Title: Chapter 11 "The Night of the Cusp"

I reread this series like once a month and it still never fails to amaze me...

Reviewer: 5livelaughlove5 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 19 2016 07:48 am

Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

I've just started reading this fic and it's off to a great start. Loving the tension between Gwen and Arthur.

Reviewer: Soul93 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2015 04:13 pm

Title: Chapter 12 "The Necklace of Songs"

Hi, I just came across your story through watching a Youtube video.  Your story was amazing.  You did a great job.  I really enjoyed reading about Arthur and Gwen (I love them and can never get enough of their story).  Your story for them was so creative I couldn't stop reading it.  I only wish there was more. I also really liked how you left Morgana with a measure of compassion.  Your writing is excellent and I encourage you continue with it.  Much success to you.

Reviewer: Karen M. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 18 2014 05:04 am

Title: Chapter 12 "The Necklace of Songs"

AMAZING!!!! I have nothing more to say :)

Reviewer: hermi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 30 2013 12:17 am

Title: Chapter 9 Every Breath We Drew

What can one say, you hit the nail on the head.  What a metaphor for somethins so lovely and moving as Chapter 8.

Reviewer: Diane Garcia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2012 03:52 am

Title: Chapter 8 "Mist and Shadow, Cloud and Flame"

Kick ass, Arthur.  Bravo Morgana, your sisterly-love is still there.  That is what a man in love does, takes care of the one that is his beloved.  My husband did this for me, without any prompting.  My own Arthur Pendragon.

Reviewer: Diane Garcia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2012 03:29 am

Title: Chapter 7 "Watching Stars Without You"

Exciting!!! with delicious echoes of loving memories.

Reviewer: Diane Garcia Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 03 2012 03:10 am

Title: Chapter 4 "Halfway to Anywhere"

Thank you for the subtle references to characteristic phrases used by various personalities in the series.  Lovely scene in the garden of Igraine.

Reviewer: Diane Garcia Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 03 2012 01:41 am

Title: Chapter 3 "Dream of Gardens in the Desert"

Steamy and dreamy.  I needed two fans.

Reviewer: Diane Garcia Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 03 2012 01:08 am

Title: Chapter 12 "The Necklace of Songs"

More ARWEN fan fics please........

Reviewer: darkbeauty Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2012 01:23 am

Title: Chapter 12 "The Necklace of Songs"

This was so good! very happy that Arwen got the happy ending that they deserved and their love making was HOT!!! 

Looking forward to your next Arwen tale you have an amazing talent for writing. Thankyou for sharing such a great story :)

 

 

 

Reviewer: Teges Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 10:09 am

Title: Chapter 12 "The Necklace of Songs"

The ending to this wonderful tale is bittersweet...on the one hand I am so glad Gwen and Arthur got their happy-ever-after, and on the other hand it's sad to say goodbye (sniff, sniff). 

So glad you are considering writing another story; can't wait to read...

Well done and thank-you so much for sharing your wonderful work with us!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 05:35 am

Title: Chapter 12 "The Necklace of Songs"

First I cheered when you said you were writing another story. :) Morgana and Gwen their friendship and its ending made me quite sad. :( Second I know Morgana has to go her own way I just wish she could have retained her ties with her loved ones. Excellent job of weaving their friendship through the story really one of the best female focused Arthurian stories I've seen in a while.Third Arthur and Gwen together at last love the detail with the stockings. Finally Merlin as court sorcerer out in the open where he belongs.:)

 

Thank you for sharing this wornderful, evocative story with us.

Reviewer: AGDoren Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 05:29 am

Title: Chapter 12 "The Necklace of Songs"

Morgana has lost her way!  How sad!  I was hoping she could be redeemed.  Now Gwen is her nemesis as she will fight to defend those she loves!  

I'd bet Arthur waited impatiently a whole year for this day to come!  ARWEN are united at last in marital bliss and are eternally connected in mind, soul, and body!  Together with Merlin they will ensure all of Albion shall have peace, order, and justice!  

Please do consider sending your excellent masterpiece to BBC so their writers could receive inspiration to improve their writing!  

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 01:59 am

Title: Chapter 11 "The Night of the Cusp"

I was wondering if you had gotten overwhelm by RL. Wonderful creepy mood created by the eclipse. Are Morgana and Mordred getting away? Loved the good bye between Arthur and Gwen. I hope Gaius is okay. Of course this lats scene is wonderful.



Author's Response:

Yes RL had me pinned for a while :) But my muse is determined to finish strong apparently :)

So glad you enjoyed this chapter, I'm working on the last one right now and it's loads of fun!

Reviewer: AGDoren Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 13 2012 11:34 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "In Ashes and Dust"

<3 I love the last bit especially, with Morgana's coldness and Uther's death. So chilling. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad that scene conveyed the necessary emotions :)

Reviewer: rubberglue Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 12 2012 05:10 pm

Title: Chapter 11 "The Night of the Cusp"

Goodness; what an action-packed chapter!  So glad that Gwen didn't have to kill Gaius and that Arthur and Merlin arrived right on time.  That Melwas creature finally got his just deserts; so glad about that!

So glad my fave couple is back together and Merlin is going to heal Arthur; can't wait for the grand finale!  It's bittersweet though, because it means this wonderful story is coming to an end.

Well done; this has been a really entertaining read!  Never watched Merlin so I'm a little lost sometimes, but your writing is so good that it almost doesn't matter.



Author's Response:

You haven't seen Merlin??? You should watch it, despite its flaws its a great show. I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. Please feel free to ask me any questions when you're confused. Questions help improve my craft :)

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2012 03:54 pm

Title: Chapter 11 "The Night of the Cusp"

Wow.. did not see that coming! another awesome chapter, cant wait to see how you finish it :) 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm really excited to write the last chapter!

Reviewer: Teges Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2012 09:15 am

Title: Chapter 2 "If Walls Had Eyes"

Have been anticiating their meeting with bated breath. Hope things will come right between them. Poor Arthur doesn't she is being blackmailed into the marriage. But if Morgana had been gone for more than two years, it means they haven't seen each other for that long at least. Their love is strong

Reviewer: gorgeousangel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2012 10:41 am

Title: Chapter 10 "In Ashes and Dust"

I love this story. It will be interesting to see how you wrap it up in the last remaining chapters.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm pretty excited to write the last chapter actually :)

Reviewer: anouk Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2012 06:26 am

Title: Chapter 10 "In Ashes and Dust"

Will Arthur return safely to his beloved Guinevere?  How much more pain from separation could ARWEN endure?  

How will Guinevere defeat the dark forces that stand against the light of Avalon?  Is she blessed with unknown powers that have yet to be unleashed?  Will she be strong enough to withstand the nefarious triple alliance until Arthur's safely with her?  

Is there any hope that Morgana will redeem herself at the end since she demonstrated compassion for Guinevere?  

What is taking Arthur so long to return to Camelot?  Or has he forgotten about his kingdom, his people, but most of all his true love Guinevere?

 

Reviewer: lara smith Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2012 12:42 am

Title: Chapter 10 "In Ashes and Dust"

What an update; so glad Arthur lives...can't wait until he and Merlin get back to save the day!

Not feeling too sorry for Uther; I guess his prior evil deeds finally caught up with him...poor Arthur is going to be sad though!

Looking forward to the next update!

 



Author's Response:

Ha I did feel a tiny twinge of pity for old Uther, mostly because he's played by Anthony Stewart Head :)

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 08:47 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "In Ashes and Dust"

Omg.    I can't wait to find what happens next.

Reviewer: letitia Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 08:22 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "In Ashes and Dust"

Wow Morgana has went off the deep end!

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 05:04 pm

Title: Chapter 10 "In Ashes and Dust"

It cant be over so soon! another great chapter though, and I like the husband and wife type interaction between Arthur and Gwen :) very interested in how Arthur and Merlin will take back Camelot from team M. cant wait for the next update :) 



Author's Response:

'team M' LOL. They should wear sweaters with a giant M emblazoned :P

Reviewer: Teges Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 03:48 pm



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