Title: Oil Change

Please let Mikhail win Tat’yana's love. I prefer their relationship more and I think you have more story with them.

Reviewer: Cherry101 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2012 04:49 pm

Title: Oil Change

I can't say I like the direction it's going. It looks like John doesn't have a chance with her with the way it's going now. With dad wanting the child he raised as his daughter to be with his son, oh well no need to root for John anymore. No chance in hell he ends up with her. Not to mention having John thinking about using her to get to them, now he is going to come out looking like the bad guy in a story full of criminals.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2012 04:10 pm

Title: Oil Change

Oh Mikhail, I need for you to be honest  I was waiting for a confrontation between he and Ana  Can't wait for that to happen because finally the story is moving in a direction i want.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 07 2012 02:27 pm

Title: Matching Rims

When are we getting a seen w/ Tati and Mikhail. I want her to be with him and not John. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Desi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 10 2012 03:49 am

Title: Collision Course

I want Ana to end up with Mikhail.

Reviewer: Desi Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 10 2012 01:39 am

Title: Matching Rims

Awesome update! So now he knows who she is...

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 11:02 pm

Title: Matching Rims

luv it................... can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:))

Reviewer: queen89 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 10:07 pm

Title: Matching Rims

Oh SNAP! I wonder whats going to happen!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 08:51 pm

Title: Matching Rims

He is looking back and has basically figured out who she is. She is not going to want to move back home. I can see her fighitng them all every step of the way, and being protected by all. Unfortunately she's head strong and will probably cause them all  headeaches.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2012 03:46 pm

Title: Stealthy Limo's

Damn! your stories are just awesome! Intriguing storyline, rich writing, and awesome charaters! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 19 2012 07:04 pm

Title: Stealthy Limo's

I love your story, please update soon; excellent job. I love John's character and Ana is lovely as well. I really like how she is not one dimensional and how strong yet vulnerable she is. 

 

Misha and Nik are also cool characters and I enjoy reading their dynamic relationship with Ana, especially Mish. Again, please update soon. 

Reviewer: sbrown Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 18 2012 08:40 pm

Title: The Fast & the Furious

When is Misha and Ana gonna get some air time? Team Misha all the way!!!

Reviewer: jackson1973 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 11:59 pm

Title: Stealthy Limo's

Ana is so stupid, why doesn't she lock her door?  Why does she feel that false of security? Both of your families the adopted as well as biological are deeply involved in criminal activies, so why does she believe that she's immune?  Now this Krill as bugged her apartment how is she going to deal with that.  That was nasty going through her drawers and taking and smelling her underwear.  I thought that they were related?  That was just nasty and perverted, Krill you are skank nasty and I can't wait for you to die.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 06:12 pm

Title: Stealthy Limo's

There is no new chapter updated.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 17 2012 04:18 pm

Title: Stealthy Limo's

wow, didn't see that coming.  still part of team mikhail !!  

Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 03 2012 04:56 am

Title: Stealthy Limo's

Wow!?!? I can't believe Ana and Kirill are related!! Great update!!

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 07:51 pm

Title: Stealthy Limo's

M y my my. please do not keep us in suspense too long.  So when will Misha and Ana hook up again?

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 05:09 pm

Title: Stealthy Limo's

Damn she should lock her doors....

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 02:09 pm

Title: Stealthy Limo's

Sometimes people through their own stupidity or enflated sense of importance bring problems to themselves.  What young, single woman lives the way Ana does?  Doesn't lock her doors?  Doesn't have a security system when she knows how the real world work?  Whatever happens to her will be her own fault.  I can't feel sorry for someone who is too arrogant or stupid to make simple changes to safeguard the one life she's been given.

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 06:12 am

Title: Stealthy Limo's

Very interesting as always can't wait to see where the story goes next!

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 04:28 am

Title: Stealthy Limo's

He may be related to her, but stupid is his name, if he plans on harming her. John told her to close her doors, I don't care who knows her family and how safe she feels, there are some crazy people in the world. What in the world is she going to do with two men wanting her? Loving John, and hate that the reason she may not choose him is because her dad died at his dad's hands. It seems so unfair. They know death is apart of the life they live, so it's to be expected. To hate him for it would not be right, but it would play into the hands of the brothers to keep her away fro him. Wonderful update.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 03:43 am

Title: Stealthy Limo's

Ana is so stupid, you always luck your doors.  Please don't let anything bad happen to Ana because of stupidity.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2012 03:23 am

Title: Need a Ride?

so i have finally caught up and wow, wow - can i say WOOOW!! even thoguh Misha is my number one i can't deny what John did and with handcuffs had me fanning my face - hell, i still do just thinking about it, loool!! that was a spanktastic update! and just when we thought life couldn't possibly get more complicated for Tati & John, a bomb was dropped in this update - John's dad, who seems to be a standup guy, killed Tati's dad *whistles* i don't how she will take that once she finds out...or i have an idea and it's not pretty. and if that's not "bad" enough once Misha hears Tati is seeing someone else, i can only imagine how he's going to react, lol!

other than that keep it up - i'm truely enjoying this story and thank you for it!!

Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 01:26 pm

Title: Need a Ride?

So the proverbial shit is about to hit the fan hunh? I don't know how Tati would ever be okay with knowing that John's father killed her father, cop or not. And when the twins, especially Misha, finds out she's been freakin a cop, there will be nothing but drama. I can't wait....oh, and can we please get a sex scene with Mikhail?

Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 02:04 am

Title: Need a Ride?

It's going to be ugly when Ana finds out that John's father killed her father.  It ain't going to well when the brothers find out that she's doing a cop.  I fear for John's saftey.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2012 11:47 pm



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