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Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

Great ending to a good story. Loved it

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/13 08:29 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

oh my gosh i love you any story you write i want to read seriously if any of your stories every get published let me know and i will go out and buy them.

Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/13 08:28 am

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

I'm going to miss this story, it was fun while it lasted :D

Reviewer: got2luvmel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/24/13 02:58 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

Gabriel is too funny. Hopefully Franklin stay in jail and Sugar gets her happy ending with Bruce.

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/22/13 08:34 am

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

I suppose everything worked out well.  Every ending is always a new beginning.

Reviewer: reader101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/21/13 11:52 am

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

Thanks for the happy ending!!!!

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/20/13 10:54 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

I can't bgelieve this is the end. I want to read so more about the Wainwrights. There seems to be so much more to explore.

First off, Franklin got off easy. I wanted Sugar to get in a few licks. Then there is her trifflin family. I really wanted a show-down. And the revelation about Sugar's father was also intresting. I think Sugar needs her own story.

Gabe and Honey, I can just read more and more about them. I wanted to see them with growing family.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/20/13 10:26 pm

Title: Chapter 17 Off To Vegas

Awesome. This story is blowing my mind. Franklin has yet to truely suffer. I really wanted Sugar to get some licks in. As for Sugar's father, that was interesting. Is he still alive? I wonder what happen to him?

And Sugar and Gabe are as freaky as they wanted to be.

Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/20/13 10:08 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

Great last chapter. Franklin got his just desserts and Albert came to his senses. I hope Sugar finds happiness and marries her man. I love the way you ended the story.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/20/13 06:43 pm

Title: Chapter 2 Unraveling

Great beginning... I can tell this story is going to be off the chain.

Reviewer: natalieiw Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/20/13 06:28 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

This was an AMAZING story! 

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/20/13 02:22 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

I hope Franklin never gets out of jail! Great ending!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/20/13 01:19 am

Title: Chapter 1 Deception

All good things must come to an end and this is one of the.. Love the ending glad Franklin was got and Albert has decided to stop pursuing Sugar.. I'm glad Albert realizes that nothing good will come from him pursuing Sugar and it will cost him the love of his life.. I'm with Albert on this one.. Take it to the GRAVE!!!! What they dont know won't hurt you or them..

Looking forward to you next story..

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/19/13 08:45 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

What an awesome ending to a great story!!

Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/19/13 06:19 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

Franklin is going down color me happy!!  I have loved this story, Brenda it has funny and at times some of the characters have pissed me off. So awesome, I really hate to see this story end but all good things must come to an end.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/19/13 06:03 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

Thanks for a great update. Gabe was funny kn how impatient he was fir Honey to be his wife and to get the honeymoon started. Glad that sick ass Franklin was arrested before he could hurt Sugar. I hope that Albert realizes what he started has hurt Sugar and I hope hus demented ass will not pursue her anymore. I hope Sugar gives Bruce a chance to love and take care of her. She deserves her own happy ever after.

Reviewer: divisionred Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/19/13 05:37 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

Nooo! I can't believe that it is over. I would love to read more about them. Will we ever get the chance to know what could happen next in their lives?
I loved it, and I loved this story. :D

Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/13 05:35 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

I really hope Albert stops this foolishness and comes clean or else he'll find him self alone, whillst Audrey is with someone who loves her and only her. Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: chatty504 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/19/13 05:23 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

I just love Gabe when he want something he goes for it no matter what. I hope sugar find herself and be happy. I hope the little affiar she had with gab dad doesn't come out it will ripped the family apart. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/19/13 04:16 pm

Title: Chapter 18 Wedding Day

Bravo bravo do glad Albert stopped pursuing sugar and glad she found herself a great man ooh that sico Franklin needs to rot in prison and of course the wonderful wedding was beautiful love love your stories you are magnificent!!!!!

Reviewer: Hershey_kisses Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/19/13 03:30 pm

Title: Chapter 17 Off To Vegas

Yeah for Sugar Rae Jones and her man! She deserves happiness in her life. That Franklin is scary, freaky and crazy! Uurry and write him out of the story He has fallen. Baad move!!!! FRANK BRAIN!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/13 12:05 am

Title: Chapter 17 Off To Vegas

Take a chance on Bruce, Sugar! There ain't a damn thing worth saying about Franklin anymore!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/29/12 06:37 pm

Title: Chapter 16 Confronting the Past

I'm hoping something really foul happens to Franklin!

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/29/12 05:33 pm

Title: Chapter 15 Ghost From the Past

Albert is sure going to burn in hell along with Franklin, his momma, Sonja!  Sugar does deserve justice though!

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Date: 12/29/12 05:10 pm

Title: Chapter 14 Memories

That is one sick ass MoFo!

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Date: 12/29/12 04:47 pm



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