That's a bad man a very bad man! luv this story
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: August 21 2012 01:21 am
*See even the cat is begging for an update *
I cannot critic your work O_o
But I can encourage you^_^
Reviewer: Insomniac Sioj Signed [Report This]Date: August 19 2012 02:51 am
Vita has the sickness! I'm loving this story!
Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]Date: August 18 2012 03:09 am
I really, really like this story! I think Vita is awful! Hopefully Carla and Aza can get along. Can't wait to read more, please post soon and make them longer ;-)
Date: August 17 2012 09:55 pm
LOVEE THIS!!! It's so different! Update soon!
Reviewer: leah Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 17 2012 06:40 pm
Okay our boy Vita is going made...
Apparently they did not get past the mutation that the toxin caused the Sato clan as they thought
Where as the mutation for the Sato are physical the mutation for the Junirk clan is mental. It took awhile to manifest apparently. I wonder if there is something that can reverse the effects.
Enjoying the story thank you for sharing.
Happy writing
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2012 03:38 pm
Interesting update.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2012 06:38 am
I'm happy that I decided to check and see if the formatting was changed, so THANK YOU! for adding more paragraphs. It was easier and smother to read, not to mention much better on the eyes.
Is Vita going to have the two old rulers killed?
Carla and Aza are cute together. I'm looking forward to a scene of the three of them that's...I don't normal. Like, just the three of them together, no beating or anything else.
Thanks again for better formatting the chapters. I do like this story and was sad to give it up.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: August 17 2012 05:39 am
I can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:
Thank you! I will do my beat.
Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 10:05 pm
Please more Aza and Carla,I'm also wondering if Carla is mentally challenged in some way because the way she acts and talk is very childlike for a young lady of twenty-one and wonder if her life circumstances and tragedy play a big part in the way she is...
Author's Response:
Your right. Carla is the way that she is for many different reasons. She isn't challenged, she is just herself. She never really had time to grow up nor does she want too. She just wants to be happy and will take what she can get out of life.
Reviewer: cocoablue Signed [Report This]Date: August 16 2012 07:39 pm