This is really good. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2011 11:40 am
Can't wait to find out more about Nita's family! Great chapter!
Reviewer: anne Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 14 2011 10:34 am
That was insightful, however it did reiterate my feelings about her parenting. She have concentrated on raising her children and not some job where she is being used and not appreciated. Her children need her, she needs to pay attention to them before it's too late!!! Great chapter!!1
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2011 06:37 am
I'm officially in like of this.
Reviewer: Realstone Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2011 01:52 am
Damn if this ain't the funniest. Nita will eat him alive. Chica, you had me rolling. I can't wait to see how these two very disimilar people get together, if they do.
Author's Response:
It's definitely going to be a challenge...a definite challenge and so far oh so fun to write...more characters to introduce with quirks and funny personalities of his own
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 07:09 am
Wow!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'll take that a good thing
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 03:00 am
Love it so far, cant wait to see the story begin!
Author's Response:
Thanks Annie.
Reviewer: annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 02:08 am
I love NIta's and Jr's interactions, they quite humorous. He's already in lust and she is in deep hate. Jr. has a long road ahead of him, and Nita ain't gonna fall the the banana in the tail pipe. This is going to be good!!!
Author's Response:
They are both hilarious...that much is true
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 01:07 am
I understand that she has two children but I sure would sending me resume out. She is working for a firm that does not appreciate her hard work or award employees for loyality. I say look for another job that won't keep you away from your children, she has sacrificed he childrens happiness for job where hard work is not appreciated. I wish I could feel bad for her, but she ignored her children. Don't like Nita right now!!! I am hoping that my opinion of Nita changes. I on the side of the babies!!!
Author's Response:
Don't be so hard on her yet. Fear is a motivator not to move. Especially when youre a single mother. You use fear of the unknown as a crutch...when you have viable employment...stepping out and starting over is almost your worst nightmare. All of that along with personal issues influence your actions. Don't judge her yet...she's layered...there's a lot going on with her.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2011 01:02 am
I like, please update soon.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 08:44 pm
*draws up a chair* This smells like another great one, TSS. :)
Author's Response:
*Finger Crossed - I hope so...they are toying with my emotions :)*
Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2011 08:31 pm