I am enjoying this story at first I was a bit confused but now I am clear and enjoying myself.
Vita is going to be a problem I see so far but maybe that will change.
Thank you for sharing.
Happy writing.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2012 02:48 pm
Wow okay I can deal that his a unisex thangy dude...I heart this story!
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 07:04 am
Hey, really liked the start of your story, looking forwatd to an update
Reviewer: Ro Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 06 2012 11:35 pm
great job....love the story
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2012 09:19 am
Interesting story so far. More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2012 06:21 am
Awe...
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 02:12 pm
Me likey!! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 06:58 am
I don't really care for Vita. I do like that you showed the changed Aza is going through.
I can't give this chapter much of a review because it was hard to read. The huge blocks of text make it diffifult to read and is bad on the eyes. Please work on the formatting, and seperate the text so that it's easier to identify who's speaking...much like in a novel.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 06:49 am
The general is not going to like this last development. So they steal humans to produce children with. Is the general a homosexual because he is definitely obsessed with Aza. Aza ain't thinking about him but he sure feeling Carla. Looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2012 04:06 am