I'm so sorry to hear what happened to you and your family.. I'm glad to hear that no one was hurt.. I'm sure it will take time to get over this scare.. We'll be here patiently waiting for the next chapter..
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed
[Report This]Date: July 01 2013 12:29 am
I missed this story. Sorry about what happened and glad that you are ok.
Reviewer: Aiwen Signed [Report This]Date: June 30 2013 09:45 pm
I wish the would stop speaking to her that way it's annoying the hell out of me. I don't understand why Carla doesn't say something to Aza or Vita. I don't think Vita would appreciate the way his servants are treating her.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: April 20 2013 08:06 pm
When will someone notice that Vita mood swings come with the headaches? Carla really needs to get a backbone for real and stand up to someone. Stop letting the servants treat and talk to her any kind of way.
Glad you are back looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2013 06:59 pm
I just started reading this, don't know how I missed it, but this first chapter already has sucked me in completely.
Bravo!
Reviewer: Tootall Signed [Report This]Date: March 30 2013 04:26 pm
I am so glad to see that I'm not the only one that dislikes the way they man handle Carla and think it's okay.. It's not okay.. Vita needs to find out what happen to Carla and handle it accordingly..
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed
[Report This]Date: January 22 2013 03:00 am
Someone needs to tell Vita what happened to Carla.. Has he anyone that is truly loyal to him??
Just whan the chapter is getting good it's over.. Bummer!!! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: January 21 2013 04:48 pm
Awesome update!!!
It's good to see Carla standing up for herself and Aza trying to show more emotions towards her.. I think once they both realze Vita is sick they will help him find a way to get better.. I'm not so sure we can trust Vita guard..
Looking forward to the next update.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: December 09 2012 08:06 pm
I love this story but there is one thing I don't understand why do the princes let the help talk to an treat Clara any old kind of way.. I know they think of her as cattle or someone beneath them but it's not cool at all the way they treat her. They should at least have some fear that if they treat her too badly one of the princes would punish them.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]Date: November 10 2012 05:18 pm
I LOVE THIS STORY. NEVER STOP. Okay phycho phase over. But no joke I love it. I imagen the story as an anime and cant get enough. :) waiting for the next dose for my addiction. Take your time your doing great! :)
Reviewer: Karrotpulp Signed [Report This]Date: November 07 2012 02:37 am
Well, this side of Vita is like able, and I hope he shows that side to Cara. I can't wait to see how Aza reacts when he comes bak. He and Cara were spending time together and he really liked doing the horrizontal mambo with her:) Now Vita seems to want to cut in on the fun:D
Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 09 2012 01:25 am
Nice start.
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2012 01:29 am
i love this!
Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2012 08:15 pm
OMG. I read this story after the last update and it is now a new addiction. I fear for Aza and Carla, if Vita has the madness.
Reviewer: Drea Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2012 02:51 am
I kinda feel bad for Vita. It obvious that he really like Aza just like Aza is developing feelings for Carla. Neither know how to express them. I also think Carla and Aza interaction is so adorable. I'm very happy u decide to keep writing this story and dnt stop till this is complete! Lol
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you for tour kind words.
Reviewer: Kaykay Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 05:30 pm
I meant to give you 10 stars >.<
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks, but your words was more then enough.
Reviewer: DarkandLovely Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 03:13 am
Oh thank you thank you thank you for updating! Omg... Carla... Vita is one crazy son of a b*tch. Oh lord a mercy... It gives me comfort that Aza *whether he realizes it or not* somewhat cares for Carla. Vita is sick for raping him.. omg. Sick bastard.
How the hell is he going to use her for "breeding" like some animal?! God, I hate that word... it brings me back to the slave master days and that's exactly what Aza and Carla are to him... slaves. I only hope that they find a way out of this together...
Please update soon! Oh and your formatting is fine once you get everything together so don't let some people discourage you. It is a very good story and don't stop. Please continue, I'm hooked. <3
Author's Response:
You are the writer of all my fave stories. I'm sorry I don't really look at the Author's names very often. I just look for the story....man I hope you get to update soon. I just decided to click on your link and low and behold you are one of the writers I have been waiting for. Thank you for your words, I will admit that I was a little down. I know she was just trying to be helpful. Thank you for your words they really made me happy. I mean seriously I am crying tears of happiness, because I just want to connect with people and share. Your review has been nothing but inspiring for me to write the next chapter. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: DarkandLovely Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 03:12 am
Wow this is really cool!!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 01:11 am
Very good.... no scratch that... EXTREMELY good and intriguing....... Sigh can't wait for the rest soooooo.... PRONTO!!!!!! XDD
Reviewer: Nutella Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2012 01:28 am
Are the Sato just taking females of child bearing age? That is the inly that I can their race continuing as two males can't procreate. Unless their phisoligy is different from the male of just about every species. Aza was captured and enslaved himself or was he sold by his family? Are Aza and the General from the same planet? This story is good, keep the updates coming please!
Author's Response:
First off I want to say thank you. You have given me two great reviews. I'm gad to see that so many people are enjoying the story so far. I really was scared to put this up here. I really didn't think the story would be received as well as it has been, that really motivates me to keep going.
Now to answer your questions. The general(known as Vita) and Aza are from the same planet. There two races were at war with one another. The end result being that they nearly destroyed one another. So they came to an agreement to become one race 'The Satork'. Hence Aza and Vita going betrothed to one another. Aza isn't enslaved in a traditional sense, but he is a slave to his duties I guess. As for the Sato they are considered hermaphrodites, but thanks to all the toxins from the war, there genes had mutated. Now they are either becoming sterile or becoming a life giver as they are called (becoing just able to give life but not bear it) now the Sato'swhole culture is crumbling. While the Junirk have lost mostly their women, so yes they are kidnapping mostly females. They still are still taking some males, but they mostly need the females.
I hope this helps thanks again.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2012 03:30 pm
OMG!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2012 11:49 pm
I really like the beginning of your story. I'm not a big fan of sci-fi so I don't usually read them but this is very intriguing. I'm ready to know what happens next. Great start.
Author's Response:
Thank yous so much, that really means alot to me. I hope I don't disappoint you.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 24 2012 10:04 pm
Wow, that's a really good beginning. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much.
Reviewer: Tanya Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 24 2012 11:48 am
Wow he is a creepy idiot. How old is the captive. She seems like she could be in her twenties but I don't think that she is a child. Thanks
Author's Response:
No she isn't a child. In fact she is turning twenty two soon. The easiest way to describe her is just the fact that she is that weird imature kid who never grew up. Even now that the world his falling to it's knees, she holds on to her childish antics and comforts becasue that is all she has right now.
Carla is a mixture of me when I was a teeanger and also she has alot of my faults. I was kind of imature, *carrying my stuff simba around in my backpack", and I am clumsy, and basically blind. I just wanted to create a character that I could relate too mostly. Thanks alos for your review it made my day.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2012 07:22 am