Reviews For Fatal
Title: No Turning Back...

OK....Fallan is Bat Crap Crazy and now Janice is going to suffer for it. I hope Darren gets himself together and heads her off at the pass. Thank you for the update. Please update again soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 19 2012 03:04 am

Title: No Turning Back...

Fallan is crazy as shit! And Darren was right, she does need help. And, oh no!! Janice!   :( Thanks for the update! This is one fun fic :)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you kindly. :)

Reviewer: abbokora Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 08:19 am

Title: No Turning Back...

Fallan is one scary chick. Killing an innocent dog is really sick. Darren sure can pick them. Unfortunetly that are crazy people out there like that. This story is very realistic.



Author's Response:

Thank you. 

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 05:50 am

Title: No Turning Back...

Wow what a wacko beeyotch! lol this story is so fatal attraction bunny in a pot oh no, lol



Author's Response:

lmao!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 03:05 am

Title: No Turning Back...

Fallan is even crazier than i thought! Wow man, I wonder why she's the way she is. They better watch their backs.



Author's Response:

thanks for reading.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 17 2012 02:48 am

Title: No Turning Back...

Darren brought this craziness on himself. I just hope Janice doesn't have to suffer because of his stupidity. What an idiot. Next time, pay attention to those little hints that something might be off.

Perfect story for the challenge, 'cause sista girrl is coo coo



Author's Response:

beyond coo coo. thanks for reading.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 16 2012 09:41 pm

Title: No Turning Back...

Fallon is INSANE!



Author's Response:

she really is.

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 16 2012 07:32 pm

Title: No Turning Back...

lovvvvvved it!

Author's Response:

:) thank you!

Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2012 04:29 pm

Title: No Turning Back...

I am he smartened up but it was a kittle to late, Fallon is crazy. Please din't let her kill Janice! Why hasn't he called the police? So stupid! Fallon should die soon!



Author's Response:

Your question willbe answered soon. And Fallan dying...hmm.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2012 03:24 pm

Title: No Turning Back...

So I'm really glad I gave this story a chance. Fallan is messed up, but goes to show a guy will say some jacked stuff to get his rocks off. I can't wait for all of this to come to a head!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2012 09:58 am

Title: If You Want It...

Thanks for a great update.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2012 05:39 pm

Title: If You Want It...

Great story. Fallon is crazy, actually she is obsessed. Darren was stupid to tell her he loved her just to get the goodies.



Author's Response:

Yes he was. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 10 2012 05:18 pm

Title: If You Want It...

Oh uh, He thought she was erotic but the girl is psychotic,lol



Author's Response:

NiaZ! rotfl!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 12:01 pm

Title: A Matter of Trust...

Hehe lol

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 06:59 am

Title: Always Up For A Challenge...

A challenge he should not have takened.



Author's Response:

[nods head in agreement] thanks for reading.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 06:24 am

Title: A Warning Comes Before Destruction...

Hopefully he will start listening to her now. Whomever the other person is seems to have serious problems.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 06:16 am

Title: If You Want It...

Darren is real stupid, Fallon is crazy.  Any person that wants you to push people that are important to you out of your life are not worth it.  Any woman that tells a man to say that I love you before she will sleep with you may require some medication!!!    I am praying that he comes to his senses but I know that it won't happen.  I am trying to stay with you with this story because I like.  Please don't make us wait as long for the next update.



Author's Response:

I'll try not to take so long next time. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 02:29 am

Title: A Warning Comes Before Destruction...

you need to correct your grammar errors, you're use of tenses are completely off



Author's Response:

I already knew, I just haven't gone back to correct it yet. Thank you.

Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 07:13 pm

Title: Always Up For A Challenge...

hmmmmmlol



Author's Response:

LOL!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 03:42 pm

Title: A Warning Comes Before Destruction...

I'm hooked! Let's get it poppin!lol



Author's Response:

HA! thanks for reading!

Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 03:23 pm

Title: If You Want It...

Fallan is baddd newsss!



Author's Response:

Very Bad.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 01:19 pm

Title: If You Want It...

Great update!



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 05 2012 09:37 am

Title: A Matter of Trust...

Fallan needs to go!!! I cant wait for Janice and Darren to hook up!!

 



Author's Response:

Hmm...we'll have to see about that. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07 2012 06:11 am

Title: A Matter of Trust...

My goodness, Fallon is terrifying, though I don't think her crazy ass is necessarily wrong about Darren and Janice. I can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: ribboninthesky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2012 04:32 am

Title: A Matter of Trust...

Can't wait for Fallen to turn on her nine shades of Crazy .I'm really liking this story . Good job . Please update soon . : )



Author's Response:

I can't wait either! lol!

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2012 01:37 am



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