Why why why ? The wait is tooooooooooooooooooooo long
desperate
Reviewer: Bénédicte Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 10:49 pm
Please update. This story is so goood. I want to know what happens with Mari and Bear in the next chapter.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: November 20 2015 01:04 pm
Aw please is that it, you don't end like that, what is wrong
with you... Heaving on him and saying I'm pregnant... Give me more
Updates please... Thank u. :-)
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2013 11:50 am
OMG, please update. I hope all is well with you. I love this story so much. I want to see more of Bear and Mari, lol!
Reviewer: WOW! Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 25 2013 04:16 am
When do we get the next update to this story. I'm loving it, and I can't wait for more. Update soon please b/c I need my Bear/Mari fix.
Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]Date: November 18 2012 11:07 pm
I'm in love with this story cant wait till its complete
Reviewer: Tiffany York Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 19 2012 12:28 am
Oh man! Where is the rest? This is too good too not finish!
Reviewer: MeganRose Signed [Report This]Date: August 24 2012 07:51 am
More, please, lol!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 15 2012 03:31 am
What why did you stop there, oh gees (hitting my forehead)
Reviewer: the girl next door Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 04:56 pm
So glad that U R Back! This was a great update, can't wait 2 C what Bear's reaction is going 2 B about the baby!
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 04:32 pm
Scribe! How dare you stop there! Im on the edge of my seat. LOL
Excellent job as always!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 03:40 pm
Yet again you amaze me with the words you write, this was one of my favorite chapters so far. I mean reall Shaw who was the prick knew the truth about their relationship and the relationship she has with Bear. I loved the conversation between Grady and Monty about Mari. I am not to fond of the up chuck but she told him about her pregnancy without dancing around it or even avoiding it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 02:38 pm
Great update. Shaw redeemed himself with the talk that he had with Mari. I love Bear. Mari has a great family. The fact that her brother came to her home to clean it was awesome. NOw who is going to clean up her mess of thowing up on Bear...NASTY!!! Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 02:12 pm
Ahhhhh that was perfect!!!!!!!! Mores more more!!!! Lol
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 02:07 pm
Hm...not sure what to make of Shaw's about-face moment. First- he's spoiled racist jerk when Mari doesn't come back to him. And now, he's the supportive ex-lover? Could he actually be multi-layered?
Ah, Bear. Not the reunion you expected. I hope you're wearing leather boots so post-vomit clean up will be (relatively) easy.
Author's Response:
Shaw is one of my created babies...so you already know the answer to your question...yes ma'am he is multi - layered :)
Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 08:32 am
Montague is a mess. He is hilarious. Finally, Bear gets off his butt and makes it to Mari. And Mari, what a way to announce a pregnancy. This was a great chapter to read. I really like this story and how you're telling it.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: May 01 2012 07:57 am
Super update minus the vomit . So glad this reunion is under way between Bear and Mari.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 05:57 am
Well Thats one way to tell him.
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 05:51 am
Loved the ending, sooooo glad she did not wait to tell him! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 05:42 am
Mari, that is a nice way to tell Bear that he is going to a daddy. That was funny she threw up on his shoes!!! Shaw turns out not to be such ass, at least for a moment. This was marvelous!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 05:39 am
Just take ur time this chapter was good too!!!
really appreciate ur work
Reviewer: sharlene Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 04:22 am
Thank You!!! Thank You!!!! Thank You!!!!! I miss this couple.. Please give us some hot pregnancy hormone sex!!!!!
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 02:35 am
Scribe, I'm happy. I loved the update. You know we're greedy and want more. LOL I'll try to be patient. (Notice I said 'try')
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 01:34 am
Good update . I can't wait to see the fireworks when Bear shows up at Marisol's house . :D
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 01 2012 12:08 am