Grrrrrrreat chapter, these two are HOT!!! Can't wait for the next installment!!!!Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 21 2012 04:16 am
Love this story. I'm hoping for an update. Soon. Like tomorrow.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 19 2012 01:54 am
This was a fun and sad update at the same time. The fact that Mrs Lord is dying is awful. I like the new and improved Lulu. The dress sounds really sexy, I guess her and Dennison will be heating the sheets soon. As for the conversation between Dennison and his dad it was a good one but still very sad. Thanks for a great update.Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2012 06:40 am
The story has promise and some funny moments. However I think the men don't have enough of a manly vibe. Their voices sound quite feminine to me, men dont just blurt out their feelings to each other.
Thanks for the review mims...just a brief interjection...
This is the third story in the series so I felt that it was appropriate to begin to allow my dudes to begin to express themselves. There are a ton of layers within Dennison's relationship with his dad...much of that speared on by his mother's illness. Ellis Lord now feels it's appropriate to share more with his oldest than he would have in the past. The title of the story is intimacy...it's not just about the physical aspect of intimacy...many avenues are growing in the relationships spotlighted. Not all men feel the need to be manly by clamming up and not expressing themselves. I know plenty who do...sometimes its eloquent...other times its a colorful array of explicit language. Either way, I'm sorry the voices aren't working for you but I'm happy with the dynamics I'm creating. Thanks for taking the time to read and share your comments.Reviewer: mims Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18 2012 02:06 am
Dennison's father shocked me; he was the last person i expected to see at Den's door. What's more shocking is the encouragement to pursue Lulu or better yet, the love of a father toward his son. Ellis uses his wife's illness as an excuse to get closer to his child but hell...whatever it takes to bridge the gap works for me.
I'm ready to see the intimacy between thse two deserving people, not just the physical but the true meaning of the word. I have no doubt that's what they'll find.
Update soon! :)Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17 2012 09:01 am
Lived the chapter, especially the scene between dennison and his dad, it was really sweet.Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 07:16 am
I loved this couple with the first story and didn't realize you started a second story, so I'm catching up, please, please update soon. I'll be tracking!
Great start to this one.
Intimacy is the third story. So assUme and Take Two are the others. I'm glad you're enjoying Dennison and Lulu. I really like writing this couple.Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2012 06:30 pm
Thanks for a great update. I like Raj and the fact that he was honest about his relationship with his wife and that he cheated on her. Hopefully, this will elp Dennison not to bang his neighbor. Because if he does I don't think that Lulu would be so forgiving. She may caught off his blue balls.Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 05:18 pm
This is good, well intentioned and I even love the side characters.
SymphReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 03:11 am
Another great chapter can't wait for an update!Reviewer: Bert Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 12:36 am
Nice to read about dennison having one "normal" guy friend like raj. Update was great!Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 28 2011 12:26 am
Oh goodness, no more please get to the intimacy part soon. Lulu's gagging for it (and so am I). Seriously though I'm really enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.Reviewer: Rosa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 27 2011 09:58 pm