I really like this story. I hope you are able to update soon.Reviewer: Drea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/25/12 07:45 pm
Loved the update! Hope Peter really changed and is into Angel and not Mac. Wow, what a small world!! Mr Victor is right in Alex's sphere and I hope he gets the beatdown he deserves. Jessica needs a life lesson too. Hope Jans remain true to Alex and not Victor or things are gonna go to hell!!!Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/12 11:51 pm
Let's get it on!!!!!! Ii loved this chapter because stuff gets going!!! Bring it!!! Tis was excellent!!!Reviewer: Water Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 10:19 am
What a EXCELLENT chapter! I love the new characters and thier personalities. They fit so well together. Kill Pinter please. Peter, please get your mind back Alex loves you. You have no chance with Mac. Alex and Mac are my new couple to watch. This story is AWESOME and so are youReviewer: Water Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 09:41 am
I love this. Alex and Peter are so good together don't kill the brother thing please!!!!! LOL omg Helen and Bruce KILL THEM! Poor Peter I hope he gets stronger. What can I say about Alex and Mac...... HOTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!! Jessica is going to be a serious problem. I can see only death or jail time cooling her down. Fan static chapterReviewer: Water Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 08:42 am
I love all of these characters. Alex is the bomb and he cracks me up. I love him and Mac doing the forbidden at work. That was AWESOME. I hope that they get together. I hate his parents. Please don't make Pete an asshole. I want Alex to have one thing that he can love about his family. Awesome beginnng!Reviewer: Water Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 08:28 am
I love this story and I am so glad that you are back and healthy.
Alex is going to have to become the brusier for a minute to save his Mac from Victor. I cousl see Jessica working for him but I don't hink that she will want to for long. I see her pulling a Jans and getting the hell out of dodge. Becuase scarface is Crazy. If the Mob does nto wnat you something aint right. even they have standards LOL
I have not made up my mind about Peter. I knwo that he loves his brother and that is enough to turn people from the brink of insanity. I just hope that Angel is what keeps him there. I love him with Angel and I hope that he lets all that Bennett blood flow and he gets Jans to back off.
I hope that you kill Helen and BRuce or they get hurt really bad. However, I saa Helen bringing Patricia Lawter ( the very ugly rock lol) into the picture. I see fireworks and all sorts og bad going down.
DAMN GOOD TO HAVE YOU BACK GIRLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!Reviewer: SafeHaven Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/12 08:59 pm
Oh my goodness, what a turn the story has taken. So Jans works for crazy Victor that wants Mac. Crazy Pinter works for Victor as well. My goodness what a bed full of crazies. Alex is going to have to use his moniker to extract Mac from all the demons that are after her. I am glad that Peter is acting sane right now. I think that he and Angel will make a great couple especially since Jans is part of the enemy team. Thanks for a great update. Welcome back and I am glad to read that you are feeling better. I was LOL at you tied your children up with a rope. To funny.Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/12 08:44 pm
I'm so glad you updated this story! Tying the kids up with rope...that's priceless; have you considered ace bandages? They're much softer and bind really well. LOLReviewer: Philly Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/22/12 08:32 pm
Oh, oh, one psychotic person was just dealt with now Alex has to worry about his crazy brother Peter. He is more dangerous then they realize. I was so happy to read that Mac was able to protect herself from that psycho idiot. I can't wait for them to deal with Pinter hands on. I am sure Lou is going to let the Senator know where he can find the devils spawn. As for Bruce...oh well. Thanks for a great update.Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/12 08:24 pm
I can't wait for Peter to deal with his crazy parents. The fact that his mother instructed his father to take his money is scandalous. I adore Mac. She is in love with her boss. I like the way that Alex is with Mac and his aunt is correct tahat he needs to respect her and not get her pregnant before they get married. AS for Jessica she is really a crazy chick. To bad she can't be paired off with Peter and they drive his mother and father crazy. Thanks for a great update.Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/12 07:45 pm
And the story heats up with all these key players. Peter still freaks me out even if he is now smitten with Angel. Jans has a past with the mob that will link Alex right to the man that is after Mac. My money is Alex will take Victor down bec=fore he has any time to get neart Mac. But looking forward to how things play because the web of secrets seems to be intertwining all the major players.Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/12 07:32 pm
Victor Nanori is Russian, and based on Mac's fathers gambling debts---I think mafia. But Russians don't really play with the low men on the totem pole or just plain old Italian style mafia. These are cold hard killers and rarely leave bodies. Acid is their preferred form of disposal. Well they kill the person and then put them in acid so all that's left is liquid mush. All in all they don't leave bodies. I get the feeling Mac's dad was more than just gambling...that doesn't warrant death for Russian mafia. You either are a betrayer or saw something, or knew something you shouldn't have known--that you stupidly threatened to release. Out of all the mafia's I have read about, nothing freaks me out more than Russian mafia. Italian's are old school and barely relevant, and if around aren't really into big shit. Dixie mafia, most people don't even see them as real. But they do exist. Problem with them is that they are the most disorganized bunch of all the mafias and they never have one central command or formal heirarchy. Not only that they use their products, ie pot and meth and what not. Drugs don't make a for a clear mind. Then you have the drug cartels and they are organized but they leave around messy deaths. Japanese and Chinese, they like wars amongst themselves and are normally nation specific localized rather than international.
Russian, way organized, super clean deaths, horrible and frightening reputation and on and on it goes. Ultimately, scary as hell. But I love that you have it in the story.
Other things I love in the story. Well it's two super hot things. You have Angel a Afro- Latina, I love that. Is she of Mexican descent or Cuban or something? I ask because most people forget about the Afro Mexicans of Oxaca, Mexico. I didn't even know they existed until I went to a local African diaspora museum about 13 years back and they had this great opening on Afro-Mexicans. I also love that you have her paired up with Peter. I was super upset and afraid Peter was turning psycho. Peter seems like a good guy and I wouldn't have wanted him to go to the dark side since he always had Alex by his side and I like that you have Peter falling for Angel and vice versa.
I have a request. Can you actually write the scene up where Peter had a reflection and moved away from Mac? It does give a 180 feeling when you see Peter kind of thinking Alex betrayed him and sounding nutty to him all of the sudden being charming and falling for Angel. I think that would sort of clear up any confusion for readers, otherwise he sounds wishy washy.
I want Peter saved, but I'd like to see a logical progression that he was not flipping or suffering from multiple personalities. I hope that Peter knows some moves, I'm sure he does because of his brother, but to be able to protect Angel if need be. Some times tough ladies can't be tough all the time.Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/12 04:07 pm