please update soon....i miss this story!

WOW,another crazy I see.I've got to go back and familiarize myself with this story cause I'm sort of lost right now,but I enjoyed the update and of course my favorite,Alex!!! Welcome back SPIDERBITE!!!

This story is alright! Don't know where I've been with this one, but I'm glad to have it on my radar now!

What a EXCELLENT chapter! I love the new characters and thier personalities. They fit so well together. Kill Pinter please. Peter, please get your mind back Alex loves you. You have no chance with Mac. Alex and Mac are my new couple to watch. This story is AWESOME and so are you

I love all of these characters. Alex is the bomb and he cracks me up. I love him and Mac doing the forbidden at work. That was AWESOME. I hope that they get together. I hate his parents. Please don't make Pete an asshole. I want Alex to have one thing that he can love about his family. Awesome beginnng!

I love this story and I am so glad that you are back and healthy.

Alex is going to have to become the brusier for a minute to save his Mac from Victor. I cousl see Jessica working for him but I don't hink that she will want to for long. I see her pulling a Jans and getting the hell out of dodge. Becuase scarface is Crazy. If the Mob does nto wnat you something aint right. even they have standards LOL

I have not made up my mind about Peter. I knwo that he loves his brother and that is enough to turn people from the brink of insanity. I just hope that Angel is what keeps him there. I love him with Angel and I hope that he lets all that Bennett blood flow and he gets Jans to back off.

I hope that you kill Helen and BRuce or they get hurt really bad. However, I saa Helen bringing Patricia Lawter ( the very ugly rock lol) into the picture. I see fireworks and all sorts og bad going down.

DAMN GOOD TO HAVE YOU BACK GIRLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!! 

I'm so glad you updated this story! Tying the kids up with rope...that's priceless; have you considered ace bandages? They're much softer and bind really well. LOL

I had the read this amamazing story again.  In my previous review I meant to say Jessica not Jennifer. Sorry for my error.

I can't wait for Peter to deal with his crazy parents.  The fact that his mother instructed his father to take his money is scandalous.  I adore Mac.  She is in love with her boss.  I like the way that Alex is with Mac and his aunt is correct tahat he needs to respect her and not get her pregnant before they get married.  AS for Jessica she is really a crazy chick.  To bad she can't be paired off with Peter and they drive his mother and father crazy.  Thanks for a great update.

I had to reread the beginning before I read the update.  I am just shaking my head at how vile his parents are and what does Peter mean by he wish he was the good one?  Thanks

OOHO I love this new chapter. I really like what you have done with Charles. I really did not want to see the brothers fighting so this is a good way to fix this problem.

Victor Nanori is Russian, and based on Mac's fathers gambling debts---I think mafia.  But Russians don't really play with the low men on the totem pole or just plain old Italian style mafia.  These are cold hard killers and rarely leave bodies.  Acid is their preferred form of disposal.  Well they kill the person and then put them in acid so all that's left is liquid mush.  All in all they don't leave bodies.  I get the feeling Mac's dad was more than just gambling...that doesn't warrant death for Russian mafia.  You either are a betrayer or saw something, or knew something you shouldn't have known--that you stupidly threatened to release.  Out of all the mafia's I have read about, nothing freaks me out more than Russian mafia.  Italian's are old school and barely relevant, and if around aren't really into big shit.  Dixie mafia, most people don't even see them as real.  But they do exist.  Problem with them is that they are the most disorganized bunch of all the mafias and they never have one central command or formal heirarchy.  Not only that they use their products, ie pot and meth and what not.  Drugs don't make a for a clear mind.  Then you have the drug cartels and they are organized but they leave around messy deaths. Japanese and Chinese, they like wars amongst themselves and are normally nation specific localized rather than international.

Russian, way organized, super clean deaths, horrible and frightening reputation and on and on it goes.  Ultimately, scary as hell. But I love that you have it in the story. 

Other things I love in the story.  Well it's two super hot things.  You have Angel a Afro- Latina, I love that.  Is she of Mexican descent or Cuban or something?  I ask because most people forget about the Afro Mexicans of Oxaca, Mexico.  I didn't even know they existed until I went to a local African diaspora museum about 13 years back and they had this great opening on Afro-Mexicans.   I also love that you have her paired up with Peter.  I was super upset and afraid Peter was turning psycho.  Peter seems like a good guy and I wouldn't have wanted him to go to the dark side since he always had Alex by his side and I like that you have Peter falling for Angel and vice versa. 

I have a request.  Can you actually write the scene up where Peter had a reflection and moved away from Mac?  It does give a 180 feeling when you see Peter kind of thinking Alex betrayed him and sounding nutty to him all of the sudden being charming and falling for Angel.  I think that would sort of clear up any confusion for readers, otherwise he sounds wishy washy.   

I want Peter saved, but I'd like to see a logical progression that he was not flipping or suffering from multiple personalities.  I hope that Peter knows some moves, I'm sure he does because of his brother, but to be able to protect Angel if need be.   Some times tough ladies can't be tough all the time.