Title: Chapter 4:Las Vegas

Janice, is losing who she is!!  Alcohol is not her friend she is stupid and niave without adding alcohol into the mix.  Janice keep your eyes on the prize!!  Remember people will like for you or not no need to drink or use drugs to fit.  Too much abuse and your voice won't sound good anymore.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2012 11:13 pm

Title: Chapter 3:Singing In The Shower and A Kiss

Loving the Story!!! Great writing. Just one question is this story taking place in the 80's or did you move the characters into modern day?



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Reviewer: choconilla89 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2012 10:31 pm

Title: Chapter 3:Singing In The Shower and A Kiss

I still don't trust Betty!!!  Axl is attracted to her so I am wondering if she doesn't give up the goodies would he still help her.  I don't think that Janice is wrong I think that she is far too trusting.  Axl Rose and his band sing and entirely different genre.  Axl even said that Janice has a soulful voice, so can he really helpful to her?  Thank you for update!!



Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! And your welcome.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2012 03:29 am

Title: Characters: Sorry for no pic, just links.

I am not liking this Betty ho, the child is drinking now! The next step is drugs. She needs ti widwn her circle of friends, one who won't throw you under a bus!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06 2012 02:28 pm

Title: Chapter 2: A Gig and a Party

I hope that they ddn't give her a roofie or something.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06 2012 12:29 pm

Title: Characters: Sorry for no pic, just links.

Good pictures.  Thanks



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Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2012 09:18 pm

Title: Chapter 1:Intro

Good start to the story.  It will be interesting to see if she makes it in Hollywood.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2012 09:16 pm

Title: Chapter 1:Intro

Great start.

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Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2012 08:39 am

Title: Chapter 1:Intro

What is Janice's talent?  Can she sing, dance or play an instrument?  Did any from the school that she graduated from tell how about how hard it is to break into show business.  This story should be interesting I just hope that she has a good head on her shoulders and doesn't circum to the lure of Hollywood, you know drugs and alcohol.  More please!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll get to all of that info in the next chapter.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2012 05:27 am



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