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Title: Meet the Cast

Love the pics.

 Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 02:43 pm
Title: How it Began

Brian sounds like an ass. Kenny just might be the guy to help Kelsey win back her confidence.

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Date: July 07 2012 02:42 pm
Title: Meet the Cast

Nice cast pics!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 06:43 am
Title: How it Began

Great start so far. I'm looking forward to reading more.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 06:10 am
Title: How it Began

I like it so far.  The relationship between her and Mel is great comic relief!

 Reviewer: Drea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 05:50 am
Title: How it Began

Great 1st chapter!

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 05:48 am
Title: Meet the Cast

Me likey!! More please.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I will!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 03:40 am
Title: Meet the Cast

Nice pics.  Thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I saw this hot Thai guy the other day and it got me to thinking! :)

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 02:31 am
Title: How it Began

Good start to the story.  Thanks



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Thank you!

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 02:31 am
Title: Meet the Cast

Look at that man's abs, I could just lick em like a ice cream cone!!  Hound doggy!!



Author's Response:

LOL! I know right!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 02:29 am
Title: How it Began

Be still my beating heart another story with a asian male lead!!!  Thank you, thank you, Thank you!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!  

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 02:28 am
Title: How it Began

I can't tell when people are talking, there are too few quotation marks and the format is all off. Its confusing. Also VERY cliche.

I realize that you are happy and nervous to get your ideas out there, but PLEASE try getting a beta, you need one.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and critiquing!  I'm a former scientist and I'm now in pharmacy school and writing is not my first speciality.  I appreciate the constructive criticism, but if I don't know what the problem is then how am I suppose to fix it?  If you're telling me something is cliche, then exactly which part is cliche because I wrote this from my own personal experiences.  As far as the formatting goes, I submitted this from my iPAD and didnt realize the formatting was off until after I submitted it.  Again, thanks for your response, but if you don't like the story that's perfectly fine.  There are plenty of other stories and plenty of other writers on here that may be to your liking. 

 Reviewer: Brenda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 01:23 am
Title: Meet the Cast

more please! i love it so far



Author's Response:

Thank you! I will!

 Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 12:30 am
Title: How it Began

Nice. I like it. Forget about Brian, she has an MM fighter now.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review!  I appreciate it!

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 09:30 pm
Title: How it Began

I love bw/am stories. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Me too!  I saw this Thai guy and it got me to thinking! :)

 Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 09:29 pm
Title: How it Began

Very Nice!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

 Reviewer: Aiwen01 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 09:20 pm
Title: How it Began

Good start. I can't wait to read more and I am ready for the date. Update soon please

Author's Response:

Thank you!  An update is coming soon!

 Reviewer: primesgirl4 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 06 2012 08:50 pm


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