Nice story, you could do a sequel, next part of their story!
Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2014 04:25 pm
Loved this story and Love your writing.
Reviewer: Cora Jay Signed [Report This]Date: March 01 2014 09:45 am
Amazing short story!! I need more!!!
Reviewer: MissTruth Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2013 08:08 am
Wow....!!!!
Reviewer: MissTruth Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2013 07:49 am
Wonderful
Reviewer: MissTruth Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2013 07:30 am
Very interesting beginning. I like!
Reviewer: MissTruth Signed [Report This]Date: November 23 2013 06:10 am
Loved this story. Glad to see there's a sequel.
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: November 18 2012 10:09 pm
Beautifully done!
Would love to see a story develop betweent these two!
Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed [Report This]Date: November 11 2012 01:22 am
Nice!!!! I enjoyed this little shortie.
Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 10 2012 12:09 pm
Can't belive that girl bit him..TWICE!
Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 03 2012 04:38 am
I really like your story and can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: SoccergirlBianca Signed [Report This]Date: March 26 2012 05:23 am
You had me at "Yes...please...thank you...Should have been his reply". Ha ha.
Love your stories!
Reviewer: dustdaughter Signed [Report This]Date: March 25 2012 07:16 am
Thanks for a great read. I just loved Bear.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2012 03:05 pm
Oh wow, Mari....go Bear get your late night snack. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2012 02:52 pm
I love Bear. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2012 02:31 pm
I like Bear the fact that he is a virgin is going to be so fun to read how Mari gets him to have sex with her. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2012 02:25 pm
LMAO at Mari. She is a trip. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2012 02:16 pm
I like the pictures of the cast. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2012 06:21 am
I like the pictures of the cast. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 18 2012 03:19 am
Loved it, never read one about a male virgin before.
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: March 17 2012 02:35 am
Ah! This is so good. Bear is adorable!!!
Reviewer: Memoi Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 12 2012 05:08 am
and now that you've done that, i need you to find me that perfect man-ho.
now.
thanks, mgmt.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2012 04:58 am
Loved this shortie...I hated to say goodbye too...sniff, sniff...
Grady aka Bear was such a sweetie and Mari for all her sass and mouth is just big softie herself at heart.
Yeah, would love another peek into the lives of these two..loved it!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: March 09 2012 04:40 pm