You enjoy torturing us, I know you do. LOL I am like falling off my chair for more and you give us just enough to hook us and then it ends and we are sll left on the floor. I love Nana Mae giving Bear the advice he needed to hear. Looking forward to the next chapter I hope it will be Bear and Marisol together in the same chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed
[Report This]Date: April 30 2012 10:49 pm
Scribe I have truly missed this story!! Bear has got it bad, Marisol has the cure. Go get your woman Bear!!! Next time can we get a longer update?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2012 10:36 pm
I'm begging your muse for more !!
Reviewer: BritneyKai Signed [Report This]Date: April 30 2012 10:10 pm
Missing this story, please update soon, this great!
Reviewer: Skip2641 Signed [Report This]Date: April 25 2012 08:13 pm
I hope everything is going alright with you, just jonesing for an update. When is Bear going to find his mate and his unborn cub?
Reviewer: zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 13 2012 03:39 am
YEAY!!!
I'm a sucker for baby makes three love stories!!! i'm happy for her... Cant wait for grady to catch up with her!!!!
Reviewer: sharlene Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2012 03:21 am
I'm confused. I've read all the chapters so far, but I feel like I missed something. Dont get me wrong I still liked it but this chapter started off so wierd like there was a chapter or two in between, it was really awkward.
Author's Response:
Not sure what to say...She's Having a Baby picks up right where Devil's Advocate ended...she's in the bar with her friends and brother...there were no happenings in between
Reviewer: nikol Anonymous
[Report This]Date: April 05 2012 03:07 am
Mari, is pregnant, doing the happy dance and in no way shape of form can it be Shaw's that prick. Bear is going to have a cub. Awww. Well now the fun has to stop because it comes down to the do I tell him, or I don't tell him, or when will I tell him. I think Bear and Mari really have some talking to do. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 02:15 pm
Oh, Scribe! You are too much! This story has me in its grip. I am so happy for Mari. I can't wait until Bear finds out. LOL and she's in love to boot!
OMG I can't wait until her family and friends meet bear!
I love Monty. "Heifer, you're pregnant" LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!
More soon pretty please!!!!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 11:14 am
Well, who's surprised? Halpern are genetically predisposed to making super-sperm. Moreover, they are boy-making swimmers too.
Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 08:54 am
Awwwww Bear and Mari are having a baby! Soooo excited for them!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 06:11 am
Thanks for a great update. My goodness, I can't believe that she is pregnant with Bear's baby. I bet Shaw think that the baby is his. What an ass Shaw is to call her the N word. Just amazing that she was with him for as long as she was.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 05:08 am
Bear's gonna be a daddy . I can't wait until he finds out . I hope Mari will go back to Bear soon and not keep the baby a secret.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 04:48 am
Yes, I knew it!! Grady boys were potent and she didn't stand a chance!!! Right now Mari is shell shocked, but do hope that goes back to get her man!! Grady would make a great daddy!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 04:12 am
Girl, you are on a roll, lol! But, I cannot wait until Bear and Mari meet up. I simply, absolutely cannot wait!! Loved it...
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 04:10 am
She's preggers, yes!!!! Shaw is such and should be skinned alive!! Just saying!! Love , love, love this update. I can't wait for her reactioned when she finds out that most definitely she's having Bear's baby. Oh yeah, that reaction will be the stuff of legend!! I can't wait!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 02:00 am
And thinks just got even more interesting in these parts. It seems to me that Grady (Bear) Halpern left more then a lasting effect on Mari. I say in 9 months Mari will be looking into the face of Bear yet again. Seeing as though their first time protection wasn't used and it didn't last too long. I am so looking forward to the next chapter. As for Shaw a good swift kick to the family jewels will get that nasty talk from his list. I love how Mari can't seem to move on from the FB page, but apparently she accidentally hit the accept button.
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 01:49 am
somebody is Preggers!!! LOL cant wait for her to realize it!!
Reviewer: sharlene Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2012 12:51 am
You temp me with a new exciting chapter just to leave me with this huge damn cliffhanger . Loved it . Update soon ... please !
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 03 2012 11:18 pm
OMG! I love this. Sick much Mari. LOL
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2012 09:55 pm
Did that ass really use the N-word??? And then as to get back together??? Really? Really.
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2012 09:54 pm
The facebook bit was brilliant! Love your updates as always!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2012 02:40 pm
in that last sentence, who is the he? Bear or Paul?
Reviewer: cuppacoffee Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 23 2012 01:03 pm
Thanks for a great update. Bear was determined to beat the heck out of his older brother. IN the end at leasr Paul helped Bear ind Mari. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2012 06:30 am
Really loving your story!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: March 23 2012 04:51 am