Great chapter but I'm not feeling the two dudes part...
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 06:42 am
Thanks for a good update. Does bonded mean that they are married?
Author's Response:
Yes it does. Thank you for reviewing.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: July 29 2012 05:57 pm
I love this!
It's refreshing to see some Sci-Fi in here!
Hope your MUSE is FULLY FUNCTIONING because I can't wait for an update ASAP!
What's happening to Carla/Lanie?
What will happen to the General and Aza/Carla?
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P.S. Can you make the dialogue in seperated lines?
To give my eyes the impression that your (next) update is longer,hahaha :D
Can't blame me I just can't stop reaading :P
Author's Response:
Wow...thank you! That means alot to me that you are liking the story so much.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: July 29 2012 08:25 am
Scifi I love this story is very interesting please continue
Author's Response:
Thank you very much.
Reviewer: TheMaelstrom Signed [Report This]Date: July 28 2012 06:47 pm
I hope this story doesn't contain Mpreg. I can deal with homoeroticism, but not that.
These are some weirdly described 'men'. I can see you're really into anime. lol
I hope Carla gets Lanie back soon. Poor thing.
Author's Response:
Well it has mention I guess you could say, since the Sato or both male and female. Though those days are growing ever slimmer the Sato are strictly becoming just regular ol' males. As for the Mpreg....you don't know how happy it makes me that someone else knows what that is. As for Lanie she will get it back...soon.
[Report This]Date: July 28 2012 12:31 am
So how are the General and Aza supposed to create life?
Author's Response:
Aza's people are actually Hermaphrodites. However due to the war of thier two races, the Sato (Aza's people) genes have become mutated. So alot of his people is sterile now or can't give birth anymore. Aza and the general can't actually create life, becasue Aza's gentics have mutated as well. They both can only give life, so they are actually only getting bonded in name only to create peace. When it came time for them to make babies they would actually just pick somone and have the female have a baby from each.
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 27 2012 07:41 pm
Great job. There aren't too many sci fi stories on here, thanks for the addition. Just don't make us wait too long for an update.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much. I will try to update as soon as possible,.
Reviewer: annette Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 27 2012 06:04 pm