Vita is a vile mitch who will never have Aza's love. Carla and Aza will burn up the sheets.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: March 30 2013 06:26 pm
So, I'm not even gonna lie, when I saw this story I squealed and clapped from excitement and my goodness, i was not disappointed. Those poor babies. I almost, ALMOST feel sorry for Vita. He's a colossal dickwad, jerk, asshole, and a shitface. Anyway, thanks for the update! :) I'm really looking forward to your ext update!
Author's Response:
Oh, wow. I hope I dont disappoint you. Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: abbokora Signed [Report This]Date: August 15 2012 03:26 am
Vita really disgusts me. I think he feels like if he rapes Aza enough, he'll develop feelings for him. But it's really a power thing and I'm sure that he'll be using Carla next. I feel sorry for Aza and I don't get that he likes "men" from him. And she's so innocent that I couldn't see it being anything but forced. I keep looking at tIhe "threesome" warning and wondering how that's going to come into play. I'm still liking this story because it's different and well-written.
Author's Response:
Hehe..thank you. Your review really made my day. I'm struggling cause I really am nervous about my writing, but seeing your review made me want to be more confident.
Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]Date: August 14 2012 05:36 am
I even fainted myself...Look !
There is so many question that I have to ask...Dont know which one to choose?
Can't wait to see an update.
Author's Response:
Haha. Thank you very much.
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed
[Report This]Date: August 13 2012 07:54 pm
Interesting update!! Vita is a sicko!! He raped Aza and im sure he'll rape Carla if he wants to. He seems to get off on control over them. Does he really think they will love him after his pyscho behavior? He doesn't know the meaning of the word love and will never know if he doesn't change his behavior!! Poor Aza!! No wonder he's the way he is after dealing with Vita. Sad situation.
Author's Response:
Yes it is. Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 03:59 am
Oh..I was hoping for some redemption for Vita, but alas I think he's just going to be..the villain...Oh well..loving this story and waiting patiently for hopefully a longer update!
Author's Response:
Well, don't lose hope for him yet. Thank you for the review.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 03:49 am
Vita is straight crazy.
Author's Response:
Yeah...he is, though there is a reason behind it.
Reviewer: nightseer Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 03:02 am
Welp, I'm done with this story. Not because I dislike it, but because I refuse to try to read it. The formatting of this story is ridiculous. It's not difficult to break up a large paragraphs. When you copy and past it a chapter, press preview, reread your work, press enter to seperate sentences to start a new paragraph, and once finished press sumbit or whatever.
I'm sorry if this comes off as harsh, but it's very incosiderate to post these huge paragraphs, with multiple character's speaking. Even if it's a long paragraph, there should only be one speaker per paragraph, just as there are in books.
Author's Response:
I am sorry to hear that. This is the way it makes sense to me, and I am sorry that it may come off as confusing. I am trying my best and I am trying to be considerate. I do edit as best I can, and have others edit for me as well. I truly do thank you for your words, they really have been very nice to hear. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2012 02:38 am