for the update.Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/13 11:41 am
It is about time that William woke up. Looking forward to reading how Erin and her evil family get paid back. I hope that it's painful and last a lifetime! Is that mean? I hope that Devyn gets the closer that she needs from her father. I loved how happy he was to see Devyn it reminded me of my daddy. Thanks for this update. Christopher is finding his strength and realized that Jason had done what he had always one and that was protect him. I hope that the next update comes quicker.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/05/13 07:18 am
Thanks for a great update. I was glad that Devyn went to see her father. Poor Christopher. I hope that he continues to stand up for himself. I hope that William continues to reach out to his children. The moment between William and Jason was great provided that William is being sincere. As for Jason, I hope that he and Devyn get back together soon. I can't wait for the confrontation between William and the evilenes. ThanksReviewer: firstname.lastname@example.org Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/05/13 07:07 am
please update soon. I am so so anxious for more.Reviewer: kufanatic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/22/13 12:36 pm
Thanks for the update. It was goood!
I think all the secrets are finally out and that's a good thing. I knew Christopher was stronger than some in his life thought. Can't wait for Erin and Madeline to get theirs, especially since the whole Westmore family will be against them.
As for Devyn and Jason, I'm glad the blowup happened so Devyn could face whatever her issues are so now she and Jason can hopefully work their issues out sooner than later.Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/13 05:06 pm
Thanks for a great update. Yes, finally Devyn is dealing with her insecurities. She does need to apologize to Jason, although I understand why she feels the way she does. I can't wait to read about her talk with her father. As for William, Jason and Chris....just wow, very explosive. Chris finally knows about Erin and he is starting to think for himself. Is it bad of me to say that wouldn't it be great that Chris and Devyn ended up as a couple. Both of them get no respect, it would be awesome if they ended up as a couple. ThanksReviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/13 09:53 am
Curious to see how a united jacqueline and william will blow madeline and erin out of the water... Which of the Journey friends is Christopher meant for?Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/29/13 05:48 am