I noticed that some of your sentences say the opposite of what you mean and it distracted from an otherwise great story
Reviewer: ushergal Signed
[Report This]Date: November 13 2014 01:18 am
OOOOOMMMFGGGG UTTERLY in LOVEEEEE!! I LOVEEEDDD ITTTT!!!
Seriously though... Chris ... I hope he goes with kori ;) mmmhmmmmmm he's so deep and freaken amazing I loveeeee him.
Devyn and Jason = fififkckfkckcdodosldmvjfk !!! They're such an amazing couple. I love the balance and omg how fucken epic to see Jason change !!! He was the one who fell first. He is so damn in love. And it's so mutual now.
Loveddddddd it
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2014 04:43 pm
Love how you finished it, thanks
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: January 09 2014 06:20 am
Loved this story from start to finish, glad that Devyn got past her issues to see that Jason is the man for her, and now there is a baby on the was and a wedding, so happy those two got their HEA.
Btw, I do hope that either Christopher gets his own story... is Devyn's friend Kori avalible(hint hint)
Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 09 2014 04:27 am
Thanks for a great read. I am so happy that Devyn and Jason will get their HEA and they have a baby on the way. I am looking forward to Elise's story. I want Kori to end up with Chris.
Reviewer: Divsionred Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 09 2014 03:51 am
I am sorry that we have come to the end of Devyn and Jason"s story. It was a wild and at times unpredictable ride, but they have a very bright future ahead of them. i m eagerly looking forward to Elise"s journey.
Reviewer: sandra Anonymous
[Report This]Date: January 08 2014 06:34 am
Dam this story can't end nooooooooooooooooooooo lol. I'm so glad that their father is alive and jason and devyon are going to be parents. But I wanted to see a Jason and Devyon wedding now pretty please. I can't wait to read Journey book 2 girl and hope chris finds true love. Thank you for writing this amazing story thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2014 05:45 am
Lovely--thank you.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 08 2014 04:29 am
Thanks for sharing this story! I loved reading about Devyn's journey and I can't wait to read Elise's!!
Reviewer: Annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 08 2014 02:07 am
Sad to see Dev and Jas story end but also excited to see a new story begin... Love your work
Reviewer: keikei2 Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2014 10:46 pm
Fantastic, I love this story. It was bittersweet reading this chapter, I wanted there to be a happy ending/new beginning for both Dev and Jason but don't want it to end. I love your writing style and this story was easily one of my favourites on this site.
Looking forward to reading book 2.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Reviewer: Amaya Signed
[Report This]Date: January 07 2014 07:36 pm
So sad to see devyn's journey is ending....great story
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2014 05:22 pm
Woohoo! Loved this book. The characters felt real to me. I will read again and again. Can't wait for the next story in this series.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2014 04:37 pm
I absolutely loved this story. So looking forward to the next installation in the series. Excellent job!!!
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Reviewer: Arabelle Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2014 04:25 pm
That was so awesome! ! Devyn went and got her man abd is engaged to be married and a pregnant to boot. Who will be Chris' s live interest?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2014 04:18 pm
Thank you so much for your consistency and your commitment to finishing. I can't wait for book 2!
Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed [Report This]Date: January 07 2014 01:59 pm
Poor Jason
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: December 22 2013 12:08 am
Amazing!
Reviewer: grlgrl7 Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 18 2013 08:56 am
Two words - LOVED IT!
What a beautiful chapter. Thank you sooooo much for posting.
Reviewer: Amaya Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2013 04:38 pm
Amazing chapter! I hope Devyn soon realizes how right they are for eachother!
Reviewer: Heleana503 Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 09 2013 05:47 am
I knew that crazy ass woman would do something like that. Well, hopefully, she'll spend the rest of her days being someone's bitch.
Thank you for two wonderful updates.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 09 2013 02:40 am
Great update. I am glad things are out and healing can begin. I want Jason and Devyn to work through there issues and make it work.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2013 01:42 am
Who knew them damn Westmore peeps were so gangsta!!!!!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2013 01:34 am
WOW..definitley worth the wait. I am almost ashamed to say, I want more very, very soon, lol!
Reviewer: oHH Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 09 2013 12:11 am
I hope his father lives. It good that Devyn had that talked with her father and was able to heal. She needs to stick with jason he loves her all of her. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: December 08 2013 10:55 pm