Title: Cast Pics

I love this story so far... I can not wait for an update.. Please update soon!!

Reviewer: Peaches58 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2013 01:18 am

Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter and I'm glad you updated.  Wlliam Westmore messed up and I'm glad his wife seems angry with him.  Hopefully Devyn hears Jason out sooner than later because even she should remember how they acted towards each other in the beginning and not be surprised that Jason did what he did.

I think Christopher is stronger than Erin and her evil mother think he is.  Can't wait to see them tumble all the way down.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 05 2013 01:45 pm

Title: Chapter 25

Wow well I expected this from one of the parents, but it feels harsher than I imagined. My heart goes out for Devyn, being judged for the mistakes of her father.

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 04 2013 01:32 am

Title: Chapter 25

Wow well I expected this from one of the parents, but it feels harsher than I imagined. My heart goes out for Devyn, being judged for the mistakes of her father.

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2013 06:20 pm

Title: Chapter 25

If I could say that this was a surprising turn of events, then I would be lying.  I knew that his preliminary investigation of Devyn would come back and bite him in the a**.  I honestly didn't think he needed to investigate her in the first place just because he saw her business card fall out of Erin's purse.  It was just business but then again Devyn thought she was protecting Erin from the big bad fiance...Devyn will forgive him though, lol.  Her lying for a woman she didn't know made him suspicious so I do get his reasons.

Reviewer: Natori aka R Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2013 06:06 am

Title: Chapter 25

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hate when someone has a person investigated especially when they become involved. I am a naturally private person, so I would probably be pissed, but if I were rich, I hate to say this and sound like a total hypocrite, I would probably want to know about the person I wanted to get personal with. But it's such a breach of privacy, but better safe than sorry. But back to Devon's side, I would be hurt and pissed. Jason has some splanning to do, lol!

Reviewer: WOW! Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2013 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 25

damn...

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 03 2013 01:31 am

Title: Chapter 25

please don't wait too long to update - I'm biting my nails on the edge of my seat!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 02 2013 09:13 pm

Title: Chapter 25

 

O'My this is so!so! Good, please don't take to long

for the next chapter...WOW :-)

Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2013 08:45 am

Title: Chapter 25

Oh lord have mercy look what you did William...well at least that's out there. Let's see where it goes and what happens and how long Devyn is going to be embarrased/hurt for. I'm sure it will work out, but in the mean time William needs to relax after this. I understand he's looking out for his son, but I hope he does not continue to tamper beyond this point or else it's me and William and only one of us is coming out alive LOL

Also I can't wait for when those two conniving mitches are taken down. I can't keep up with their schemes too much man. At some point something has got to give

Thanks for the update!!

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2013 06:05 am

Title: Chapter 25

Oh boy not good not good at all. I hope Devyn forgiven and know  he loves her. That father is  a dick and I can't stand that hoe mom that chick need to go away.. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2013 12:38 am

Title: Chapter 25

William is an asshole and I really wanted Jason to knock the snot out of his father.  When are they goung to tell Christopher the truth about that ho Erin? I want Erin's family to lose everything.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 11:18 pm

Title: Chapter 25

i missed this story, can u like not let Devyn and Jason suffer too much. :))

Reviewer: dounome Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 10:03 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Have really really missed this story. Thank you so much for the update, really sweet couple. 

Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 11:57 am

Title: Chapter 24

Cute couple,  I like how she is strong but yet can compromise.  excellent job thank you

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 08:31 am

Title: Chapter 24

Thanks for the update. I enjoy this story and was happy to see it. Erin's mother really is evil.  I hope Shawn helps with her downfall that hopefully hapens. lol  Looking forward to Devyn meeting Jason's parents.

Reviewer: Tootall Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2013 09:27 am

Title: Chapter 11

Chapter 13. No sex, not even a kiss and I'm still very interested in the story. Very good work thus far. Thanks!!!

Reviewer: readwonderfully Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2013 07:59 am

Title: Chapter 24

What a fantastic chapter, it was worth the wait.

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2013 04:59 am

Title: Chapter 24

Devyn is a better one than me not to let Janice know that showing up at a grown woman's door unannounced is unacceptable. Devyn is a responsible business owner who pays her own bills, and not a teenager in college who needs a pop in to keep her on the straight and narrow. If you're going to use a parent's privilege to visit unannounced, then showing up early in the morning, like you're being nosy and inconsiederate, is not to be tolerated. Whomever she's sleeping with is none of her mother's business, and certainly not a reason to ask whether she's "lost [her] mind." This discussion was especially inappropriate in front of Jason, a man she had just met. That's what happens when you don't call me for two weeks? The phone works both ways and, the last time we checked, she had her number. I respect my mother, but respect is a two way street. Once you're both women, she needs to respect you, too. 

 

As for Shawn, I hope he mans up and releases whatever evidence he has. Madeline had the nerve to threaten him and his family in his home, with no thought of repurcussions or consequences. Well, if I were him, I would bring the pain straight to the opposing family, just to shut that b---- up.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2013 01:16 am

Title: Chapter 24

Thank you. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2013 11:04 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Madeline is a crazy *B*. My goodness. I hope everything backfires in her facexanx that she and her conniving daughter get their comeuppance. As tot Jason and Devyn glad that they are moving forward and that Jason met Devyn's mom. Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2013 07:38 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Welcome back. Now I thought devyn mother was going to throw holy water on jason  and say get away you devil man but glad she didn't lol. I can't wait to see how the family dinner will go and feel so badly for Chris everyone is keeping secrets from him. Thank for the update

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2013 06:34 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Oh my, my, my goodness. I love this story.  Please update again soon.  Really, really soon.  Pretty please.

A

Reviewer: Arabelle Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 05 2013 03:28 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Thank you for the update!   

Reviewer: pearlcat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2013 03:07 pm

Title: Chapter 24

Madeline is cray cray no wonder Eric. Is so special.  I hope that Jason is prepared for the evil trying to marry into his family for money. Thank you for this update!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2013 03:03 pm



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